
11/27/2015 c1
4computerman275
I think the story's good, but if you want to add stuff like Harry converting to Judaism, please give something like that its own chapter (Like if he was baptized or something). Also, if you want friendships to work, please explain more, and finally, FINISH the story, it's sad to see a crossover or story that's not finished.

I think the story's good, but if you want to add stuff like Harry converting to Judaism, please give something like that its own chapter (Like if he was baptized or something). Also, if you want friendships to work, please explain more, and finally, FINISH the story, it's sad to see a crossover or story that's not finished.