for Pokemon: Moths to a Flame1/2/2015 c4 
2Stickermans50
Woah an awesome chapter bro. A huge cliffhanger which is good, Attracts the readers. Like me LoL. The punctuation problem is gone and the writing has gotten a lot better. A little more work and it'll be the best one ever. This is the longest chapter you wrote so Congratulations for that bro. The only thing bugging me is there is very little space in the sentences. Other than that Solid fic.
I just hope Cynthia doesn't kill Ash Lol.
2Stickermans50Woah an awesome chapter bro. A huge cliffhanger which is good, Attracts the readers. Like me LoL. The punctuation problem is gone and the writing has gotten a lot better. A little more work and it'll be the best one ever. This is the longest chapter you wrote so Congratulations for that bro. The only thing bugging me is there is very little space in the sentences. Other than that Solid fic.
I just hope Cynthia doesn't kill Ash Lol.
1/2/2015 c3 Stickermans50
I'll surely vote in the pole but first...The chapter was as good as usual *Nods* but there were something bothering me and those are somethings i've been saying in the past two chapters. A little more space between the sentence would really make it way better and easier to read. It's a shame you hate Oc's because my fic is full of them Lol. So LB is a "How To : Creative Writing" book. LMAO.
I'll surely vote in the pole but first...The chapter was as good as usual *Nods* but there were something bothering me and those are somethings i've been saying in the past two chapters. A little more space between the sentence would really make it way better and easier to read. It's a shame you hate Oc's because my fic is full of them Lol. So LB is a "How To : Creative Writing" book. LMAO.
1/2/2015 c2 Stickermans50
Lol. The author's notes in the beginning were fun to read. Good to see Cynthia being a badass. The story is going really good but another thing i must point out is give a little bit of space between paragraphs really would help flow the story nicely and a little bit of grammar mistakes but nothing big so don't worry.
"Bottom A/N of each chapter would to ask opinions...Would get me more reviews XD" LMAO.
Lol. The author's notes in the beginning were fun to read. Good to see Cynthia being a badass. The story is going really good but another thing i must point out is give a little bit of space between paragraphs really would help flow the story nicely and a little bit of grammar mistakes but nothing big so don't worry.
"Bottom A/N of each chapter would to ask opinions...Would get me more reviews XD" LMAO.
1/2/2015 c1 Stickermans50
Bro a very good start i must say. I was roaming the forum and found out that you needed 100 reviews to get in a community. Well here i'm helping LoL.
There were some punctuation mistakes, Which i hope will be improved in the next chapter. Cynthia in your fic is really bad-ass and i love that thing the most. So this is AshxCynthia huh ? Well let's read more and review.
Bro a very good start i must say. I was roaming the forum and found out that you needed 100 reviews to get in a community. Well here i'm helping LoL.
There were some punctuation mistakes, Which i hope will be improved in the next chapter. Cynthia in your fic is really bad-ass and i love that thing the most. So this is AshxCynthia huh ? Well let's read more and review.