for Dark Paradise8/5/2014 c1 malleelee
Bella must be at least old enough to hold a gun, and guns are heavy. Her mother definitely is lost, and that leaves Bella without help.
Bella must be at least old enough to hold a gun, and guns are heavy. Her mother definitely is lost, and that leaves Bella without help.
8/5/2014 c1 
13archy12
I think we can take the age gap after the last story. :)
Bella is in such a horrible place,and the saddest part is-it happens in real than we would like to think about.
Will she really kill James?Somehow I doubt injure him enough to make her escape?
13archy12I think we can take the age gap after the last story. :)
Bella is in such a horrible place,and the saddest part is-it happens in real than we would like to think about.
Will she really kill James?Somehow I doubt injure him enough to make her escape?
8/5/2014 c1 1Peyton23
Ahhhh ever since the post on Fic Sisters I've been dying for this to be posted and you never disappoint. Though this Bella is far from the glamorous one I'm used to hearing from Hollywood, I'm thoroughly enjoying it and cannot wait for more.
1Peyton23Ahhhh ever since the post on Fic Sisters I've been dying for this to be posted and you never disappoint. Though this Bella is far from the glamorous one I'm used to hearing from Hollywood, I'm thoroughly enjoying it and cannot wait for more.
8/5/2014 c1 Missy Robshipper aka miss247
I fucking hate mothers like that! Clean up your shit and look out for you damn kids!
I fucking hate mothers like that! Clean up your shit and look out for you damn kids!
8/5/2014 c1 trisha63
I think it's going to be a difficult story to hear but I am already drawn in and can't wait to see what happens next. Your children are sacred and I will never understand parents like Renee as she was given the extreme honor of raising a daughter and she just pisses it away. I hope Bella doesn't have to use the gun on James but seriously who would blame her. Great writing, as always gal. Take care, Trisha :}
I think it's going to be a difficult story to hear but I am already drawn in and can't wait to see what happens next. Your children are sacred and I will never understand parents like Renee as she was given the extreme honor of raising a daughter and she just pisses it away. I hope Bella doesn't have to use the gun on James but seriously who would blame her. Great writing, as always gal. Take care, Trisha :}
8/5/2014 c1 betsmecullen
Bella's life appears so bleak, hopefully she won't have to use the weapon. Looking forward to seeing how this pans out. Will we see Edward next chapter? I hope so. ;-)
Write on. Update when you can.
Bella's life appears so bleak, hopefully she won't have to use the weapon. Looking forward to seeing how this pans out. Will we see Edward next chapter? I hope so. ;-)
Write on. Update when you can.
8/5/2014 c1 biblepam
would be so very sad to have to live life like this. Even sadder to think how many really do
would be so very sad to have to live life like this. Even sadder to think how many really do
8/5/2014 c1 huntingforwitches
Awesome start!
Your Bella kind of reminds me of Josh from the movie Animal Kingdom in the way she reacts towards her mother - like she is so removed from what her mother does.
I can't wait to read more :)
Awesome start!
Your Bella kind of reminds me of Josh from the movie Animal Kingdom in the way she reacts towards her mother - like she is so removed from what her mother does.
I can't wait to read more :)
8/5/2014 c1 1Alice's White Rabbit
Wow, that was a pretty powerful first chapter. Bella's life is pretty hellacious. Can't believe (or maybe I can) her mother didn't even register what Bella said at the end. *shakes head*
Looking forward to where you will take us on this journey.
Thanks!
Sally
1Alice's White RabbitWow, that was a pretty powerful first chapter. Bella's life is pretty hellacious. Can't believe (or maybe I can) her mother didn't even register what Bella said at the end. *shakes head*
Looking forward to where you will take us on this journey.
Thanks!
Sally
8/5/2014 c1 2NKubie
I can tell this is going to be a bumpy but very interesting ride. (Speaking of your inspiration...) Count me in!
My heart breaks for Bella and what she's going through. I just hope that she doesn't have to go through too much shit to get through to Edward as well. She's been through plenty in her short life. I can't wait for her to leave.
Looking forward to more!
xo
Nan
2NKubieI can tell this is going to be a bumpy but very interesting ride. (Speaking of your inspiration...) Count me in!
My heart breaks for Bella and what she's going through. I just hope that she doesn't have to go through too much shit to get through to Edward as well. She's been through plenty in her short life. I can't wait for her to leave.
Looking forward to more!
xo
Nan