for Dark Paradise12/13/2018 c41 azilized
I love this new chapter ! I love how you depict Bella's apprehension and hesitation. You make us really excited for them and what's happening in their relationship.
Thank you
I love this new chapter ! I love how you depict Bella's apprehension and hesitation. You make us really excited for them and what's happening in their relationship.
Thank you
12/13/2018 c42 Guest
I’m still so happy you’re posting again :) grateful you’re sharing your stories!
I’m still so happy you’re posting again :) grateful you’re sharing your stories!
12/6/2018 c41 
1Gigileexo
So glad I stumbled across this, really enjoying it so far, can't wait for the next update!
1GigileexoSo glad I stumbled across this, really enjoying it so far, can't wait for the next update!
12/2/2018 c41 12CandyCentric
She's alive!
It was so great to read the new updates from you! I still love this story _
12CandyCentricShe's alive!
It was so great to read the new updates from you! I still love this story _
11/28/2018 c41 lillianolivia.white
Ohhhhh, Im so glad for an update from you. I think Edward and Bella are coming along well. The main thing is that Edward has not used any drugs lately. They kind of live day to day, and this make out session was a big step for Bella. She has been abused and doesnt trust easily. I hope the fight Em got into was not too bad, and no one gets hurt.
Ohhhhh, Im so glad for an update from you. I think Edward and Bella are coming along well. The main thing is that Edward has not used any drugs lately. They kind of live day to day, and this make out session was a big step for Bella. She has been abused and doesnt trust easily. I hope the fight Em got into was not too bad, and no one gets hurt.
11/26/2018 c41 2NKubie
Well, at least they were making some progress. That's something. Stupid cockblocking Emmett!
Hope you'e feeling better!
xo
Nan
2NKubieWell, at least they were making some progress. That's something. Stupid cockblocking Emmett!
Hope you'e feeling better!
xo
Nan
11/26/2018 c41 Guest
Amazing. Love it!
Amazing. Love it!
11/25/2018 c41 Guest
I was sooo excited when I saw you updated again! I want Bella and Edward's relationship to progress SO BAD and I was SO ANNOYED with Alice in this chapter. Even though she wasn't really featured this time I'm very worried about her. I feel like something bad is gonna go down with her/Jasper/Marcus. Hope we see more of her in your next update!
I was sooo excited when I saw you updated again! I want Bella and Edward's relationship to progress SO BAD and I was SO ANNOYED with Alice in this chapter. Even though she wasn't really featured this time I'm very worried about her. I feel like something bad is gonna go down with her/Jasper/Marcus. Hope we see more of her in your next update!
11/25/2018 c37 Nikol
Oh my god I'm so happy you are back! I love your writing and I was hoping that you'd return one day to continue Dark Paradise!
Oh my god I'm so happy you are back! I love your writing and I was hoping that you'd return one day to continue Dark Paradise!
11/23/2018 c41 2Capricorn75
I tell people all the time I have a fetish for realistic dialogue in books and fic. A lot of people find it hard to write the way they speak. But you nailed it with Alice's rant there at the end :-)
2Capricorn75I tell people all the time I have a fetish for realistic dialogue in books and fic. A lot of people find it hard to write the way they speak. But you nailed it with Alice's rant there at the end :-)
11/23/2018 c41 5FluffyLiz
What a delight to see this story return. I must admit that when I get an update for a fic that's been absent for more than a year, I usually decide to just park it and wait to see if it actually gets completed - I've seen too many authors post a chapter after a really long absence and then simply disappear again, which I can never understand; if they've been away for 12 months, then why not just finish writing it and then start posting again. Having said that, I decided to take a chance after you gave us another chapter pretty quickly, as I just can't resist this story, even though I suspect things are not going to end well for these two. I do hope you are able to keep writing, as I'm longing to find out what happens.
5FluffyLizWhat a delight to see this story return. I must admit that when I get an update for a fic that's been absent for more than a year, I usually decide to just park it and wait to see if it actually gets completed - I've seen too many authors post a chapter after a really long absence and then simply disappear again, which I can never understand; if they've been away for 12 months, then why not just finish writing it and then start posting again. Having said that, I decided to take a chance after you gave us another chapter pretty quickly, as I just can't resist this story, even though I suspect things are not going to end well for these two. I do hope you are able to keep writing, as I'm longing to find out what happens.
11/23/2018 c41 KDMCAM
I did not remember edward being that old. I think i like it even more that he is a cradle robber. I had been worried for the longest time that she would be a notch on his belt but i see that he is letting her be in control & go at her own pace.
I did not remember edward being that old. I think i like it even more that he is a cradle robber. I had been worried for the longest time that she would be a notch on his belt but i see that he is letting her be in control & go at her own pace.