for Dark Paradise8/5/2014 c1 ohtobeyoung
Very sad. I feel very sorry for Bella. I can understand why she wants to live in a dream world. You're right though, if people don't want to listen, they won't hear what you say. Her mother chose her life, I'm hoping Bella won't follow suit.
Very sad. I feel very sorry for Bella. I can understand why she wants to live in a dream world. You're right though, if people don't want to listen, they won't hear what you say. Her mother chose her life, I'm hoping Bella won't follow suit.
8/5/2014 c1 
11SparrowNotes24
Hey, lovely. What a heartbreaking start. You've painted a perfectly dark yet vivid picture of Bella's life already. Can't wait to read more.
Kate xx
11SparrowNotes24Hey, lovely. What a heartbreaking start. You've painted a perfectly dark yet vivid picture of Bella's life already. Can't wait to read more.
Kate xx
8/5/2014 c1 2muchtrouble
I think you are an exceptional writer and am so glad you are offering us another story.
I think you are an exceptional writer and am so glad you are offering us another story.
8/5/2014 c1 9Ali OMalley Cat
I was sooo excited when I got the email to say you'd posted a new story!
I'm already heart broken, girl. I'm holding my breath for some happiness to come. Your characters are glorious in their realness and flaws. The way you write is beautiful. I'm so excited for this.
9Ali OMalley CatI was sooo excited when I got the email to say you'd posted a new story!
I'm already heart broken, girl. I'm holding my breath for some happiness to come. Your characters are glorious in their realness and flaws. The way you write is beautiful. I'm so excited for this.
8/5/2014 c1 7VampiresHaveLaws
You are brilliant and forever blow my mind, and I cannot wait for you to share this story with everyone.
I love it and you.
XOXO
7VampiresHaveLawsYou are brilliant and forever blow my mind, and I cannot wait for you to share this story with everyone.
I love it and you.
XOXO
8/5/2014 c1 Sarah Amin
Wondering where her father is ?
What is it with mothers refusing to see what their children are going through
Wondering where her father is ?
What is it with mothers refusing to see what their children are going through