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8/30/2020 c2 1Tengen99
I'm honestly loved Ghost Nappa in parts 1 to 8. He was basically Deadpool in this FanFic. Although I would have wanted to see more interactions between Ghost Nappa and Broly, Revy, Dutch, Etc.

One hell OF a crazy rated M FanFic.
9/28/2018 c1 Guest
Yo
4/30/2018 c1 Slackboy101
I... Actually see Revy acting like this with Broly, she does seem to be a violence is a turn on and with Broly being a Saiyan with muscles on his muscles on his muscles... Yeah
2/2/2017 c9 2Kira192015
Update soon please!
1/22/2017 c9 Guest
Waste of potential
7/17/2016 c4 25JensenDaniels32
To Guest: I'm sorry, but all I see whenever I read your reviews as of today are, "I'm a bitch. Please kill me."
7/17/2016 c9 Guest
No haven't.. Keep in mind you will never make a real fiction
7/11/2016 c3 JensenDaniels32
To Guest: Meh, I've heard worse.
7/11/2016 c9 Guest
Wow Just like the other stories... Sucks dick
9/9/2015 c1 Guest
Needs a rewrite with broly staying as a legendary super saiying because in the black lagoon universe he'd be already considered a god also harem would ad drama with balaska revy and sawer

this is a request by the way not a demand also for the harem it would be good if Sawyer was added and have her voice healed by broly; Sawyer could be like his hinata all shy and blushing and would fall further in love when he gave a complement about he using her chainsaw

Please do this
2/10/2015 c1 nobody
I've read the whole thing, like where you were going with it but it be better if it were a bit more serious less comic more black lagoon reality if ya know what I mean plus it would add to the story if you made it a harem and instead of instant romance it could be a classic were all the women would fall for him for different reasons and compete to win his heart until later they would all agree to share him that's the kind of thing most people like in a story for revy it would be the same reason for sawyer it could be because of the whole psychopath thing for balaska it could be cause he's a warrior but its YOUR story I'm just offering do with it what you will
1/27/2015 c2 JensenDaniels32
TO GUEST: True, I have to agree that this one wasn't my best work. This one was my first crossover that I had ever done, but I can definitely see the flaws in my writing now that I've improved a bit.
1/26/2015 c1 Guest
Lame. Half Assed .
1/26/2015 c1 Guest
I really like this but I wish it was a harem with brolly x revy x sawyer x balaska
11/4/2014 c1 random
Come on do it you can make it at the end where brolys beaten the USA Russia and China he took their missiles away and threw them into space and they fear him and ask what he wants he's dressed in a tux goes up to the stage sawyer balaska and revy are watching it together as well as everyone elves in Ron Apure and then he says "Ron Apure is my territory if you in fade it again" his look then turns dark which turns on his women and says "I'll destroy your home burn your forests and shatter your lands you people call me a monster I'm not" he then smirks "I'm the devil himself you have been warned" if you take these ideas and do what you do you could make an awesome fanfic
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