
7/5/2022 c18 Iron Marine
This is very good, but there is one thing that had been bothering me ever since i read this. What happened with the exiled Raven Guard and Arkhas Fel? Did they simply die a unknown death in the deep reaches of space, did they still ended up joing the traitors, or has a loyalist came across them and convinced them to join him. Maybe Alpha Legion or Thiel sometime during the heresy found out about they existance and decided to get them to join their ranks.
Do you have an idea as to what happend with them or not? If so i do have some ideas of what could have been their fate if you wouldn't mind hearing.
That's all i wanted to say. Keep up the good work and can't wait for more of your stuff to come out.
This is very good, but there is one thing that had been bothering me ever since i read this. What happened with the exiled Raven Guard and Arkhas Fel? Did they simply die a unknown death in the deep reaches of space, did they still ended up joing the traitors, or has a loyalist came across them and convinced them to join him. Maybe Alpha Legion or Thiel sometime during the heresy found out about they existance and decided to get them to join their ranks.
Do you have an idea as to what happend with them or not? If so i do have some ideas of what could have been their fate if you wouldn't mind hearing.
That's all i wanted to say. Keep up the good work and can't wait for more of your stuff to come out.
6/30/2022 c3 Anderioan
Such an incredible reworking of the 3rd Legion friend!
I know I'm only two legions in so far, but you have made something beautiful here, well done.
Such an incredible reworking of the 3rd Legion friend!
I know I'm only two legions in so far, but you have made something beautiful here, well done.
6/22/2022 c75
33neverdie
Hola, soy un fan de tu fic, y me hago unas cuantas preguntas; ¿Los marines primaris aparecerán? ¿Estarían del lado del caos o del orden? ¿Donde están los cuervos sangrientos?
Espero puedas leer este mengaje y responderme.
Gran fic y espero el siguiente capitulo.
Perdón por escribir en español, pero no confió mucho en mi ingles como para dejar un comentario.

Hola, soy un fan de tu fic, y me hago unas cuantas preguntas; ¿Los marines primaris aparecerán? ¿Estarían del lado del caos o del orden? ¿Donde están los cuervos sangrientos?
Espero puedas leer este mengaje y responderme.
Gran fic y espero el siguiente capitulo.
Perdón por escribir en español, pero no confió mucho en mi ingles como para dejar un comentario.
6/3/2022 c1 Daniel Tran
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this take on the warhammer lore. Keep up the good work!
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this take on the warhammer lore. Keep up the good work!
5/30/2022 c75 Guest
MEN OF TANITH
MEN OF TANITH
4/26/2022 c75
8wyval
One of, if not the best chapters of the story so far.
Cain's characterization is spot-on, I think, he's one of your best supporting cast member (well, as far as an Imperial Hero turned Saint can be called "supporting cast").
The saddest thing for me was that while Grandmaster Covan was there, the chapter has a sad lack of Wulfen... I mean Digganobz :)
Seriously, thanks for the quality entertainment, Zahariel and Jaenera Targaryen both.

One of, if not the best chapters of the story so far.
Cain's characterization is spot-on, I think, he's one of your best supporting cast member (well, as far as an Imperial Hero turned Saint can be called "supporting cast").
The saddest thing for me was that while Grandmaster Covan was there, the chapter has a sad lack of Wulfen... I mean Digganobz :)
Seriously, thanks for the quality entertainment, Zahariel and Jaenera Targaryen both.
4/23/2022 c75 ClearOcean
Now that I've thought about it. since Horus never fell to chaos, I dpubt he would have destroyed in Interex, maybe. Would be nice to see them.
Now that I've thought about it. since Horus never fell to chaos, I dpubt he would have destroyed in Interex, maybe. Would be nice to see them.
4/23/2022 c75
3RohanVos
Wow, just wow! I had tears in my eyes as events were racing towards the climax. Cannot wait to see what comes next. I thought Gaunt would make an appearance but now definitely not as he did. Thank you for crafting an amazing story that continues to delight and amaze!

Wow, just wow! I had tears in my eyes as events were racing towards the climax. Cannot wait to see what comes next. I thought Gaunt would make an appearance but now definitely not as he did. Thank you for crafting an amazing story that continues to delight and amaze!
4/23/2022 c75 ClearOcean
Now that I've thought about it. since Horus never fell to chaos, I dpubt he would have destroyed in Interex, maybe. Would be nice to see them.
Now that I've thought about it. since Horus never fell to chaos, I dpubt he would have destroyed in Interex, maybe. Would be nice to see them.
4/23/2022 c75 Lord Felwinter
When i first read the fate of The Tanith first and only I cried, not ashamed to admit it, and I cried again when I read what those chaos fucks did to them, thank you good sir for this.
When i first read the fate of The Tanith first and only I cried, not ashamed to admit it, and I cried again when I read what those chaos fucks did to them, thank you good sir for this.
4/23/2022 c75 CittingAlmond42
You magnificent bastard. I laughed and cried, through this chapter. Much like the Emperor I think you need to reevaluate your sense of humour.
You magnificent bastard. I laughed and cried, through this chapter. Much like the Emperor I think you need to reevaluate your sense of humour.
4/23/2022 c75
5Archaon the Everchosen 1999
Ok a few things firstly HOLY EMPEROR THIS WAS GOOD. Your right I did not see Gaunt coming but that makes it even better!
I’m curious as to what Bile is up to as it can not be good. Perhaps he’s going to go dodger Frankenstein on Melusine to bring her back in some capacity. Which may be a thing worse then death for her in a way given her nature. Also what is Horus up to? I refuse to call him the eldest I’ll stick to his true name and hope my Primarch remembers who he is at some point in the future.
Also I got to say you’ve opened a floodgate of possibility here with the concept of redemption. First Diomedies and now Gaunt and the Taneth and you’ve even hinted at the Lion’s own redemption and I don’t think you’ll stop there. I genuinely wish GW explores the concept of redemption from chaos in cannon as it could lead to some interesting routes if done right. You’ve shown it can be done extremely well and I’m curious to see what other souls will be saved from the Dark Gods.

Ok a few things firstly HOLY EMPEROR THIS WAS GOOD. Your right I did not see Gaunt coming but that makes it even better!
I’m curious as to what Bile is up to as it can not be good. Perhaps he’s going to go dodger Frankenstein on Melusine to bring her back in some capacity. Which may be a thing worse then death for her in a way given her nature. Also what is Horus up to? I refuse to call him the eldest I’ll stick to his true name and hope my Primarch remembers who he is at some point in the future.
Also I got to say you’ve opened a floodgate of possibility here with the concept of redemption. First Diomedies and now Gaunt and the Taneth and you’ve even hinted at the Lion’s own redemption and I don’t think you’ll stop there. I genuinely wish GW explores the concept of redemption from chaos in cannon as it could lead to some interesting routes if done right. You’ve shown it can be done extremely well and I’m curious to see what other souls will be saved from the Dark Gods.