for The Roboutian Heresy10/31/2022 c78 CittingAlmond42
Wow ok so towards the end there I was sure you were gonna go full meta and have the Yellow King speaking to us the reader.
I was also convinced that it was going to be the Cannon God Emperor.
Great chapter as always and I keenly await the next.
Wow ok so towards the end there I was sure you were gonna go full meta and have the Yellow King speaking to us the reader.
I was also convinced that it was going to be the Cannon God Emperor.
Great chapter as always and I keenly await the next.
10/31/2022 c78 EmpireAgency
God damn what an amazing chapter! I was on the edge of my seat with the suspense end the foreshadowed showdown(or I though it was gonna be one) between Eisenhorn and the Yellow King. My favorite aspect of this story over all is you don't hesitate to give unanimous defeats to the Imperium which adds real tension to the setting. The other thing I love is you give multiple warring factions presence and threat that are all not just one united front. Feels very much like a true End Times caused by Chaos.(Vulkan essentially being this AU's version of Nagash, Corax, Dorn seeking Guilliman for revenge for his schemes, the new faction following the Yellow King. Absolutely love this story.
God damn what an amazing chapter! I was on the edge of my seat with the suspense end the foreshadowed showdown(or I though it was gonna be one) between Eisenhorn and the Yellow King. My favorite aspect of this story over all is you don't hesitate to give unanimous defeats to the Imperium which adds real tension to the setting. The other thing I love is you give multiple warring factions presence and threat that are all not just one united front. Feels very much like a true End Times caused by Chaos.(Vulkan essentially being this AU's version of Nagash, Corax, Dorn seeking Guilliman for revenge for his schemes, the new faction following the Yellow King. Absolutely love this story.
10/31/2022 c78 
5Archaon the Everchosen 1999
Firstly let me say that this revealed floored me and had me reeling. When I got to the revelation on what It is it felt like something of cosmic Horror was approaching and I immediately knew it needed to die. The Yellow king is perhaps the greatest monstrosity to have been birthed in the wake of Light’s End and I do not know if it can even be bested. Even worse you can feel the sheer magnitude of the threat when Corax of all people sends one of his best to slay it at perhaps the most pivotal moment; yet it was in vain.
It had been planning this since… the day it split at the tower of Babble would be the best way to put it. Worse still is the possibility that arises. It fed on the Imperium’s sins and those sins will continue to pill up feeding it even more and without the Emperor himself to counter it.
I’ve been thinking of what word could ascribe to the Yellow king and blasphemy does work, it is a twisted mirror of the master of mankind but Maybe also eternity or inevitability
5Archaon the Everchosen 1999Firstly let me say that this revealed floored me and had me reeling. When I got to the revelation on what It is it felt like something of cosmic Horror was approaching and I immediately knew it needed to die. The Yellow king is perhaps the greatest monstrosity to have been birthed in the wake of Light’s End and I do not know if it can even be bested. Even worse you can feel the sheer magnitude of the threat when Corax of all people sends one of his best to slay it at perhaps the most pivotal moment; yet it was in vain.
It had been planning this since… the day it split at the tower of Babble would be the best way to put it. Worse still is the possibility that arises. It fed on the Imperium’s sins and those sins will continue to pill up feeding it even more and without the Emperor himself to counter it.
I’ve been thinking of what word could ascribe to the Yellow king and blasphemy does work, it is a twisted mirror of the master of mankind but Maybe also eternity or inevitability
10/31/2022 c78 17deadpoolhulk
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
to say my jaw was on the floor repeatedly doesn't come close to expressing the emotions you've put me through you mad terrible genius you.
i mean... wow. just all of this. outstanding.
17deadpoolhulkaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
to say my jaw was on the floor repeatedly doesn't come close to expressing the emotions you've put me through you mad terrible genius you.
i mean... wow. just all of this. outstanding.
10/31/2022 c78 10Archcommander Tenebros
I always had a feeling that the Yellow King was an embodiment of the God-Emperor if He was evil, the malevolent counterpart of the Star Child, but to actually SEE this truth confirmed, and to have the Yellow King explain the ramifications Himself...it was chilling on a whole another level, and a perfect way to wrap up Halloween.
And how ironic that Nykona Sharrowkyn, a champion of the most evil Traitor Legion in the entire Roboutian Heresy, was THIS CLOSE to killing the Yellow King at the moment of his birth, and by extension committing one of the greatest acts of good possible for this universe. How unfortunate for everyone that he failed...
And speaking of evil Traitor Legion, does Corax already know the truth about the Yellow King's true nature? Or is he going to flip his shit when he learns that he was unwittingly and unknowingly serving a malevolent aspect of the very Emperor that he so thoroughly despised?
10Archcommander TenebrosI always had a feeling that the Yellow King was an embodiment of the God-Emperor if He was evil, the malevolent counterpart of the Star Child, but to actually SEE this truth confirmed, and to have the Yellow King explain the ramifications Himself...it was chilling on a whole another level, and a perfect way to wrap up Halloween.
And how ironic that Nykona Sharrowkyn, a champion of the most evil Traitor Legion in the entire Roboutian Heresy, was THIS CLOSE to killing the Yellow King at the moment of his birth, and by extension committing one of the greatest acts of good possible for this universe. How unfortunate for everyone that he failed...
And speaking of evil Traitor Legion, does Corax already know the truth about the Yellow King's true nature? Or is he going to flip his shit when he learns that he was unwittingly and unknowingly serving a malevolent aspect of the very Emperor that he so thoroughly despised?
10/22/2022 c77 Hunter19941
Love the story finished it in a few days absolutely awesome portrayal of Fabius bile his character is awesome.
Best eagerly await the next update.
Love the story finished it in a few days absolutely awesome portrayal of Fabius bile his character is awesome.
Best eagerly await the next update.
10/21/2022 c77 stranrep
Great. Shit is about to get... well, realer. Especially considering final words and WMG section of this fanfic on Tv Tropes.
Thanks for this fanfic, it's much more entertaining than current GW ploitline (although certain primarch fight is really wonderful).
Great. Shit is about to get... well, realer. Especially considering final words and WMG section of this fanfic on Tv Tropes.
Thanks for this fanfic, it's much more entertaining than current GW ploitline (although certain primarch fight is really wonderful).
10/16/2022 c77 17deadpoolhulk
"Vulkan is about the size of a battleship" is the kind of batshit insanity i love this story for so much. I Was xpecting him to be matching up to the biggest TITANS not this. And i'm so happy for it.
that scene with the harlequin was the highlight of the chaptr to me though. i do love those weirdo elf boys
17deadpoolhulk"Vulkan is about the size of a battleship" is the kind of batshit insanity i love this story for so much. I Was xpecting him to be matching up to the biggest TITANS not this. And i'm so happy for it.
that scene with the harlequin was the highlight of the chaptr to me though. i do love those weirdo elf boys
10/15/2022 c77 Puffy Harp Seal
Every chapter you keep surpassing our expectations Zahariel - this was great!
Every chapter you keep surpassing our expectations Zahariel - this was great!