for Tortured Soul5/10/2020 c1 Dude
Shanks is a swordsman and here steve is with a whip not to mention that since Luffy has Gol D Rogers hat that means Shanks didn't think Steve was worthy of it since he's a year older than Luffy and got passed over. Honestly, Steve isn't captain material, first mate maybe but I don't think Steve is good enough to sit as an equal to Luffy, his dad didn't think so obviously, probably didn't even teach steve to throw a punch at all. The only time a man should use a whip is when he's indiana jones or he's a lion tamer, any other time and you're just a sexual deviant
Shanks is a swordsman and here steve is with a whip not to mention that since Luffy has Gol D Rogers hat that means Shanks didn't think Steve was worthy of it since he's a year older than Luffy and got passed over. Honestly, Steve isn't captain material, first mate maybe but I don't think Steve is good enough to sit as an equal to Luffy, his dad didn't think so obviously, probably didn't even teach steve to throw a punch at all. The only time a man should use a whip is when he's indiana jones or he's a lion tamer, any other time and you're just a sexual deviant
5/9/2020 c1 Guest
What kind of name is Steve? This isn’t the modern world it’s one piece, so use names that is similar to the story you bum
What kind of name is Steve? This isn’t the modern world it’s one piece, so use names that is similar to the story you bum
4/21/2020 c19 Guest
So bad
So bad
4/21/2020 c17 Guest
Steve is a dick ,and I get the feeling you don’t like nami , your taking every opportunity to give her shit,he’s got a right attitude problem
Steve is a dick ,and I get the feeling you don’t like nami , your taking every opportunity to give her shit,he’s got a right attitude problem
12/2/2018 c93 
4OFARiolu
The fact u used battle bunny riven was amazing love the LOL small crossover never played dota so i dont know those ones
4OFARioluThe fact u used battle bunny riven was amazing love the LOL small crossover never played dota so i dont know those ones
12/2/2018 c4 1EnigmaticHufflepuff
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I am a new reader and I already love this. Can't wait to read the rest of the chapters sensei.
1EnigmaticHufflepuffX X
I am a new reader and I already love this. Can't wait to read the rest of the chapters sensei.