for The Ten to Save Aincrad9/5/2014 c1 Great
Sounds really interesting so far
Sounds really interesting so far
9/7/2014 c3 
18Shinnypichu88
wonder how you'll handle the 4 "mystery skills" (referring to the fact that 6 of the 10 are known, we may see more in SAO progressive honestly)
We all know what's the strongest, and the "best", but what about the rest
18Shinnypichu88wonder how you'll handle the 4 "mystery skills" (referring to the fact that 6 of the 10 are known, we may see more in SAO progressive honestly)
We all know what's the strongest, and the "best", but what about the rest
9/7/2014 c1 Shinnypichu88
Pointing this out.
After the 90th floor the "unique skills" (all but duel blades and holy sword" were unlockable after the 90th floor.
Make's what you're doing rather mundane...(the fact that the game master owns a unique skill also doesn't help things, as now you'd only have 9...8 counting kirito)
Pointing this out.
After the 90th floor the "unique skills" (all but duel blades and holy sword" were unlockable after the 90th floor.
Make's what you're doing rather mundane...(the fact that the game master owns a unique skill also doesn't help things, as now you'd only have 9...8 counting kirito)
8/7/2014 c2 anime guy
when well chapter 3 be up?
when well chapter 3 be up?
8/7/2014 c1 anime guy
this is really good
this is really good
8/9/2014 c1 Ilokin
First off, you might want to describe the Town out Beginnings. I mean, we know how out looks, but just saying he takes it all in isn't doing it. Also, I'm not sure about a six hit combo level one, due to the fact that the combos get longer as you level. You should edit that. Other then that, I'm really liking this fanfic. Keep updating!
First off, you might want to describe the Town out Beginnings. I mean, we know how out looks, but just saying he takes it all in isn't doing it. Also, I'm not sure about a six hit combo level one, due to the fact that the combos get longer as you level. You should edit that. Other then that, I'm really liking this fanfic. Keep updating!
8/6/2014 c1 CoolKidAnon
I like the beginning of this tale, but longer chapters please
I like the beginning of this tale, but longer chapters please