for Taken10/2/2014 c8 fluffybuttercup
Awesome chapter! Can't wait till the next one:):):):)
Awesome chapter! Can't wait till the next one:):):):)
10/4/2014 c8 Neutral98
Lol woops, I read out of order xD okay, so u remember virus, that's good lol just ignore my earlier comment then. Lol this is still soo good! xD keep writing it!
Lol woops, I read out of order xD okay, so u remember virus, that's good lol just ignore my earlier comment then. Lol this is still soo good! xD keep writing it!
10/4/2014 c9 Neutral98
OMG OMG OMG OMNOMNOMNOMNOM IM PRACTICALLY TEARING UP FOR ASH RIGHT NOW! Oh man... Oh man... This just keeps getting better a better and better! DONT WORRY ASH, YOU STILL HAVE ME AND THE OTHER MEMBERS OF TEAM ASH! Haaaagh! Meghan is terrified of the poor guy all because of that IDIOT ROWAN! IM HAPPY ASH KILLED HIM! GUEST WAS SO RIGHT! ROWAN IS A THING AND THAT FREAKING THING DESERVED DEATH!
Ehhherrrgh... Don't give up on him Meghan! And Ash, prove her wrong! Prove that your better than she remembers!
Ps. I like this, it's epiccc! Lol and nice touch with her remembering the numerous death-threats and murder attempts xDDD maybe she can remember him being controlled by Virus too. That was probably a traumatizing experience xDDD u don't have too, but I figured I'd put it out there for you to use if you want
OMG OMG OMG OMNOMNOMNOMNOM IM PRACTICALLY TEARING UP FOR ASH RIGHT NOW! Oh man... Oh man... This just keeps getting better a better and better! DONT WORRY ASH, YOU STILL HAVE ME AND THE OTHER MEMBERS OF TEAM ASH! Haaaagh! Meghan is terrified of the poor guy all because of that IDIOT ROWAN! IM HAPPY ASH KILLED HIM! GUEST WAS SO RIGHT! ROWAN IS A THING AND THAT FREAKING THING DESERVED DEATH!
Ehhherrrgh... Don't give up on him Meghan! And Ash, prove her wrong! Prove that your better than she remembers!
Ps. I like this, it's epiccc! Lol and nice touch with her remembering the numerous death-threats and murder attempts xDDD maybe she can remember him being controlled by Virus too. That was probably a traumatizing experience xDDD u don't have too, but I figured I'd put it out there for you to use if you want
10/2/2014 c8 
4FaeryMeganChase
I really hope you update soon, I've been worried sick about Meghan since the first chapter. Please keep up the good work!
4FaeryMeganChaseI really hope you update soon, I've been worried sick about Meghan since the first chapter. Please keep up the good work!
9/29/2014 c7 Neutral98
Ur in college? Lol that's why your so good at writing! (I was getting jelly xDDD lol but in a good way) haha I'm a sophomore in highschool, I hope that by the time I graduate i as good as you!
Omg I nearly had a heart attack when he killed Rowan! I thought Meghan would wake up and see Ash with the sword and assume he did it! Then she didn't wake up and I was like PHEW! That was close! Then her aura left and I was freaking out again. xD THEN, I relaxed once the boys gave her their energy. I feel so bad for Ash (yes, I feel bad for a character, and a hot one at that xDDD) Meghan's gonna wake up and be terrified of the guy! Omg please update soon! I need more Ash :333
But if ur busy, that's okay xD
I know how frustrating wanting to write is when you have no time omg it's horrible...
I think this is my loooongest comment yet xD and the fourth today xD Hahahahah yeaaahhh...
Ur in college? Lol that's why your so good at writing! (I was getting jelly xDDD lol but in a good way) haha I'm a sophomore in highschool, I hope that by the time I graduate i as good as you!
Omg I nearly had a heart attack when he killed Rowan! I thought Meghan would wake up and see Ash with the sword and assume he did it! Then she didn't wake up and I was like PHEW! That was close! Then her aura left and I was freaking out again. xD THEN, I relaxed once the boys gave her their energy. I feel so bad for Ash (yes, I feel bad for a character, and a hot one at that xDDD) Meghan's gonna wake up and be terrified of the guy! Omg please update soon! I need more Ash :333
But if ur busy, that's okay xD
I know how frustrating wanting to write is when you have no time omg it's horrible...
I think this is my loooongest comment yet xD and the fourth today xD Hahahahah yeaaahhh...
9/29/2014 c5 Neutral98
I hope Meghan holds on! OMG she can't remember why she cared about Ash's opinion! This is not. Good. Omgomgomgomg HOLD IN THERE MEGHAN! THE BOYS ARE COMING FOR YOU!
Lol I'm just like spamming you with reviews, I'm sorry (only a bit tho) ;) this is just... So good. Omg Puck beelines for the kitchen, of course xDDD I usually make him attempt to spike stuff (or at least plan to muahahaha!)
Lol I love how you write Ash, it's soooo good! And you do good with Grim too! Lol I like... Spent my entire lunch wave at school reading this chapter. I love this!
I hope Meghan holds on! OMG she can't remember why she cared about Ash's opinion! This is not. Good. Omgomgomgomg HOLD IN THERE MEGHAN! THE BOYS ARE COMING FOR YOU!
Lol I'm just like spamming you with reviews, I'm sorry (only a bit tho) ;) this is just... So good. Omg Puck beelines for the kitchen, of course xDDD I usually make him attempt to spike stuff (or at least plan to muahahaha!)
Lol I love how you write Ash, it's soooo good! And you do good with Grim too! Lol I like... Spent my entire lunch wave at school reading this chapter. I love this!
9/29/2014 c3 Neutral98
Omg this is still so good! I'm serious! You have made my day! OOOH? I wonder what Rowan is planning? It's gonna effect Meghan's feelings for Ash too? Gosh, I hope not xD I love Ash omg xDDD And I wonder how and if Ash will kill Rowan? (DIE ROWAN DIE! Lol had to xD)
This is like... Amazing! Lol keep updating! I don't know when you did last, but that's fine xD the story is rather high on the list so you must update often enough
Omg this is still so good! I'm serious! You have made my day! OOOH? I wonder what Rowan is planning? It's gonna effect Meghan's feelings for Ash too? Gosh, I hope not xD I love Ash omg xDDD And I wonder how and if Ash will kill Rowan? (DIE ROWAN DIE! Lol had to xD)
This is like... Amazing! Lol keep updating! I don't know when you did last, but that's fine xD the story is rather high on the list so you must update often enough
9/29/2014 c1 Neutral98
OMG ASH... Yes! Just YES! Lol the only reason I don't write about Ash is because I just can't write him! (It's sooo true, he crosses his arms and acts stubborn xDDD Julie is so right about that) lol I have to catch up fast! Lol omg yes... YESS...
OMG ASH... Yes! Just YES! Lol the only reason I don't write about Ash is because I just can't write him! (It's sooo true, he crosses his arms and acts stubborn xDDD Julie is so right about that) lol I have to catch up fast! Lol omg yes... YESS...
9/24/2014 c7 Revocate
Wow I love it. I can't wait to find out on what coming next.
Wow I love it. I can't wait to find out on what coming next.
9/21/2014 c7 guest
Crap I hope she's ok. Lol Ash just be grateful he did that. THERE IT IS! KILL IT. YES. Ouch...hopefully she won't wake up. Lol good job Puck. SHIT. HOW DID HE GET YOU TO THAT SIDE?! QUICK DO IT NOW! FINALLY. MEGHAN. Please be ok Meghan. NONONONO DO SOMETHING OH THANK YOU SO MUCH THANK GLOB THANK CATS WHATEVER EVERYTHING. Oh my glob that was so emotional sorry. Ha knight trumps centuries long court laws. Hopefully, but don't be so sure about that Ash. Please update!
Yeah sucks now, but it'll probably be worse trying to get a job or something. He's definitely gonna do it, because he's her knight and he didn't go through all THAT for nothing. Plus I don't think he can break promises anyway lol. Please update!
Crap I hope she's ok. Lol Ash just be grateful he did that. THERE IT IS! KILL IT. YES. Ouch...hopefully she won't wake up. Lol good job Puck. SHIT. HOW DID HE GET YOU TO THAT SIDE?! QUICK DO IT NOW! FINALLY. MEGHAN. Please be ok Meghan. NONONONO DO SOMETHING OH THANK YOU SO MUCH THANK GLOB THANK CATS WHATEVER EVERYTHING. Oh my glob that was so emotional sorry. Ha knight trumps centuries long court laws. Hopefully, but don't be so sure about that Ash. Please update!
Yeah sucks now, but it'll probably be worse trying to get a job or something. He's definitely gonna do it, because he's her knight and he didn't go through all THAT for nothing. Plus I don't think he can break promises anyway lol. Please update!
9/11/2014 c6 guest
Thank goodness they're getting closer. Puck don't, and Ash you do NOT wanna know. LOL them again. Oh crap it's like she's psychic. Unfortunately no, man his life sucks. OoO didn't see that coming. Fudge, if you see it please kill it. -_- that's fey speak for big and dangerous, why now?! I don't think that EVER happened, except maybe with Meghan. Lol Puck should have recorded that. Oh my glob someone burn that thing already, look at Meghan! I really want to kill something right now. No he's looking for her it's just that fate hates him (both of them). Why can't Puck just go and find her?! She's practically dying! He won't give up on you just keep thinking he'll come because he will! Oh crap. How are they still alive. Nooo why did she do that. Fuck. YOU TWO, KEEP MOVING. Yes. Keep moving, I'm not sure how long she'll old out. Awesome chapter :D I hate that thing though you should kill it. Painfully. Very painfully.
Crap they should find her fast. Oh yeah how come he's fine? You can hear that? What the...oh good they're supposed to go there. Lol he didn't let Puck say his comeback. Yeah now you have to save her! Frenemies I guess. Yay finally! I hope she's ok...and where IS he, they have to kill him slowly and painfully. Please update!
Thank goodness they're getting closer. Puck don't, and Ash you do NOT wanna know. LOL them again. Oh crap it's like she's psychic. Unfortunately no, man his life sucks. OoO didn't see that coming. Fudge, if you see it please kill it. -_- that's fey speak for big and dangerous, why now?! I don't think that EVER happened, except maybe with Meghan. Lol Puck should have recorded that. Oh my glob someone burn that thing already, look at Meghan! I really want to kill something right now. No he's looking for her it's just that fate hates him (both of them). Why can't Puck just go and find her?! She's practically dying! He won't give up on you just keep thinking he'll come because he will! Oh crap. How are they still alive. Nooo why did she do that. Fuck. YOU TWO, KEEP MOVING. Yes. Keep moving, I'm not sure how long she'll old out. Awesome chapter :D I hate that thing though you should kill it. Painfully. Very painfully.
Crap they should find her fast. Oh yeah how come he's fine? You can hear that? What the...oh good they're supposed to go there. Lol he didn't let Puck say his comeback. Yeah now you have to save her! Frenemies I guess. Yay finally! I hope she's ok...and where IS he, they have to kill him slowly and painfully. Please update!
9/10/2014 c6 4FaeryMeganChase
Oh my god, it feels like forever since you last updated, you're seriously scaring me though. I can't help thinking that Meghan is going to either not recognize Ash, think he's a illusion or think that Ash did all this to her. *shudders* I hope you update soon!
4FaeryMeganChaseOh my god, it feels like forever since you last updated, you're seriously scaring me though. I can't help thinking that Meghan is going to either not recognize Ash, think he's a illusion or think that Ash did all this to her. *shudders* I hope you update soon!
9/7/2014 c5 Revocate
I really like all the chapters. but, could you write more off what happened like did they rescue Meghan please!
I really like all the chapters. but, could you write more off what happened like did they rescue Meghan please!
9/4/2014 c5 2MaryWayland
Hello there! New reader here!
This was so amazing! I love it! Although my heart is breaking for Ash and his pain, I love this story.
Please update soon! :)
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
2MaryWaylandHello there! New reader here!
This was so amazing! I love it! Although my heart is breaking for Ash and his pain, I love this story.
Please update soon! :)
Can't wait to read the next chapter!