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5/11/2020 c179 12ROCuevas
Good work
5/10/2020 c178 ROCuevas
Good work.
5/10/2020 c1 Dude
Shanks is a swordsman and here steve is with a whip not to mention that since Luffy has Gol D Rogers hat that means Shanks didn't think Steve was worthy of it since he's a year older than Luffy and got passed over. Honestly, Steve isn't captain material, first mate maybe but I don't think Steve is good enough to sit as an equal to Luffy, his dad didn't think so obviously, probably didn't even teach steve to throw a punch at all. The only time a man should use a whip is when he's indiana jones or he's a lion tamer, any other time and you're just a sexual deviant
5/9/2020 c1 Guest
What kind of name is Steve? This isn’t the modern world it’s one piece, so use names that is similar to the story you bum
5/8/2020 c177 ROCuevas
Good chapter.
4/30/2020 c176 ROCuevas
Good work on the chapter.
4/30/2020 c175 ROCuevas
Quite good work
4/28/2020 c173 ROCuevas
Quite good work.
4/26/2020 c172 ROCuevas
Really good work.
4/24/2020 c171 ROCuevas
Good chapter this was
4/21/2020 c19 Guest
So bad
4/21/2020 c17 Guest
Steve is a dick ,and I get the feeling you don’t like nami , your taking every opportunity to give her shit,he’s got a right attitude problem
4/18/2020 c170 ROCuevas
Really awesome.
12/2/2018 c93 4OFARiolu
The fact u used battle bunny riven was amazing love the LOL small crossover never played dota so i dont know those ones
12/2/2018 c4 1EnigmaticHufflepuff

I am a new reader and I already love this. Can't wait to read the rest of the chapters sensei.
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