for Pokemon: Moths to a Flame1/2/2015 c3 
2Stickermans50
I'll surely vote in the pole but first...The chapter was as good as usual *Nods* but there were something bothering me and those are somethings i've been saying in the past two chapters. A little more space between the sentence would really make it way better and easier to read. It's a shame you hate Oc's because my fic is full of them Lol. So LB is a "How To : Creative Writing" book. LMAO.
2Stickermans50I'll surely vote in the pole but first...The chapter was as good as usual *Nods* but there were something bothering me and those are somethings i've been saying in the past two chapters. A little more space between the sentence would really make it way better and easier to read. It's a shame you hate Oc's because my fic is full of them Lol. So LB is a "How To : Creative Writing" book. LMAO.
1/2/2015 c2 Stickermans50
Lol. The author's notes in the beginning were fun to read. Good to see Cynthia being a badass. The story is going really good but another thing i must point out is give a little bit of space between paragraphs really would help flow the story nicely and a little bit of grammar mistakes but nothing big so don't worry.
"Bottom A/N of each chapter would to ask opinions...Would get me more reviews XD" LMAO.
Lol. The author's notes in the beginning were fun to read. Good to see Cynthia being a badass. The story is going really good but another thing i must point out is give a little bit of space between paragraphs really would help flow the story nicely and a little bit of grammar mistakes but nothing big so don't worry.
"Bottom A/N of each chapter would to ask opinions...Would get me more reviews XD" LMAO.
1/2/2015 c1 Stickermans50
Bro a very good start i must say. I was roaming the forum and found out that you needed 100 reviews to get in a community. Well here i'm helping LoL.
There were some punctuation mistakes, Which i hope will be improved in the next chapter. Cynthia in your fic is really bad-ass and i love that thing the most. So this is AshxCynthia huh ? Well let's read more and review.
Bro a very good start i must say. I was roaming the forum and found out that you needed 100 reviews to get in a community. Well here i'm helping LoL.
There were some punctuation mistakes, Which i hope will be improved in the next chapter. Cynthia in your fic is really bad-ass and i love that thing the most. So this is AshxCynthia huh ? Well let's read more and review.