
10/31/2020 c58 Van Erik Lucasan
Impeccable piece of work Zahariel! Keep it up!
Impeccable piece of work Zahariel! Keep it up!
10/25/2020 c57 Van Erik Lucasan
Bravo Zahariel! As always your work on this piece is a masterpiece. An immersive story, with an engaging drama, exciting flow of events! Ephrael and Ahriman triumphing over Kyriss in a cataclysmic battle, and yet still their fates and and that of the Imperium of Man hanging in the balance in their subsequent "Final Stand"?... And to think that the Battle of Terra Front on the Angel War is only just beginning? WHAT A CLIFFHANGER!... Way to go! Keep them new chapters coming will ya?
Bravo Zahariel! As always your work on this piece is a masterpiece. An immersive story, with an engaging drama, exciting flow of events! Ephrael and Ahriman triumphing over Kyriss in a cataclysmic battle, and yet still their fates and and that of the Imperium of Man hanging in the balance in their subsequent "Final Stand"?... And to think that the Battle of Terra Front on the Angel War is only just beginning? WHAT A CLIFFHANGER!... Way to go! Keep them new chapters coming will ya?
10/24/2020 c57 Look2020
Good Chapter!
Good Chapter!
10/22/2020 c56 1207
Wow
Wow
10/17/2020 c1 Van Erik Lucasan
Outstanding as always Zahariel! The wait is well worth this chapter...
Outstanding as always Zahariel! The wait is well worth this chapter...
10/17/2020 c56 Guest
Awesome chapter keep up the good work.
Awesome chapter keep up the good work.
10/17/2020 c56
6Ragnarok Ascendant
I think it's curious that you use Slaanesh for the big, ballsy moves a lot throughout this series. There's really nothing on the same scale done by the other three Gods as far as 'might actually unmake the universe if it gets inside the Black Library', or 'helping kill a Legion by removing a Gloriana from play' and 'literally storming the Throneworld'. Yeah, Tzeentch was planning to do something similar with the Rubricae but it didn't have the same apocalyptic feel that has dominated Slaaneshi schemes. Just wondering if that's deliberate or not.

I think it's curious that you use Slaanesh for the big, ballsy moves a lot throughout this series. There's really nothing on the same scale done by the other three Gods as far as 'might actually unmake the universe if it gets inside the Black Library', or 'helping kill a Legion by removing a Gloriana from play' and 'literally storming the Throneworld'. Yeah, Tzeentch was planning to do something similar with the Rubricae but it didn't have the same apocalyptic feel that has dominated Slaaneshi schemes. Just wondering if that's deliberate or not.
10/17/2020 c56 Mr nod
Now we got a real fight on our hands, it will interesting to see how the rest of the planet holds up. and nice work on the chapter
Now we got a real fight on our hands, it will interesting to see how the rest of the planet holds up. and nice work on the chapter