for Tortured Soul11/29 c208 Guest
Bro egghead, the build up to egghead what are you doing
Bro egghead, the build up to egghead what are you doing
11/22 c207 ogatokusatsu
You know here interesting about Uta she not fan of ghost so IM image on next visit island before egghead it would be moment for Luffy, Uta and possible Nami i can see jelaousy on Nami and Uta to each other every time they with Luffy
Also image both Nami and Uta accidently kiss Luffy on that island
I can think Nami and Uta gonna butthead and insult each other
Luffy see both Uta and Nami more than just crew mate or childhood friend
And surprised Luffy know little bit on date stuff
You know here interesting about Uta she not fan of ghost so IM image on next visit island before egghead it would be moment for Luffy, Uta and possible Nami i can see jelaousy on Nami and Uta to each other every time they with Luffy
Also image both Nami and Uta accidently kiss Luffy on that island
I can think Nami and Uta gonna butthead and insult each other
Luffy see both Uta and Nami more than just crew mate or childhood friend
And surprised Luffy know little bit on date stuff
11/22 c206 Animemaster04
Maybe do one with Steve learning more about his devil powers and the straw hats landing on an island where they have fun scaring people with Steve’s power. Also one where they face their greatest fears and some arcs have a lot of family moments. There could also be a duet with Uta and Brook.
Maybe do one with Steve learning more about his devil powers and the straw hats landing on an island where they have fun scaring people with Steve’s power. Also one where they face their greatest fears and some arcs have a lot of family moments. There could also be a duet with Uta and Brook.
11/22 c206 Guest
Just do the normal chapters leading to egghead but include uta
Just do the normal chapters leading to egghead but include uta
11/21 c206 ogatokusatsu
How about Uta spend time with Luffy and Nami i would love see Uta and Nami rivalry born
But also love feeling for Luffy on both of them they maybe don't like each other kind zoro and sanji dynamic but they put different and rivalry aside protect their dear captain
Uta also good on spear so it would be good for ussop, brook and Franky create weapon for uta maybe building friendship between Uta, ussop and brook
I can see Uta build ussop confidence and brook give advice for Uta not just music but also relationship
Lily see Uta as good aunt especially called shanks and his pirate grandpa and grandma
How about Uta spend time with Luffy and Nami i would love see Uta and Nami rivalry born
But also love feeling for Luffy on both of them they maybe don't like each other kind zoro and sanji dynamic but they put different and rivalry aside protect their dear captain
Uta also good on spear so it would be good for ussop, brook and Franky create weapon for uta maybe building friendship between Uta, ussop and brook
I can see Uta build ussop confidence and brook give advice for Uta not just music but also relationship
Lily see Uta as good aunt especially called shanks and his pirate grandpa and grandma
11/21 c205 Guest
I love your frequent updates
I love your frequent updates
11/20 c205 ogatokusatsu
Let do original arc first to build relationship between Luffy, Uta and Nami pairing especially rivalry they Will be main focus on original arc
At end original arc it Will established Luffy, nami and Uta relationship including Luffy telling his true dream
Steve, rose, jinbei and ussop gonna like teasing those 3
Let do original arc first to build relationship between Luffy, Uta and Nami pairing especially rivalry they Will be main focus on original arc
At end original arc it Will established Luffy, nami and Uta relationship including Luffy telling his true dream
Steve, rose, jinbei and ussop gonna like teasing those 3
11/19 c204 ogatokusatsu
Oh thank God Uta join the crew IM so happy
Please do Uta building character on straw hat pirate first including build relationship between Luffy, Nami and Uta i don't mind see that especially rivalry between Uta and Nami like insult each other and many more
Oh thank God Uta join the crew IM so happy
Please do Uta building character on straw hat pirate first including build relationship between Luffy, Nami and Uta i don't mind see that especially rivalry between Uta and Nami like insult each other and many more
11/18 c202 ogatokusatsu
Please make Uta survive she already suffer she should got her own happy ending and maybe Luffy pairing with uta and Nami
I would love see Luffy save Uta life
I recommend you should probably checkout story called Uta idol by odd tanjiro in ao3
Please make Uta survive she already suffer she should got her own happy ending and maybe Luffy pairing with uta and Nami
I would love see Luffy save Uta life
I recommend you should probably checkout story called Uta idol by odd tanjiro in ao3
11/16 c201 Animemaster04
It doesn’t matter if everyone says negatively about it, this is a good fanfiction story. It got interesting in the other half of the story
It doesn’t matter if everyone says negatively about it, this is a good fanfiction story. It got interesting in the other half of the story
11/15 c201 yogaratw607
Can you please add Uta on straw hat pirate on your story i would mind if see Luffy, Uta and Nami have unique relationship especially it would be interesting see Nami and Uta butthead a lot like Zoro and sanji
Can you please add Uta on straw hat pirate on your story i would mind if see Luffy, Uta and Nami have unique relationship especially it would be interesting see Nami and Uta butthead a lot like Zoro and sanji
8/26 c197 Dannjsd
Please I would like to see Steve surpass luffy cause why not they have the Sam dream
Please I would like to see Steve surpass luffy cause why not they have the Sam dream
7/25 c195 Dannjsd
I really hope Steve has advanced all three types of haki cause if not he shouldn’t share the captain role with someone that can clap his cheeks
I really hope Steve has advanced all three types of haki cause if not he shouldn’t share the captain role with someone that can clap his cheeks