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6/24/2017 c5 Harmony-Caprice
Plz update soon
9/26/2015 c1 Critic Kritic
You need a beta reader badly. There is spelling errors all over this first chapter. You have a bad habit of also saying "He did this. He did that" instead of switching it up to using the persons names or using descriptive wording.

Please find one. It's hard for me to get through this without wanting to find another better written fic to read.
8/12/2015 c1 anon
You need a beta reader badly. There is spelling errors all over this first chapter. You have a bad habit of also saying "He did this. He did that" instead of switching it up to using the persons names or using descriptive wording.

Please find one. It's hard for me to get through this without wanting to find another better written fic to read.
9/28/2014 c3 18Allyson Dark
This is really good
8/29/2014 c2 1RachelBarbraBerry
Good start
7/30/2014 c2 cannibal corncob
Interesting. Please continue.
7/30/2014 c2 Guest
very cool
7/30/2014 c2 2neaori
Now I really want to see where you are heading to. You got me hooked so, please, update ASAP!

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