
9/28/2022 c76 Guest
Love this chapter, majorkill is the goat.
Love this chapter, majorkill is the goat.
9/30/2022 c76
17deadpoolhulk
that. was. phenomenal!
also as a side note? having started rereading this entire fic again and being half way through the seige of terathalon when the update came was a good feeling 'cause it meant i was fully in the mindset of this AU again
but yes. This was possibly one of the most exciting and awesome stories yet! just this feeling of everything escalating again and again in ways i never saw coming. you're a genius. and THAT ENDING!

that. was. phenomenal!
also as a side note? having started rereading this entire fic again and being half way through the seige of terathalon when the update came was a good feeling 'cause it meant i was fully in the mindset of this AU again
but yes. This was possibly one of the most exciting and awesome stories yet! just this feeling of everything escalating again and again in ways i never saw coming. you're a genius. and THAT ENDING!
9/29/2022 c76
10AraelDranoth
Absolutely bloody brilliant chapter. I really hope that we will see some more of the Loyalist Primarchs soon. I'm hoping to read some more about Fulgrim, Morty and perhaps Pertruabo.

Absolutely bloody brilliant chapter. I really hope that we will see some more of the Loyalist Primarchs soon. I'm hoping to read some more about Fulgrim, Morty and perhaps Pertruabo.
9/29/2022 c75 AraelDranoth
Absolutely fantastic stuff. This fic is an internet legend for a reason. Keep up the magnificent work.
Absolutely fantastic stuff. This fic is an internet legend for a reason. Keep up the magnificent work.
9/28/2022 c74 AraelDranoth
Another fantastic, masterful chapter. Keep up the frankly jaw-dropping work. Love every second I've spent on this fic.
Another fantastic, masterful chapter. Keep up the frankly jaw-dropping work. Love every second I've spent on this fic.
9/28/2022 c73 AraelDranoth
Wow... just wow. This chapter was a wild ride. Loved each and every word of it.
Wow... just wow. This chapter was a wild ride. Loved each and every word of it.
9/28/2022 c76
33neverdie
Todo un exelente capitulo, muchas gracias por publicarlo.
Tengo una duda, ¿los marines primaris harán su aparición? Porqué después de la destrucción de macrage creo son la única oportunidad de que gulliman se levanté de entre sus hermanos.
Espero que puedas responder a mi pregunta, en todo caso gracias por el nuevo capitulo y a esperar el próximo bye.

Todo un exelente capitulo, muchas gracias por publicarlo.
Tengo una duda, ¿los marines primaris harán su aparición? Porqué después de la destrucción de macrage creo son la única oportunidad de que gulliman se levanté de entre sus hermanos.
Espero que puedas responder a mi pregunta, en todo caso gracias por el nuevo capitulo y a esperar el próximo bye.
9/26/2022 c76 booker68
Honestly I thought that alpha legionnaire was just there to to act as a guard and Jurgen replacement, but this mentioning of him being alpharious so much and the fact his body was never found, makes me think he is actually a squat in disguise!
Honestly I thought that alpha legionnaire was just there to to act as a guard and Jurgen replacement, but this mentioning of him being alpharious so much and the fact his body was never found, makes me think he is actually a squat in disguise!
9/26/2022 c76 CittingAlmond42
...is it weird that I cannot picture Cain without Jurgen?
Your sense of humor still needs work by the way. If Cain can't say it to you himself I figured I would.
Fantastic chapter as always and I am now bloody terrified for what comes next.
...is it weird that I cannot picture Cain without Jurgen?
Your sense of humor still needs work by the way. If Cain can't say it to you himself I figured I would.
Fantastic chapter as always and I am now bloody terrified for what comes next.
9/26/2022 c76
9Antony444
I agree with Bile, if the full Eighteenth Legion is coming, running away is the soundest strategic decision...
And now I want a showdown of Vulkan and Dorn...

I agree with Bile, if the full Eighteenth Legion is coming, running away is the soundest strategic decision...
And now I want a showdown of Vulkan and Dorn...
9/22/2022 c75 Axccel
Okay, but you know if the Emperor dies he just regenerates a moment later like nothing happened. If anything, killing him in a fight is a bad idea as he'd just pop back up good as new to continue fighting while you're still exhausted and injured. The only reason he hasn't done that after the fight with Horus is because he was the only being able to direct the Astronomican and so ho he had no choice or else the Imperium's logistics and military wound almost completely disappear instantly, lost to the Warp.
And, contrary to popular belief, he doesn't power it, the psykers maintaining it power it (and no, not at the cost of their lives that's just a change made to it to keep him alive). That also means that in any Horus Heresy alternative in which Magnus remains active and loyalist, the Emperor being mortally wounded or killed is totally irrelevant and in either case he'd be totally restored shortly after instead of interred on the Golden Throne. Which in turn would mean the psyker sacrifice would be ended, too.
This aspect of what powers the Astronomican has been canon for a long time, and still is, and the writers of the Horus Heresy novels showed their ignorance of the lore when writing the books covering the War in the Webway as they treated it as the sacrifices powering the Astronomican when the Emperor wasn't on the Golden Throne, which is totally incorrect.
Okay, but you know if the Emperor dies he just regenerates a moment later like nothing happened. If anything, killing him in a fight is a bad idea as he'd just pop back up good as new to continue fighting while you're still exhausted and injured. The only reason he hasn't done that after the fight with Horus is because he was the only being able to direct the Astronomican and so ho he had no choice or else the Imperium's logistics and military wound almost completely disappear instantly, lost to the Warp.
And, contrary to popular belief, he doesn't power it, the psykers maintaining it power it (and no, not at the cost of their lives that's just a change made to it to keep him alive). That also means that in any Horus Heresy alternative in which Magnus remains active and loyalist, the Emperor being mortally wounded or killed is totally irrelevant and in either case he'd be totally restored shortly after instead of interred on the Golden Throne. Which in turn would mean the psyker sacrifice would be ended, too.
This aspect of what powers the Astronomican has been canon for a long time, and still is, and the writers of the Horus Heresy novels showed their ignorance of the lore when writing the books covering the War in the Webway as they treated it as the sacrifices powering the Astronomican when the Emperor wasn't on the Golden Throne, which is totally incorrect.
7/13/2022 c75
1GodsgiftFires
Oh God, does that mean that Sulla will literally worship Cain? I mean it's true that he is now the Saint of loyalty, rational thought and the biggest imposter syndrome in the entire universe, but he isn't someone who enjoys the attention of everyone around him. Now he is one of the most dangerous foes of the enemies of mankind and he might go in the history books as example of the peak of human values and strength.

Oh God, does that mean that Sulla will literally worship Cain? I mean it's true that he is now the Saint of loyalty, rational thought and the biggest imposter syndrome in the entire universe, but he isn't someone who enjoys the attention of everyone around him. Now he is one of the most dangerous foes of the enemies of mankind and he might go in the history books as example of the peak of human values and strength.