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Is that good? Oh, at least Iron Court is recognized now. He's good I swear! Yeesh Oberon. Come on he hasn't attacked you has he! Aww, see? Why don't you-wait she's tired, I guess she should rest. Wow that sounds bad. Oh thank glob Ash is here. Just run Puck! Oh my glob I hope she'll be ok.
XD well it was pretty good, like reading a book and the sad death/break apart/something scene where you're like OMG NOOO WHYYY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO US but it's also perfect how you imagined it and how the author describes the scene and thoughts and I'm like DAMN YOU I CAN'T HATE YOU AUTHOR because yeah and wow this is a terrible run-on sentence stop. Please update!
Is that good? Oh, at least Iron Court is recognized now. He's good I swear! Yeesh Oberon. Come on he hasn't attacked you has he! Aww, see? Why don't you-wait she's tired, I guess she should rest. Wow that sounds bad. Oh thank glob Ash is here. Just run Puck! Oh my glob I hope she'll be ok.
XD well it was pretty good, like reading a book and the sad death/break apart/something scene where you're like OMG NOOO WHYYY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO US but it's also perfect how you imagined it and how the author describes the scene and thoughts and I'm like DAMN YOU I CAN'T HATE YOU AUTHOR because yeah and wow this is a terrible run-on sentence stop. Please update!
10/26/2014 c14 Revocate
."Wow now she's trying to commit suicide, this is going to be a lot bit of difficult than I thought."
."Wow now she's trying to commit suicide, this is going to be a lot bit of difficult than I thought."
10/26/2014 c14 
1FanFictionlover1121
Omg, will Meghan be OK? i hope so, and what About Ash and Puck and Paul? i'm super scared for Meghan and her loved ones right now. i can't wait until next week!
1FanFictionlover1121Omg, will Meghan be OK? i hope so, and what About Ash and Puck and Paul? i'm super scared for Meghan and her loved ones right now. i can't wait until next week!
10/19/2014 c13 Revocate
Okay no really my favorite chapter but, I can't wait for the next I hope it can beat this one.
Okay no really my favorite chapter but, I can't wait for the next I hope it can beat this one.
10/21/2014 c13 FanFictionlover1121
I love your idea of ash's childhood. i loved this chapter, keep up the good work:)
Zoie
I love your idea of ash's childhood. i loved this chapter, keep up the good work:)
Zoie
10/18/2014 c13 guest
Yeah, I think even smart people hate school a little bit. *facepalm* oh really. The topic sounds boring (not for me tho, I'm always interested in the Nevernever. If it was earth's animals, nah). How come Rowan doesn't have to do school? Sounds fun, but suspicious that Rowan won't tell him. Oh, snow. XD ok I will admit this is pretty good, but I still hate Rowan. Aww, and yay she's still not freaking out.
Ok, was pretty funny. You don't have to update if you can't, I don't have enough time and I'm only in high school(I actually miss grade school, didn't think that was possible). Oh cool, that's the thing Julie did, she wrote the Iron King with that right? Lol I lost my sanity a long time ago (*cough*school*cough*). Aww but it was getting good, Meg still doesn't hate him. Please update!
Yeah, I think even smart people hate school a little bit. *facepalm* oh really. The topic sounds boring (not for me tho, I'm always interested in the Nevernever. If it was earth's animals, nah). How come Rowan doesn't have to do school? Sounds fun, but suspicious that Rowan won't tell him. Oh, snow. XD ok I will admit this is pretty good, but I still hate Rowan. Aww, and yay she's still not freaking out.
Ok, was pretty funny. You don't have to update if you can't, I don't have enough time and I'm only in high school(I actually miss grade school, didn't think that was possible). Oh cool, that's the thing Julie did, she wrote the Iron King with that right? Lol I lost my sanity a long time ago (*cough*school*cough*). Aww but it was getting good, Meg still doesn't hate him. Please update!
10/18/2014 c12 guest
It will be. She's awake! And it's real! Oh crap no be careful. Yay she isn't freaking out! Bad XD said by Puck about his frenemy XD this is good. XD what did he do? Oh man he's gonna embarrass himself...I gotta see this.
Yeah, this is good blackmail if I ever see him (just kidding don't tell him that XD gonna be hilarious tho). Aww but whyyy...the poor girl. And Ash too. Please update!
It will be. She's awake! And it's real! Oh crap no be careful. Yay she isn't freaking out! Bad XD said by Puck about his frenemy XD this is good. XD what did he do? Oh man he's gonna embarrass himself...I gotta see this.
Yeah, this is good blackmail if I ever see him (just kidding don't tell him that XD gonna be hilarious tho). Aww but whyyy...the poor girl. And Ash too. Please update!
10/14/2014 c12 Revocate
Wow I can't wait to read Ash is story. I can't wait to know what will set off Meghan again. I really love this chapter please keep writing this story!
Wow I can't wait to read Ash is story. I can't wait to know what will set off Meghan again. I really love this chapter please keep writing this story!
10/13/2014 c11 guest
Yeah. Exactly! Yeah you probably shouldn't have done that. Yay...aaand no. Oh yay Puck, help her! Or stay with her at least. Maybe he can remind her that Ash is her knight. That's nice. WAIT. What if she thinks she likes Puck instead because-wait I'm insane, he probably won't(right?). Yes thank you Puck (please don't tell him I said that) .
He should have had a slow painful death, would have been more satisfying. Jellllyy just kidding (he is tho), lol relax man he tried to help. Hopefully she won't attack. Oh yay shared dream! How is she ok in there...meh don't question it. Aww man she doesn't remember! I hope she remembers the dream at least. YASSS SHE REMEMBERS WOO ok I'm just gonna sit here until Ash wakes up. True, true. Yay finally she is! Please update!
Yeah. Exactly! Yeah you probably shouldn't have done that. Yay...aaand no. Oh yay Puck, help her! Or stay with her at least. Maybe he can remind her that Ash is her knight. That's nice. WAIT. What if she thinks she likes Puck instead because-wait I'm insane, he probably won't(right?). Yes thank you Puck (please don't tell him I said that) .
He should have had a slow painful death, would have been more satisfying. Jellllyy just kidding (he is tho), lol relax man he tried to help. Hopefully she won't attack. Oh yay shared dream! How is she ok in there...meh don't question it. Aww man she doesn't remember! I hope she remembers the dream at least. YASSS SHE REMEMBERS WOO ok I'm just gonna sit here until Ash wakes up. True, true. Yay finally she is! Please update!
10/14/2014 c11 FanFictionlover1121
i really really hope that when Meghan wakes up that she doesn't try and hurt ash. i'm worried about ash right now. i need to know what happens soon keep up the awesome work and please please update soon.
i really really hope that when Meghan wakes up that she doesn't try and hurt ash. i'm worried about ash right now. i need to know what happens soon keep up the awesome work and please please update soon.
10/8/2014 c10 Revocate
Seriously what is the matter with Ash? He shouldn't have left. What going to happened between Meghan and Ash I hope she remember him. Please let her remember him.
Seriously what is the matter with Ash? He shouldn't have left. What going to happened between Meghan and Ash I hope she remember him. Please let her remember him.
10/9/2014 c10 FanFictionlover1121
I got introduced to this fan-fiction a couple of days ago and all ready love it! will puck's story work? or will it not? i wait wait much longer keep up the good work and please update soon
I got introduced to this fan-fiction a couple of days ago and all ready love it! will puck's story work? or will it not? i wait wait much longer keep up the good work and please update soon
10/7/2014 c9 Revocate
Wow my mind is blow here I can't believe Rowan did actually go that distance to make Meghan forget about Ash and be afraid of him. I can't wait to read of what happened next. Please Author continued writing your story I love it. Next wait what coming next.
Wow my mind is blow here I can't believe Rowan did actually go that distance to make Meghan forget about Ash and be afraid of him. I can't wait to read of what happened next. Please Author continued writing your story I love it. Next wait what coming next.
10/5/2014 c9 guest
I feel so bad for Ash right now. I hope she's gonna be ok. Nooo he's good! He's not gonna kill you! It's like she's a wild injured animal and he's a dude that saved her and she...yeah the stuff that happened. Oh my glob, I can't take this. AGH SOMEONE FIX THIS ROWAN I'M GONNA BRING YOU BACK TO LIFE SO I CAN TORTURE ALL YOUR BULLSHIT OUT OF YOU AND HOPEFULLY THAT TAKES A LOOOOONG TIME
Please update!
I feel so bad for Ash right now. I hope she's gonna be ok. Nooo he's good! He's not gonna kill you! It's like she's a wild injured animal and he's a dude that saved her and she...yeah the stuff that happened. Oh my glob, I can't take this. AGH SOMEONE FIX THIS ROWAN I'M GONNA BRING YOU BACK TO LIFE SO I CAN TORTURE ALL YOUR BULLSHIT OUT OF YOU AND HOPEFULLY THAT TAKES A LOOOOONG TIME
Please update!
10/3/2014 c8 guest
Lol it's Grim, should have seen that coming XD. Really Puck. Really. *extreme facepalm* PUCK MOVE. YES, MOVE. Oh my glob, Puck sometimes XD. Lol I think she actually WOULD rather have tea with Mab. Ooh, that's pretty low. Lol. Oh thank goodness she's awake! Yeah don't move, aside from food. Lol relax Ash, you guys are married. Lol, you should bring a weapon, the wyldwood is dangerous. Please update!
Lol it's Grim, should have seen that coming XD. Really Puck. Really. *extreme facepalm* PUCK MOVE. YES, MOVE. Oh my glob, Puck sometimes XD. Lol I think she actually WOULD rather have tea with Mab. Ooh, that's pretty low. Lol. Oh thank goodness she's awake! Yeah don't move, aside from food. Lol relax Ash, you guys are married. Lol, you should bring a weapon, the wyldwood is dangerous. Please update!