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7/30/2018 c1 1Peggy199
You made me cry
10/30/2015 c1 I am Crying
This story... just...amazing. I am crying right now ... OMG . I loved it. Well done!
9/2/2015 c1 2Uhyeahihaveaproblem
Sweet. It really shows how much they care about each other.
7/8/2015 c1 The Blue Winged Angel
I'm pretty sure I just actually FELT my heart shatter. This is wonderful. Never stop writing.
11/13/2014 c1 The Venom Symbiote
Ravenpaw dies?!
Nuuuuuu Ravenpaw!
:(
I love the chapter/description though! Thank Kira for me for making this idea and thank you for writing it!
8/15/2014 c1 20california poppyseed
ohgod
why
why must you torture my heart in this way
OH
lol
My eyes popped when I saw the 'Kira' part. Kira is my American name. XD
8/6/2014 c1 1trickle-of-thoughts
Aw! So sad! But good job! :)
8/4/2014 c1 cause I'm a liar
...Don't cry... don't cry... warriors don't cry.. *starts tearing up* just sweating from my eyes...Yeah...NOOO RAVENPAWWWWWW! *sob sob* WHY OH WHY SHOULD HE DIE- ahem. Good story. Very heartfelt. Yes. Can really make someone cry.
8/4/2014 c1 15Amberflame805
This was amazing. Very well written, beautiful.
*cries*
8/3/2014 c1 Lord of the North Wind
Why people like reading stories of grief I'll never know. But this is wellwritten and a little funny as well. But be warned this can induce heartbreak.
8/3/2014 c1 Mapleheart09
Great job on this. It has a mood set perfectly for death and it captures their last moments together great. You should be very proud of this piece. (:
8/1/2014 c1 26BewareTheShadows
Sad, but truly great story ending
7/31/2014 c1 13Sivillian
Ahckem Gloob! Almost made me cry!
7/31/2014 c1 13Eradrin
Awww, this is so sad, but so sweet!
7/31/2014 c1 12The-100th-Llama
Oh my gosh! This was great, the writing was great, EVERYTHING was great! I love the ending!
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