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17deadpoolhulk
no one but you can write a scene where the phrase "ah well dropping a Demon Primarch on this imperial world probably can't make it any MORE fucked!"
you have a gift.
17deadpoolhulkno one but you can write a scene where the phrase "ah well dropping a Demon Primarch on this imperial world probably can't make it any MORE fucked!"
you have a gift.
4/10/2022 c74 11John Spangler
This chapter was truly terrifying. From the tale of Death Korps' corruption to Rogal Dorn's return, it shows how something can go from bad to worse. For the Imperium, that is. Needless to say, I loved it!
11John SpanglerThis chapter was truly terrifying. From the tale of Death Korps' corruption to Rogal Dorn's return, it shows how something can go from bad to worse. For the Imperium, that is. Needless to say, I loved it!
4/9/2022 c74 8Ultimate Hunter X
I have been waiting to read what the Black Templars have been up to in this Black Crusade, and I am far from disappointed. I was super hyped to see that Royal Dorn’s Demon form had finally been unveiled, and it’s all I expected it to be. With that out of the way and having all the knowledge I need of the Seventh Legion, all I need is a true World Eater’s Codex to get the ball rolling on my Khornate Fists army.
8Ultimate Hunter XI have been waiting to read what the Black Templars have been up to in this Black Crusade, and I am far from disappointed. I was super hyped to see that Royal Dorn’s Demon form had finally been unveiled, and it’s all I expected it to be. With that out of the way and having all the knowledge I need of the Seventh Legion, all I need is a true World Eater’s Codex to get the ball rolling on my Khornate Fists army.
3/30/2022 c11 1DarthRayVahn
Loved this entry! especially nice touch with Samus, he was always one of my favorite parts of the early Horus Hersy
1DarthRayVahnLoved this entry! especially nice touch with Samus, he was always one of my favorite parts of the early Horus Hersy
3/2/2022 c13 JoshuaTheTraveller
what a great chapter. I feel that the Combat Doctrine's description of the planet post-purification needs to sound more specific and "Technical" tho
what a great chapter. I feel that the Combat Doctrine's description of the planet post-purification needs to sound more specific and "Technical" tho
2/23/2022 c11 Guest
Considering Angron was supposed to represent the Emperor's empathy, I think you did a superb job. 12/10 chapter.
Considering Angron was supposed to represent the Emperor's empathy, I think you did a superb job. 12/10 chapter.
2/7/2022 c2 ApolloSol
I just realized... if this is the last Of Fabius Bile clones... doesn't that mean Fulgrim killed the one in commoragh...
does that mean we get to see Fulgrim in Cadia?!
I just realized... if this is the last Of Fabius Bile clones... doesn't that mean Fulgrim killed the one in commoragh...
does that mean we get to see Fulgrim in Cadia?!
1/13/2022 c73 5Archaon the Everchosen 1999
Just reread this and realized I never commented. You’ve made the Son of Horus in me freeze this chapter. When I first read the Eldest reveal I remember vividly saying “Oh hell no” out of sheer shock. I fell bad for Loken being so close to gaining his vengeance against Bile after ten thousand years only to be stopped by the mauled and defiled corpse of his dead father; a fate too cruel for one such as him. Dark Angels have been very active in these last few engagements from the assault on the Thousand Sons Homeworld, and Cypher’s journey to Terra and now being one of the architects Cadia’s fall. I think they must have some grander scheme in the works and these other theaters may be distractions to hide their true agenda. Though I may be going too deep into the Crystal Labyrinth with that theory.
5Archaon the Everchosen 1999Just reread this and realized I never commented. You’ve made the Son of Horus in me freeze this chapter. When I first read the Eldest reveal I remember vividly saying “Oh hell no” out of sheer shock. I fell bad for Loken being so close to gaining his vengeance against Bile after ten thousand years only to be stopped by the mauled and defiled corpse of his dead father; a fate too cruel for one such as him. Dark Angels have been very active in these last few engagements from the assault on the Thousand Sons Homeworld, and Cypher’s journey to Terra and now being one of the architects Cadia’s fall. I think they must have some grander scheme in the works and these other theaters may be distractions to hide their true agenda. Though I may be going too deep into the Crystal Labyrinth with that theory.
11/15/2021 c19 4Eltyr
Wait a minute... the 'score' competition performed by the Coils of the Hydra... i think...
Is that a Warhams reference to POINTS? LOL
4EltyrWait a minute... the 'score' competition performed by the Coils of the Hydra... i think...
Is that a Warhams reference to POINTS? LOL
11/8/2021 c73 3RohanVos
Thank you for another thrilling chapter and for the return of my favorite commissar! So munch epic was in this chapter, I cannot wait to see what comes next!
3RohanVosThank you for another thrilling chapter and for the return of my favorite commissar! So munch epic was in this chapter, I cannot wait to see what comes next!
11/7/2021 c73 1AbaDaba69
Didn’t see that happening. Did Sanguinius true banishment release Horus’ soul back into the galaxy? Would be crazy to see Horus Lupercal regain his own body back from Eldest Horus.
1AbaDaba69Didn’t see that happening. Did Sanguinius true banishment release Horus’ soul back into the galaxy? Would be crazy to see Horus Lupercal regain his own body back from Eldest Horus.
11/7/2021 c73 Diamond
HOW does this story keep getting more and more exciting with every update? i've never read a story like this where every chapter gives me at least five times where all i can think is "OH SHIT!" or "HOLY FUCK THAT'S COOL!"
you sir are a genius.
HOW does this story keep getting more and more exciting with every update? i've never read a story like this where every chapter gives me at least five times where all i can think is "OH SHIT!" or "HOLY FUCK THAT'S COOL!"
you sir are a genius.