for Scourgify4/8/2016 c1 
2TheDoctorDonna10
thank you saying that Ron was ooc in this. I get when people think that Ron is a butthead. this is awesome.
2TheDoctorDonna10thank you saying that Ron was ooc in this. I get when people think that Ron is a butthead. this is awesome.
12/13/2014 c1 15not really sane fairy
I don't usually do next-gen, so I don't know whether is was good or not by those standards, but I liked it. I like how Scorp was this shy guy, opposite from what you expect. Well, he is Gryff, so that would make a difference... Oh and you accidentaly tagged Albus D. instead of Albus S. P.
15not really sane fairyI don't usually do next-gen, so I don't know whether is was good or not by those standards, but I liked it. I like how Scorp was this shy guy, opposite from what you expect. Well, he is Gryff, so that would make a difference... Oh and you accidentaly tagged Albus D. instead of Albus S. P.
9/13/2014 c1 bluehairedweasley
This was really good and the kiss was adorable! I really like the characterisation of Al and the characterisation of Ron makes sense for this fic.
This was really good and the kiss was adorable! I really like the characterisation of Al and the characterisation of Ron makes sense for this fic.
7/31/2014 c1 2don't-bite-the-bolt
Amazing fic! Ron was a bit OOC, but I understand that you did it so the story would make sense. This, honestly, is fabulous. I love Albus, he's hilarious, and Scorpius and Rose are brilliant as well.
don't-bite-the-bolt
2don't-bite-the-boltAmazing fic! Ron was a bit OOC, but I understand that you did it so the story would make sense. This, honestly, is fabulous. I love Albus, he's hilarious, and Scorpius and Rose are brilliant as well.
don't-bite-the-bolt
7/27/2014 c1 PhoenixFireGirl023
Ummm Hate to be a hater and whatnot and I really did think this was a good fan fiction, but it is said that both Albus and Scorpius were sorted into Slytherin not into Gryffindor and Dobby dies in the book so how could he still be alive in the new generation even if this is a fan fiction you can't have a flaw like that in here because that only serves to make people mad. While Im not exactly angry that you would have a mistake like that in here, I hate it when fan fiction authors add things that just arent true or could not happen because to some level the books must be followed and this is one of those times. Im really sorry to put it so bluntly like that because I really did engoy your fan fiction.
Ummm Hate to be a hater and whatnot and I really did think this was a good fan fiction, but it is said that both Albus and Scorpius were sorted into Slytherin not into Gryffindor and Dobby dies in the book so how could he still be alive in the new generation even if this is a fan fiction you can't have a flaw like that in here because that only serves to make people mad. While Im not exactly angry that you would have a mistake like that in here, I hate it when fan fiction authors add things that just arent true or could not happen because to some level the books must be followed and this is one of those times. Im really sorry to put it so bluntly like that because I really did engoy your fan fiction.
7/27/2014 c1 evilpika
The story is really cute & I love how much Scorpius stammers & blushes in this fic haha
The story is really cute & I love how much Scorpius stammers & blushes in this fic haha