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21Shunya Toshiki
Alright, it's about time we see another update from you. And I'm glad it was this story.
Great work on it, keep up the good work.
21Shunya ToshikiAlright, it's about time we see another update from you. And I'm glad it was this story.
Great work on it, keep up the good work.
9/10/2020 c1 CrazyMr
Story is alright but the author must have some issues they are trying to work out by writing them into the story. Steve is an abusive drunk. Makes the kid they are taking care of cry then tries to force Robin to have sex with him right after. Dropped. They were in a relationship but this is not ok. Their is no reason for this to have been added to the story.
Story is alright but the author must have some issues they are trying to work out by writing them into the story. Steve is an abusive drunk. Makes the kid they are taking care of cry then tries to force Robin to have sex with him right after. Dropped. They were in a relationship but this is not ok. Their is no reason for this to have been added to the story.
9/7/2020 c1 werty13263
I just can't because the name Steve like how boring and uncreative can you get. like you write this whole story and steve is the best you can come up with seriously.
I just can't because the name Steve like how boring and uncreative can you get. like you write this whole story and steve is the best you can come up with seriously.
7/22/2020 c181 5Dustiniz117
Wouldn't Steves devil fruit be considered somewhat superior to Ovens, Smoothies and possibly Sabo's devil fruits? Or even Big Mom's Homie Prometheus?
Steve can produce hellfire which is hotter than ovens fruit, He can dry up Smooties sponge-like abilities shriveling her up like a rasin and possibly absorb all the heat from Prometheus?
can't wait to see what you got next!
5Dustiniz117Wouldn't Steves devil fruit be considered somewhat superior to Ovens, Smoothies and possibly Sabo's devil fruits? Or even Big Mom's Homie Prometheus?
Steve can produce hellfire which is hotter than ovens fruit, He can dry up Smooties sponge-like abilities shriveling her up like a rasin and possibly absorb all the heat from Prometheus?
can't wait to see what you got next!
7/16/2020 c180 Ax Deros Kuro
Good chapter, but the fruit of Katakuri is not a Logia, is a special paramecia.
Good chapter, but the fruit of Katakuri is not a Logia, is a special paramecia.
7/7/2020 c180 3Goku275
Pretty AWESOME story! PLEASE keep up the GREAT work, I am REALLY looking forward to read this story through to the end as well! :)
3Goku275Pretty AWESOME story! PLEASE keep up the GREAT work, I am REALLY looking forward to read this story through to the end as well! :)
6/30/2020 c1 Guest
Just caught up with your story and just wanted to say I am so glad that I finally found someone who is writing a one piece x male OC story and is so dedicated to it. Other people tend to quit pretty early on but you are an exception and I would just like to say thank you for all the work you put into this story.
Just caught up with your story and just wanted to say I am so glad that I finally found someone who is writing a one piece x male OC story and is so dedicated to it. Other people tend to quit pretty early on but you are an exception and I would just like to say thank you for all the work you put into this story.