for TORN8/5/2021 c10 Mina Xu
Please continue.. Love it
Please continue.. Love it
2/9/2021 c11 Itachan
I'm torn...TORN! I don't know which pairing to choose. As of current, I'm more inclined to ClowTomoyo. Though I get the feeling it is going to be super sad..just going to wait for your updates I supposed. It is very rare to find the pairing of ClowTomoyo without reference to EriolTomoyo, so I'm really excited to read this story. The shopping scene already got me, so cute!
I'm torn...TORN! I don't know which pairing to choose. As of current, I'm more inclined to ClowTomoyo. Though I get the feeling it is going to be super sad..just going to wait for your updates I supposed. It is very rare to find the pairing of ClowTomoyo without reference to EriolTomoyo, so I'm really excited to read this story. The shopping scene already got me, so cute!
5/7/2020 c9 James Birdsong
Cool. Amusing
Cool. Amusing
5/5/2020 c8 James Birdsong
Good seven chapters
Good seven chapters
11/7/2014 c1 
22Tomoyo Daidouji-Hiiragizawa
KIndly work on paragraph spacing. It's kind of difficult to read when every thing is squeezed in
22Tomoyo Daidouji-HiiragizawaKIndly work on paragraph spacing. It's kind of difficult to read when every thing is squeezed in
10/6/2014 c4 Tomoyo Daidouji-Hiiragizawa
The story is getting interesting. I/m just concerned with the character or paragraph spacing. It's too compressed. It makes me a bit dizzy to follow. _
The story is getting interesting. I/m just concerned with the character or paragraph spacing. It's too compressed. It makes me a bit dizzy to follow. _
7/28/2014 c2 Reviewer
I think you should unbold all the dialogue (hurts my eyess) and make every speaking line a new paragraph! Just a heads up and don't forget common grammar xD
I think you should unbold all the dialogue (hurts my eyess) and make every speaking line a new paragraph! Just a heads up and don't forget common grammar xD