for The Roboutian Heresy3/30/2019 c39 sonic
I liked the chapter!
I liked the chapter!
3/30/2019 c39 Guest
Holy Shit! Zahariel, I legitimately do not have the words to express what I felt reading this. Props man.
Holy Shit! Zahariel, I legitimately do not have the words to express what I felt reading this. Props man.
3/30/2019 c39 Sha115
Good chapter but it was too long I feel some of the impact is lossed by how long it is.
Good chapter but it was too long I feel some of the impact is lossed by how long it is.
3/30/2019 c39 Aresius King
Amazing chapter, Zahariel! If I may point just one small mistake, Akrane should be a Callidus assassin - Culexus are pariahs, not shapeshifters. Keep working on this story :D
Amazing chapter, Zahariel! If I may point just one small mistake, Akrane should be a Callidus assassin - Culexus are pariahs, not shapeshifters. Keep working on this story :D
3/30/2019 c39 Tobi14
Well this is a long chapter a lot of effort clearly went into this and I must say the units of the first legion suit their twisted ideology.
Lorgar is back and now we shall see how the long war unfolds.
Well this is a long chapter a lot of effort clearly went into this and I must say the units of the first legion suit their twisted ideology.
Lorgar is back and now we shall see how the long war unfolds.
3/28/2019 c27 Lazaryan
Do not ever there to lie they were playing Paradox-Billiards-Vostroyan-Roulette-Fourth Dimensional-Hypercube-Chess-Strip Poker. And so lets see who is the king of games XD
Do not ever there to lie they were playing Paradox-Billiards-Vostroyan-Roulette-Fourth Dimensional-Hypercube-Chess-Strip Poker. And so lets see who is the king of games XD
2/28/2019 c15 
5Archaon the Everchosen 1999
Okay this story is awesome everything from the indexes to the battles and story arcs are so well done hinestly great work i look foward to seeing future chapters but i do have ine question. Whatever happened to Maloghast? Im asking more out of curisoity then anything else as i didnt see any kention of him in the index for SOH
5Archaon the Everchosen 1999Okay this story is awesome everything from the indexes to the battles and story arcs are so well done hinestly great work i look foward to seeing future chapters but i do have ine question. Whatever happened to Maloghast? Im asking more out of curisoity then anything else as i didnt see any kention of him in the index for SOH
1/13/2019 c13 4morion87
You know, this does bring up a question having reread Flight of the Eisenstein. Would Tuphon. Grulgor and Garro gotten along any better here than in cannon?
Just a question that's been bugging me
4morion87You know, this does bring up a question having reread Flight of the Eisenstein. Would Tuphon. Grulgor and Garro gotten along any better here than in cannon?
Just a question that's been bugging me
1/13/2019 c32 halolord
I have to say the true identity of Gage totally shocked me...and other Chinese fans of your about the original identity of Azerel?Chinese fans now strongly believe that he shall be another loyalist like the way，do you have discord group yet?
I have to say the true identity of Gage totally shocked me...and other Chinese fans of your about the original identity of Azerel?Chinese fans now strongly believe that he shall be another loyalist like the way，do you have discord group yet?
1/11/2019 c18 Albian
This may be overthinking on my part but I wonder who would have this Córax turned into if the techlords were a bit nicer and smarter. I mean, torturing a misterious superhuman whose power limits are unknown and whose creator may show up in Kiavahr some day can only end on disaster.
Maybe if they had let him with a few caretakers instead of shunning him of human contact and leave him a few days of rest between experiments. Or maybe if the lords had taken him to visit the ill slaves and convince him all his suffering was for the good of their people (Which would be half truth but still technically true).
Then again, it that had happened I imagine Córax would have become a cold minded individual and firm believer on "the end justifies the means" and thus a new pawn for Tzeentch.
This may be overthinking on my part but I wonder who would have this Córax turned into if the techlords were a bit nicer and smarter. I mean, torturing a misterious superhuman whose power limits are unknown and whose creator may show up in Kiavahr some day can only end on disaster.
Maybe if they had let him with a few caretakers instead of shunning him of human contact and leave him a few days of rest between experiments. Or maybe if the lords had taken him to visit the ill slaves and convince him all his suffering was for the good of their people (Which would be half truth but still technically true).
Then again, it that had happened I imagine Córax would have become a cold minded individual and firm believer on "the end justifies the means" and thus a new pawn for Tzeentch.
1/11/2019 c8 Albian
Of all your alternate version of the primarchs I like this one the most. He is the kind of hero the Imperium needs: A leader not afraid of getting his hands dirty and willind to go into the darkness so other don't have to yet still determined and faithful.
By the way, mi personal interpretation of his adoptive mother's death is that the eldar had a very brief vision of herintervention and its consequences and chose to stab her.
Of all your alternate version of the primarchs I like this one the most. He is the kind of hero the Imperium needs: A leader not afraid of getting his hands dirty and willind to go into the darkness so other don't have to yet still determined and faithful.
By the way, mi personal interpretation of his adoptive mother's death is that the eldar had a very brief vision of herintervention and its consequences and chose to stab her.
1/10/2019 c38 Inthinell
The Eldest. Wraith of Konrad Curse? In my mind it has to be. He killed a primary, though injured, with ease, and it would make his killing potential displayed this far make sense. Would also explain the Inquisitors reaction, along with the paralysing aura and fear it invokes. Just a guess but a fairly confident one
The Eldest. Wraith of Konrad Curse? In my mind it has to be. He killed a primary, though injured, with ease, and it would make his killing potential displayed this far make sense. Would also explain the Inquisitors reaction, along with the paralysing aura and fear it invokes. Just a guess but a fairly confident one
12/31/2018 c38 Van Erik Lucasan
Happy New Year Zahariel!... What impeccable gifts you have given us... This Roboutian Heresy latest chapter and that of your Warhammer 40k Short stories... Kudos and Cheers!
Happy New Year Zahariel!... What impeccable gifts you have given us... This Roboutian Heresy latest chapter and that of your Warhammer 40k Short stories... Kudos and Cheers!