for Tortured Soul9/30/2015 c93 Koncor the great
Lol the god wukong the sun king that luffys carecter is based is. A monkey talk about ironic if you didn't know better
Lol the god wukong the sun king that luffys carecter is based is. A monkey talk about ironic if you didn't know better
9/12/2015 c131 Coolcoast
Awesome chapter. I wonder how Steve will feel that he forgot about Robin. Keep it up:-)
Awesome chapter. I wonder how Steve will feel that he forgot about Robin. Keep it up:-)
7/17/2015 c124 
23Chance Green G King
Looking good!
Can't wait until the next chapter so keep me posted!
23Chance Green G KingLooking good!
Can't wait until the next chapter so keep me posted!
7/13/2015 c122 Guest
It's a great story but I think the straw hats are getting to big. Steve and Rose can be part of the crew, since their the main characters, but I don't think there's any way that Luffy would let Wyper or Monet join the crew. Having all these people have really limited the scene time of the rest of the crew. It makes no sense that these two have more dialogue than Chopper Usopp Franky Brook and Sank. I'm just saying give the crew more dialogue than the added characters. Right now the straw hats feel like side characters in their own crew.
It's a great story but I think the straw hats are getting to big. Steve and Rose can be part of the crew, since their the main characters, but I don't think there's any way that Luffy would let Wyper or Monet join the crew. Having all these people have really limited the scene time of the rest of the crew. It makes no sense that these two have more dialogue than Chopper Usopp Franky Brook and Sank. I'm just saying give the crew more dialogue than the added characters. Right now the straw hats feel like side characters in their own crew.
7/10/2015 c122 why
Idk if it's just me who's noticed but halfway through the fic chapter 50 or so it became a crack. and their is to many OC's to enjoy it.
Idk if it's just me who's noticed but halfway through the fic chapter 50 or so it became a crack. and their is to many OC's to enjoy it.
7/5/2015 c120 2Blue VanLocke
I rather Monet stay as a harpy ( though she ise her Wings as hands ) but thanks for save her.
2Blue VanLockeI rather Monet stay as a harpy ( though she ise her Wings as hands ) but thanks for save her.
6/19/2015 c119 AngelofDeath666
Oh she's Sugar's sister? Well my theory is out the window. Lets hope Monet isn't killed. And... YOUR GOING DOWN DOFIMINGO!
Oh she's Sugar's sister? Well my theory is out the window. Lets hope Monet isn't killed. And... YOUR GOING DOWN DOFIMINGO!
6/17/2015 c80 Anonymous
You are now 80 chapters in. As I write this you currently have 118 chapters. This is a pretty good story but you seriously need to get in to the "dark, dangerous, powerful devil fruit" that Steve gets and how he deals with it. Enough with the introducing of people. We all know what happens. He seriously needs to get this fruit and eat it soon.
You are now 80 chapters in. As I write this you currently have 118 chapters. This is a pretty good story but you seriously need to get in to the "dark, dangerous, powerful devil fruit" that Steve gets and how he deals with it. Enough with the introducing of people. We all know what happens. He seriously needs to get this fruit and eat it soon.
6/11/2015 c118 AngelofDeath666
Monet is either Lil's aunt or eldest sibling! I didn't see that coming
Monet is either Lil's aunt or eldest sibling! I didn't see that coming
6/7/2015 c117 AngelofDeath666
...HOLY CRAP! MONET IS LIL'S AUNT! That I didn't see coming.
...HOLY CRAP! MONET IS LIL'S AUNT! That I didn't see coming.