for The Roboutian Heresy7/2/2021 c69 Diamond
THAT WAS YOUR BEST CHAPTER YET
hoooooooly shit it was freaking amazin
THAT WAS YOUR BEST CHAPTER YET
hoooooooly shit it was freaking amazin
7/1/2021 c69 Van Erik Lucasan
A Clash Upon The Wall... The Maiming of The Lord of The Aleph Null... The Desperate Stand Of Heroes Against The Fallen Lord of Hosts... And All the Other Landmark Events in this Chapter
Such an Exquisitely Immersive And Deeply Compelling And Thrilling Treat To Read!
All My Kudos To You Zahariel!
The Greatest Masterpiece of a Chapter of this Masterpiece yet!
A Clash Upon The Wall... The Maiming of The Lord of The Aleph Null... The Desperate Stand Of Heroes Against The Fallen Lord of Hosts... And All the Other Landmark Events in this Chapter
Such an Exquisitely Immersive And Deeply Compelling And Thrilling Treat To Read!
All My Kudos To You Zahariel!
The Greatest Masterpiece of a Chapter of this Masterpiece yet!
6/30/2021 c69 
3RohanVos
You have outdone yourself, everything was truly epic, and I could not stop myself of reading even if i wanted too...which lets be honest there was nothing that was going to stop me! No victory without sacrifice, the confrontation with Slanesh is tied with Magnus rising to defend his sons! Wow, simply wow! The return of Lucius, the shattering of the glamor, and of course cutting a "god". Your updates are always worth the wait!
3RohanVosYou have outdone yourself, everything was truly epic, and I could not stop myself of reading even if i wanted too...which lets be honest there was nothing that was going to stop me! No victory without sacrifice, the confrontation with Slanesh is tied with Magnus rising to defend his sons! Wow, simply wow! The return of Lucius, the shattering of the glamor, and of course cutting a "god". Your updates are always worth the wait!
6/30/2021 c69 7Steamrollers Solve All
Well it was one hell of a ride. And I'll be honest, for a good chunk of it I was suspecting that Morgana would pull a heroic sacrifice to allow Lion to show up and have a redemption start here and now. I mean it was called the "Angel" War. It felt a bit presumptive to rule out the Dark Angels playing a role in it.
I'll definitely say that, at least for me, you've done a good job making this victory feel costly. The Emperor and Ahriman are dead, Terra was definitely mucked up, and most everyone else who did survive the battles is going to be bearing plenty of scars.
Definitely curious to see where things go from here, and just what Fulgrim's been up to in the meantime.
7Steamrollers Solve AllWell it was one hell of a ride. And I'll be honest, for a good chunk of it I was suspecting that Morgana would pull a heroic sacrifice to allow Lion to show up and have a redemption start here and now. I mean it was called the "Angel" War. It felt a bit presumptive to rule out the Dark Angels playing a role in it.
I'll definitely say that, at least for me, you've done a good job making this victory feel costly. The Emperor and Ahriman are dead, Terra was definitely mucked up, and most everyone else who did survive the battles is going to be bearing plenty of scars.
Definitely curious to see where things go from here, and just what Fulgrim's been up to in the meantime.
6/28/2021 c19 SaymyName
Btw mate what happened with the Interex did negotiation happen again and they been inducted in the Imperium or are they still independent.
Btw mate what happened with the Interex did negotiation happen again and they been inducted in the Imperium or are they still independent.
6/20/2021 c68 1Day.jar.view
Hell of a book. Can not wait for the next instalment. I lie, i think i need the time to absorb this masterpiece. I would not recommend binging this, as its a lot to fit in your head, but the overall experience is fantastic. I know the next chapter will blow us out of the water, though throne knows how... well, even that might not know... regardless, i hope i have been clear in my absolute praise of this book. Well worth the time and effort to read.
1Day.jar.viewHell of a book. Can not wait for the next instalment. I lie, i think i need the time to absorb this masterpiece. I would not recommend binging this, as its a lot to fit in your head, but the overall experience is fantastic. I know the next chapter will blow us out of the water, though throne knows how... well, even that might not know... regardless, i hope i have been clear in my absolute praise of this book. Well worth the time and effort to read.
5/29/2021 c40 1Archetype-Moon
Only at the part where the trio are heading to Olympus Mons but these guys being bros and pulling up on Hereteks with all their chad Primarch energy brought a literal tear to my eye. After the Emperor’s Children, then Cypher and then Lion’s sad existence being actually said aloud as he turns away from Lorgar’s offer, good shit happening for the Loyalist sons is beautiful to read.
End Times are supposed to be bad but it’s moments like the return and especially the reunion of Primarchs that makes me think fondly of them. For all that everything is an over the top shade of grey in 40K, seeing the Legions still hold on to their humanity (the good parts of it anyway) despite being chest deep in the meat grinder of grimdark is inspiring.
1Archetype-MoonOnly at the part where the trio are heading to Olympus Mons but these guys being bros and pulling up on Hereteks with all their chad Primarch energy brought a literal tear to my eye. After the Emperor’s Children, then Cypher and then Lion’s sad existence being actually said aloud as he turns away from Lorgar’s offer, good shit happening for the Loyalist sons is beautiful to read.
End Times are supposed to be bad but it’s moments like the return and especially the reunion of Primarchs that makes me think fondly of them. For all that everything is an over the top shade of grey in 40K, seeing the Legions still hold on to their humanity (the good parts of it anyway) despite being chest deep in the meat grinder of grimdark is inspiring.
5/28/2021 c68 17deadpoolhulk
MAN this was such a cool chapter
when one f the best demons in thesetting is but a footnote you kno shit has well and truly hit the fan
it's glorious
17deadpoolhulkMAN this was such a cool chapter
when one f the best demons in thesetting is but a footnote you kno shit has well and truly hit the fan
it's glorious
5/27/2021 c32 Martian-Tech-Adept
The grave keeper is Ferrus,
The God is Malal,
The companion is the star child?
The grave keeper is Ferrus,
The God is Malal,
The companion is the star child?