for The Roboutian Heresy4/13/2015 c7 Guilliman
Squeee an update !
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4/12/2015 c7 Spider
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This is great, I loved the dialogue, characterisation and portrayal of Sigismund Dorn, and the 7th Legion here, blending both Kharn and HH Sigismund, Betrayer and Defender into one, I can easily see Sigismund looking like a 40k Khornate Archaon in this setting.
I also loved how you turned their 40k versions on a head, you just nail here.
In Short ,This chapter has made this reviewer very happy.
Take your time, don't rush your work, for this is top-notch writing. The waiting makes it worth it.
Questions - 1. Are you doing the End Times series in your Roboutian Heresy universe or in the regular 40k Universe?
2. Will the Forsaken Sons create/will we see more specific rooms aboard The Hand Of Ruin over time?, (E.g. A hall of remembrance, displaying war-trophies, a librarium for dark knowledge, etc, along with more from the Coven, because it would be interesting to see what sort of Sorceror's Arken has under his Command).
3. Will we see anything from the Titan Legions and Legio Cybernetica (Traitor/ Loyalist) as time goes on? Because it would suitably Epic, to see these war machines in action or joining Arken's Banner.
4. Lastly will the Forsaken Sons (as a whole warband) be officially "donning the Black", by the end of their campaign?
Story Ideas - set in the Roboutian Heresy, either loyalist or Traitor, / The Fall and "Destruction" of the Night Reapers Chapter / a lone or a small group of Loyalist space marines (Blood Angels possibly, since that would make for very interesting reading) captured/ tortured/ corrupted by the Black Legion. (seeing things from their Point of View) or The story of a traitor Imperial Knight household, from the Great Crusade, during the Heresy and unto to the present.
Spider out.
Spider reporting
This is great, I loved the dialogue, characterisation and portrayal of Sigismund Dorn, and the 7th Legion here, blending both Kharn and HH Sigismund, Betrayer and Defender into one, I can easily see Sigismund looking like a 40k Khornate Archaon in this setting.
I also loved how you turned their 40k versions on a head, you just nail here.
In Short ,This chapter has made this reviewer very happy.
Take your time, don't rush your work, for this is top-notch writing. The waiting makes it worth it.
Questions - 1. Are you doing the End Times series in your Roboutian Heresy universe or in the regular 40k Universe?
2. Will the Forsaken Sons create/will we see more specific rooms aboard The Hand Of Ruin over time?, (E.g. A hall of remembrance, displaying war-trophies, a librarium for dark knowledge, etc, along with more from the Coven, because it would be interesting to see what sort of Sorceror's Arken has under his Command).
3. Will we see anything from the Titan Legions and Legio Cybernetica (Traitor/ Loyalist) as time goes on? Because it would suitably Epic, to see these war machines in action or joining Arken's Banner.
4. Lastly will the Forsaken Sons (as a whole warband) be officially "donning the Black", by the end of their campaign?
Story Ideas - set in the Roboutian Heresy, either loyalist or Traitor, / The Fall and "Destruction" of the Night Reapers Chapter / a lone or a small group of Loyalist space marines (Blood Angels possibly, since that would make for very interesting reading) captured/ tortured/ corrupted by the Black Legion. (seeing things from their Point of View) or The story of a traitor Imperial Knight household, from the Great Crusade, during the Heresy and unto to the present.
Spider out.
3/2/2015 c6 WhoNeedsNames
This has been an amazing read for me, and I've thoroughly enjoyed it ever since I first saw it. I think my favorite part is how you take canon evil characters and turn them into paragons of virtue. And then you make the galaxy so much worse for the Imperium by waking the Necrons :P
And yes, an End Times story would be epic.
Also, if you're still taking ideas for short stories, how about Death of an Eldar Craftworld? Or something with Chaos Eldar?
This has been an amazing read for me, and I've thoroughly enjoyed it ever since I first saw it. I think my favorite part is how you take canon evil characters and turn them into paragons of virtue. And then you make the galaxy so much worse for the Imperium by waking the Necrons :P
And yes, an End Times story would be epic.
Also, if you're still taking ideas for short stories, how about Death of an Eldar Craftworld? Or something with Chaos Eldar?
3/1/2015 c6 
2Tanner151
Great update. Really fleshed the Wolves out, I like this AU Wolves as much as HH Wolves though for different reasons.
I like the End Times idea.
Glad that Ragnar, Bjorn and Logan are all important here, all three are really cool characters.
Surprised to see Russ is alive as I had assumed he had been killed transforming the Lion into a Daemon Prince, but his fate is both crueler and vastly more interesting.
Best one yet for sure, in my opinion.
2Tanner151Great update. Really fleshed the Wolves out, I like this AU Wolves as much as HH Wolves though for different reasons.
I like the End Times idea.
Glad that Ragnar, Bjorn and Logan are all important here, all three are really cool characters.
Surprised to see Russ is alive as I had assumed he had been killed transforming the Lion into a Daemon Prince, but his fate is both crueler and vastly more interesting.
Best one yet for sure, in my opinion.
3/1/2015 c6 Spider
Extra - Thoughts: Regarding your idea for a 40K End Times Saga, I fully support it. The End Times for Warhammer Fantasy has really shaken things up. Now a 40K End Times would be Epic.
P.s. If you want to look for inspiration, I highly Recommend Lord Lucan's Fanfic "The Shape of the Nightmare to Come", it is a fantastic read for an End Times Situation. It makes the Grimdark future in 40K even worse, which is no mean feat.
You will not be disappointed.
Extra - Thoughts: Regarding your idea for a 40K End Times Saga, I fully support it. The End Times for Warhammer Fantasy has really shaken things up. Now a 40K End Times would be Epic.
P.s. If you want to look for inspiration, I highly Recommend Lord Lucan's Fanfic "The Shape of the Nightmare to Come", it is a fantastic read for an End Times Situation. It makes the Grimdark future in 40K even worse, which is no mean feat.
You will not be disappointed.
3/1/2015 c6 Spider
Not bad. A very good adaption of traitor Space Wolves. though these poor Space Wolves, you 've made them even more tragic. Being damned twice (First by Aliens, 2nd by Chaos, each for the Second and Eleven Legions), simply because they thought they were doing the right thing. Well done.
I also liked how your showing of how the Executions of the 2nd and 11th Legions affected Leman Russ personally. I really feel for him.
Now hurry up with your Forsaken Sons Please, I'm dying to see what comes next.
Not bad. A very good adaption of traitor Space Wolves. though these poor Space Wolves, you 've made them even more tragic. Being damned twice (First by Aliens, 2nd by Chaos, each for the Second and Eleven Legions), simply because they thought they were doing the right thing. Well done.
I also liked how your showing of how the Executions of the 2nd and 11th Legions affected Leman Russ personally. I really feel for him.
Now hurry up with your Forsaken Sons Please, I'm dying to see what comes next.
3/1/2015 c6 2Dragonkeeper10
I like it a lot but there is one thing I find that is missing. No legion is truly loyal to its primarch and their as to be some loyalists out there for these traitor legions. Maybe you can post them up.
P.S. Please have Sigismund not fall to Chaos since he is too awesome plus he is Terran and would have more loyalty to the Emperor than Dorn.
Please keep these suggestions in mind.
2Dragonkeeper10I like it a lot but there is one thing I find that is missing. No legion is truly loyal to its primarch and their as to be some loyalists out there for these traitor legions. Maybe you can post them up.
P.S. Please have Sigismund not fall to Chaos since he is too awesome plus he is Terran and would have more loyalty to the Emperor than Dorn.
Please keep these suggestions in mind.
3/1/2015 c6 Guilliman
Excellent now quickly man update *Cracks whip
Excellent now quickly man update *Cracks whip
2/28/2015 c5 Annon
Why are the night lords burning their home world this time?!
Great story by the way
Why are the night lords burning their home world this time?!
Great story by the way
2/9/2015 c5 Guest
Real cool story. Could you write about the Alpha Legion, Night Lords, or Thousand Sons next?
Real cool story. Could you write about the Alpha Legion, Night Lords, or Thousand Sons next?
2/8/2015 c1 Guest
Awesome story! Can't wait for the next update! Please make it either the Alpha Legion or the Night Lords.
Awesome story! Can't wait for the next update! Please make it either the Alpha Legion or the Night Lords.
1/14/2015 c5 Teefplucka
So are the Undying another version of plague zombies or something like jiangshi in 40k?
So are the Undying another version of plague zombies or something like jiangshi in 40k?