for Leaf3/31/2016 c12 Guest
Nice to see that your continuing! I always wanted to read Leaf's POV when he finds out Sun's blind.
Nice to see that your continuing! I always wanted to read Leaf's POV when he finds out Sun's blind.
3/16/2016 c12 
6tsukiyo haruna
Eh? I always thought that the eyes test is when they're back to Leaf Bud city...
And I thought you only write about one volume?
6tsukiyo harunaEh? I always thought that the eyes test is when they're back to Leaf Bud city...
And I thought you only write about one volume?
11/17/2015 c9 7the freelance dreamer
Really enjoyed this chapter, especially Leaf's explanation for knowing the difference between a murderous glare and a look of affection xD I thought he was going to say he knew it from personal experience from how he alternately looked at her but... his explanation is infinitely better xD
7the freelance dreamerReally enjoyed this chapter, especially Leaf's explanation for knowing the difference between a murderous glare and a look of affection xD I thought he was going to say he knew it from personal experience from how he alternately looked at her but... his explanation is infinitely better xD
10/22/2015 c1 13Yuki-Infel
Whoa, this version of Leaf is a sadist *sweatdrop*
It's still nice to see some changes from canon, though. After all, no one is completely kind.
13Yuki-InfelWhoa, this version of Leaf is a sadist *sweatdrop*
It's still nice to see some changes from canon, though. After all, no one is completely kind.
10/20/2015 c11 6tsukiyo haruna
aww leaf, don't turn him to a porcupine yet~ haha
lol about that demon wolf part, i laugh so hard...! haha i bet it's the demon wolf that sun froze and the ice melt only to be froze again... lol
i also love the letter... and the way leaf replying it in his mind...
6tsukiyo harunaaww leaf, don't turn him to a porcupine yet~ haha
lol about that demon wolf part, i laugh so hard...! haha i bet it's the demon wolf that sun froze and the ice melt only to be froze again... lol
i also love the letter... and the way leaf replying it in his mind...
5/4/2015 c10 tsukiyo haruna
She didn't 'affectionately gaze' at those two anymore,
Who are "those two"?
Oh I love the chapter but too short! I want more
She didn't 'affectionately gaze' at those two anymore,
Who are "those two"?
Oh I love the chapter but too short! I want more
1/27/2015 c8 Fandoom-strikes
thanks for the update !
and stone and ice are allowed to be nice behind closed doors .
mostly because sun says that stone normally takes care of diplomacy between the two fractions . ( omg , my english sucks ... )
I already imagined judgement packing sun's stuff . the demage is done . judge is the only one sun talks to about his essential oils and creams and stuff ( even if judge does not want to ).
thanks for the update !
and stone and ice are allowed to be nice behind closed doors .
mostly because sun says that stone normally takes care of diplomacy between the two fractions . ( omg , my english sucks ... )
I already imagined judgement packing sun's stuff . the demage is done . judge is the only one sun talks to about his essential oils and creams and stuff ( even if judge does not want to ).
1/14/2015 c8 tsukiyo haruna
haha! lol checking the heart beat, that part is a bit funny. oh, i could imagine judge packing the sweet into ice's bag for sun, it's a very sweet scene to imagine. please write more!
haha! lol checking the heart beat, that part is a bit funny. oh, i could imagine judge packing the sweet into ice's bag for sun, it's a very sweet scene to imagine. please write more!
1/13/2015 c8 Gimei
I feel like you had a higher typo level during this chapter, apart from the large number of typos I can't complain. I enjoyed the chapter xD.
I feel like you had a higher typo level during this chapter, apart from the large number of typos I can't complain. I enjoyed the chapter xD.
12/31/2014 c1 Guest
dude!awesome! write more
dude!awesome! write more
12/18/2014 c6 Gimei
Tries once again to add story to alert list. Thx for the update and thx for the notice :D. Still enjoying it.
Tries once again to add story to alert list. Thx for the update and thx for the notice :D. Still enjoying it.
12/14/2014 c6 7the freelance dreamer
may i just say that i really enjoy your characterization of Leaf? he may be "nice," but i like that he suffers a much broader range of emotions - he's become very dynamic in your version. also, i love the reference to "A Vice Captain's Tale" and how leaf's V-C has to look after Leaf's finances to keep him from going completely broke xD
7the freelance dreamermay i just say that i really enjoy your characterization of Leaf? he may be "nice," but i like that he suffers a much broader range of emotions - he's become very dynamic in your version. also, i love the reference to "A Vice Captain's Tale" and how leaf's V-C has to look after Leaf's finances to keep him from going completely broke xD
12/13/2014 c6 Fandoom-strikes
thanks for the new chapters !
I really love leaf commenting on what ann says " probably the result of befriending a necromancer " XD
oh scheming ... I'm soory leaf you're not gonna beat sun at that even with the help of your princess. ITt just starts with her not even calling you " despicable bastard "
can't wait for the next chapter ,
isa
thanks for the new chapters !
I really love leaf commenting on what ann says " probably the result of befriending a necromancer " XD
oh scheming ... I'm soory leaf you're not gonna beat sun at that even with the help of your princess. ITt just starts with her not even calling you " despicable bastard "
can't wait for the next chapter ,
isa