for Shooting Stars11/6/2018 c1 Mamamama99
That was interesting to say the least. I do like this take on Astoria, pictured as a dreamy yet witty girl. If anything, I would have liked some continuation to this, maybe about how they could have lived as a couple of (working ?) adults. Goes really nicely with the song too.
That was interesting to say the least. I do like this take on Astoria, pictured as a dreamy yet witty girl. If anything, I would have liked some continuation to this, maybe about how they could have lived as a couple of (working ?) adults. Goes really nicely with the song too.
8/30/2014 c2 
318CUtopia
This was very interesting!
I never thought of it this way because the burdens of the Slytherins were spared out mostly...
The path leading Pansy to being broken because she did not fit in, because she had a forbidden love was very logically and you gave the right portion of emotions in
Congratulations to your 2nd Place finish! :)
318CUtopiaThis was very interesting!
I never thought of it this way because the burdens of the Slytherins were spared out mostly...
The path leading Pansy to being broken because she did not fit in, because she had a forbidden love was very logically and you gave the right portion of emotions in
Congratulations to your 2nd Place finish! :)
8/30/2014 c1 CUtopia
I really liked this one, it creates a good background story and explains how they found each other. It is also a nice twist to let Draco help Daphne to escape...
This was a good mix of a bit humor and drama and emotions and of course a good pairing!
Well, I think it would be useless to say that I really like it because this put you into 2nd round ;) :D
I really liked this one, it creates a good background story and explains how they found each other. It is also a nice twist to let Draco help Daphne to escape...
This was a good mix of a bit humor and drama and emotions and of course a good pairing!
Well, I think it would be useless to say that I really like it because this put you into 2nd round ;) :D
8/13/2014 c1 6SoTimeless
I loved it. It was so deep but I am a bit confused. When you said Daphne's bones were found under the black lake, was it her actual bones? And is the Laurel Espione at Beauxbatons actually Daphne?
6SoTimelessI loved it. It was so deep but I am a bit confused. When you said Daphne's bones were found under the black lake, was it her actual bones? And is the Laurel Espione at Beauxbatons actually Daphne?
8/7/2014 c1 49slenderpanda2
Beautiful. You're so incredibly talented, and this was so well written. Wows I can't wait to see what you come up with for the final, because this was really, really moving and descriptive and generally perfect. Wow.
49slenderpanda2Beautiful. You're so incredibly talented, and this was so well written. Wows I can't wait to see what you come up with for the final, because this was really, really moving and descriptive and generally perfect. Wow.
8/4/2014 c1 161Lillielle
This is the loveliest Draco/Astoria story, I love it so much. I love that they rescue Daphne. Draco's and Astoria's repartee is great (especially the conversation about fairy tales aha, Draco has a point there... :p ). It's great. :3
161LillielleThis is the loveliest Draco/Astoria story, I love it so much. I love that they rescue Daphne. Draco's and Astoria's repartee is great (especially the conversation about fairy tales aha, Draco has a point there... :p ). It's great. :3
7/28/2014 c1 Niaya
It was a great story detailed and well done and very explanatory I really enjoyed it...
It was a great story detailed and well done and very explanatory I really enjoyed it...