for The Roboutian Heresy3/9 c82 Orion B
a fair concern but damn, you putting every arc in a chapter may result in a rushed ending. ah well, its not like youre getting paid for this anyway. thanks for writing!
a fair concern but damn, you putting every arc in a chapter may result in a rushed ending. ah well, its not like youre getting paid for this anyway. thanks for writing!
1/2 c1 ZoyeZest
Hi there! I hope you're doing well!
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Hi there! I hope you're doing well!
I just finished reading your story The Roboutian Heresy, and I absolutely loved it! I'd be thrilled to work on a commissioned piece for you, whether it’s adapting it into my comic style or exploring other creative ideas.
I’m a digital artist open for commissions, and I currently have a few slots available. My work is high-quality and reasonably priced. If you’re interested, let’s discuss your vision and bring it to life!
You can reach me on Discord: gasgas1299
Looking forward to working with you!
12/14/2024 c11 Guest
Dios te bendiga Jesús te ama tienes un nata de tu potencial
Dios te bendiga Jesús te ama tienes un nata de tu potencial
11/15/2024 c81 Guest
Es un artista con mucho potencial pero te vaya bien la vida y sé hacer una historia no sirve fácil pero piensa y cálmate Dios te bendiga
Es un artista con mucho potencial pero te vaya bien la vida y sé hacer una historia no sirve fácil pero piensa y cálmate Dios te bendiga
11/15/2024 c80 Guest
Hola Dios te bendiga estás en tu corazón Jesucristo como tu señor y Salvador Jesús te ama
Hola Dios te bendiga estás en tu corazón Jesucristo como tu señor y Salvador Jesús te ama
10/30/2024 c75 Rehtnapome
In knew it was Gaunt the moment you started describing the wraiths xD
In knew it was Gaunt the moment you started describing the wraiths xD
10/29/2024 c81 
1Forgotten Trooper
So I finished reading your story a while ago, after starting it at about the start of the year.
I want to say this story is excellant, and although I didn’t like all the character rewrites at first it has grown on me, and I think I now prefer this timeline to the Horus Heresy.
That said I have been theorising what is going to happen in this story and I think I am ready to make a predictio.
Fulgrim will become the Avatar of Vindicta. You mentioned this with Magnus, and how it was a not a path we wanted to see him walk down, however between all the things that Vindicta has done so far, as well the Fulgrim’s vow that he would kill Guilliman when he found out about his treachery (while he did strike Guilliman down, we now know he did not kill him, so the promise is still unfulfilled) combined with the Destruction of the Emperor’s Children, Fabius Bile’s many, many crimes, and Sanguinius’ confirmation that Fulgrim “languishes in darkness”.
I am convinced that Fulgrim will return Empowered by Vindicta, rising again as vengeful phoenix.
I am very excited to see what happens with the rest of the story, also concerned for Perturabo, it seems like he is going to die in this battle.
Good luck with writing, I greatly admire your ability to write so much.
1Forgotten TrooperSo I finished reading your story a while ago, after starting it at about the start of the year.
I want to say this story is excellant, and although I didn’t like all the character rewrites at first it has grown on me, and I think I now prefer this timeline to the Horus Heresy.
That said I have been theorising what is going to happen in this story and I think I am ready to make a predictio.
Fulgrim will become the Avatar of Vindicta. You mentioned this with Magnus, and how it was a not a path we wanted to see him walk down, however between all the things that Vindicta has done so far, as well the Fulgrim’s vow that he would kill Guilliman when he found out about his treachery (while he did strike Guilliman down, we now know he did not kill him, so the promise is still unfulfilled) combined with the Destruction of the Emperor’s Children, Fabius Bile’s many, many crimes, and Sanguinius’ confirmation that Fulgrim “languishes in darkness”.
I am convinced that Fulgrim will return Empowered by Vindicta, rising again as vengeful phoenix.
I am very excited to see what happens with the rest of the story, also concerned for Perturabo, it seems like he is going to die in this battle.
Good luck with writing, I greatly admire your ability to write so much.
9/16/2024 c81 Guest
Wait, how the hell did the Demiurges enslaved an Ork? No, thats not it. WHY would anyone with brain enslave an Ork!?
Wait, how the hell did the Demiurges enslaved an Ork? No, thats not it. WHY would anyone with brain enslave an Ork!?
9/3/2024 c81 vandalpunk
This is definitely one of the most well thought out series of codexes, indexes, and the general story of an alternative heresy that could exist.
I’ve been reading this all for some time and I have to say it does inspire me a little to try something like this in the 41st Millennium.
Keep up the good work
This is definitely one of the most well thought out series of codexes, indexes, and the general story of an alternative heresy that could exist.
I’ve been reading this all for some time and I have to say it does inspire me a little to try something like this in the 41st Millennium.
Keep up the good work
8/23/2024 c81 Sarenwave45
Love that the evil Stunties came.
Also could tell right away by the name, that now Makaison has an evil scifi twin just as eager to make stuff than anything else.
Love that the evil Stunties came.
Also could tell right away by the name, that now Makaison has an evil scifi twin just as eager to make stuff than anything else.
8/23/2024 c81 3RohanVos
Wonderful chapter as always, I really had a good chuckle at your line about three skinks in a cloak. Looking forward to what just comes next with Olympia.
3RohanVosWonderful chapter as always, I really had a good chuckle at your line about three skinks in a cloak. Looking forward to what just comes next with Olympia.
8/22/2024 c81 ChosenChaos
So, when you say that the Dreadful Engines are inspired by Girl Genius, do you mean the Beast of the Rails?
So, when you say that the Dreadful Engines are inspired by Girl Genius, do you mean the Beast of the Rails?
8/18/2024 c19 Guest
Love this
Love this