for Into the Realm of Magic12/17/2019 c9 SLay KinG
I'm confused, why can't/doesn't Ichigo walk on air/fly whatever it is they do
I'm confused, why can't/doesn't Ichigo walk on air/fly whatever it is they do
10/5/2019 c22 
2LONE RANGER 97
Loved this chapter it was great... Yeah I forgot about what else I was going to say so yeah sorry but I did love the chapter that part is true
2LONE RANGER 97Loved this chapter it was great... Yeah I forgot about what else I was going to say so yeah sorry but I did love the chapter that part is true
8/30/2019 c27 6intata
Personally, I've always hated the "fighting over the MC" thing in anime. I don't know why, or how people get off on that. Having girls fight over me would just be annoying. Flattering, sure, but it's tedious. I hate harems in general. The one-to-one relationships are much more intimate, and less stressful. I've noticed that Harems always focus on the physical aspect of a relationship, where a monogamous one is more relatable and far more interesting in that it focuses on breaking down the characters themselves.
Harem: porn.
Monogamous: story.
I don't understand the idea of writing a non-porn Harem fic, because THAT'S the niche for it. This is rated T, meaning every draw for the 'fantasy' of it is squandered.
Basically, what I'm trying to say is that I've been skipping 80% of everything since Erza and Mira 'confessed' and started fighting. It's uninteresting.
6intataPersonally, I've always hated the "fighting over the MC" thing in anime. I don't know why, or how people get off on that. Having girls fight over me would just be annoying. Flattering, sure, but it's tedious. I hate harems in general. The one-to-one relationships are much more intimate, and less stressful. I've noticed that Harems always focus on the physical aspect of a relationship, where a monogamous one is more relatable and far more interesting in that it focuses on breaking down the characters themselves.
Harem: porn.
Monogamous: story.
I don't understand the idea of writing a non-porn Harem fic, because THAT'S the niche for it. This is rated T, meaning every draw for the 'fantasy' of it is squandered.
Basically, what I'm trying to say is that I've been skipping 80% of everything since Erza and Mira 'confessed' and started fighting. It's uninteresting.
8/29/2019 c9 intata
Hey, so this is pretty good.
Only issues:
1. Conversations fly by quick, and they're blunt as crap. They really don't flow right, and it's hard to get immersed in them.
2. The fact that you carried over Ichigo's body. I mean I know it's a thing in the series, but it's always been a pretty shoddy gimmick for crappy plot lines, and was only funny the first time it became a problem. After that it was just annoying. It's still annoying. Every time he goes back to the body I just get this twitch in my eye that won't go away.
Hey, so this is pretty good.
Only issues:
1. Conversations fly by quick, and they're blunt as crap. They really don't flow right, and it's hard to get immersed in them.
2. The fact that you carried over Ichigo's body. I mean I know it's a thing in the series, but it's always been a pretty shoddy gimmick for crappy plot lines, and was only funny the first time it became a problem. After that it was just annoying. It's still annoying. Every time he goes back to the body I just get this twitch in my eye that won't go away.
8/8/2019 c2 Kel000
Ruined it for me when he basically has to separate his own body to use his powers. That was always annoying and he can easily die like that. Another is he has a big mouth. Goes to a new world and meets people he’s never seen before and doesn’t know and he instantly explains where he’s from who he is everything about his powers . That’s a huge fucking no.
Ruined it for me when he basically has to separate his own body to use his powers. That was always annoying and he can easily die like that. Another is he has a big mouth. Goes to a new world and meets people he’s never seen before and doesn’t know and he instantly explains where he’s from who he is everything about his powers . That’s a huge fucking no.
8/5/2019 c46 Declan Campbell
For the past few chapters now that I’ve read this story, you have been giving the same cliche bullshit descriptions for Erza’s hair for someone when they blush, it’s pretty dumb on your part and the whole your own original arc ughhhh except from the moments with Wendy and Ichigo.
Also the way you’ve portrayed Ichigo after the whole Phantom Lord Arc and Your Own Original Arc has truly killed his character in every way possible and that’s really saying something.
Erza and Mira character have also been killed from the way you’ve portrayed them and they are wayyyyy to boring by themselves with Ichigo. Jeez Cana would at least be interesting of a pairing by herself.
The only people you’ve portrayed properly have been Natsu, Happy, Gray, Lucy, Laxus, Mystogen, Jellal, Juvia and Gajeel.
The only positive thing I can say right now is that the interactions between Ichigo and Zangetsu (The Hollow is Zangetsu) have been the only fun thing to read since it does bring back some of Ichigo’s character back and the snarky sarcastic personality that they both share.
This is really my opinion on this story but somethings could’ve been done better. Especially the pairings since its way too predictable and basic.
Even the wording of things could’ve done better and described better.
The spelling mistakes were just annoying especially when you tried to explain to us that someone was very tall.
Some sentences also didn’t make any sense and that killed the flow of the story as well.
So I give your story a 6 out of 10 so far.
For the past few chapters now that I’ve read this story, you have been giving the same cliche bullshit descriptions for Erza’s hair for someone when they blush, it’s pretty dumb on your part and the whole your own original arc ughhhh except from the moments with Wendy and Ichigo.
Also the way you’ve portrayed Ichigo after the whole Phantom Lord Arc and Your Own Original Arc has truly killed his character in every way possible and that’s really saying something.
Erza and Mira character have also been killed from the way you’ve portrayed them and they are wayyyyy to boring by themselves with Ichigo. Jeez Cana would at least be interesting of a pairing by herself.
The only people you’ve portrayed properly have been Natsu, Happy, Gray, Lucy, Laxus, Mystogen, Jellal, Juvia and Gajeel.
The only positive thing I can say right now is that the interactions between Ichigo and Zangetsu (The Hollow is Zangetsu) have been the only fun thing to read since it does bring back some of Ichigo’s character back and the snarky sarcastic personality that they both share.
This is really my opinion on this story but somethings could’ve been done better. Especially the pairings since its way too predictable and basic.
Even the wording of things could’ve done better and described better.
The spelling mistakes were just annoying especially when you tried to explain to us that someone was very tall.
Some sentences also didn’t make any sense and that killed the flow of the story as well.
So I give your story a 6 out of 10 so far.
8/5/2019 c7 inistrad
you said what's next without spoiling anything I tip my nonexistent hat to you good sir
you said what's next without spoiling anything I tip my nonexistent hat to you good sir
7/23/2019 c31 T
Can I request that Ichigo get his True Shikai sometime? And maybe like a fully controlled Vasto-Bankai. Mainly because I think said form would be useful during either the tartaros or the new arc that I forgot. Mainly cuz I want him and August or Acnologia to Duke it out
Can I request that Ichigo get his True Shikai sometime? And maybe like a fully controlled Vasto-Bankai. Mainly because I think said form would be useful during either the tartaros or the new arc that I forgot. Mainly cuz I want him and August or Acnologia to Duke it out
7/19/2019 c70 CRAZYD1AMOND
really really good story though...better then most naruto/fairy tail crossovers...I said to much
really really good story though...better then most naruto/fairy tail crossovers...I said to much