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5/2/2016 c5 Mark Sevy
Good job with this story. I really liked it. But I would really appreciate it if you could make the chapters longer and update soon.
4/6/2016 c5 Guest
Please continue
3/26/2016 c5 nicholas.souddress
Finally an actual plot when Natsu actually learned manners, I can't wait to see the end result.
I must say I'm new to your stories. May I ask you what is the general time frame between updates?
3/25/2016 c5 Abbanon
That was a great chapter again
Please update soon
3/22/2016 c5 TheGlimpseOfLifeAfterDeath
Why would we send flames? That is what Natsu is for.
3/22/2016 c5 TheLaughingStalk
I almost forgot about this, this chapter was satisfying, update soon.
3/22/2016 c5 Trason9
Interesting
3/22/2016 c5 2DdraigTrueEmperor9
This was a Good Chapter.
Man, that Battle was hard, thought for a moment there thinked that Natsu would lose, until that Azure Flames appeared and he started kicking butt again..

Wow, Natsu just had made a new Record the first person to ever see Hisui in her Undergarment, it would be Hilarious if Erza know about it.

Looking forward to read about Natsu and Hisui relation development.

Keep the Good Work. Until the New Update.
3/22/2016 c5 Xearthes
Man, that's brutal!
3/22/2016 c5 BlackDragonShinigami
Awesome story. Natsu/hisui is another one of those rare ships. And i really enjoy crack ships, as there are so many canon ships, as well as second running ships ike naruto/sakura or ones that arent even canon like natsu/ lucy or natsu /erza. And i dont like either of the last 3. Please update, bye bye
3/22/2016 c5 16Kaizer Daozang
A good chapter, I like the fight scene.
3/12/2016 c4 Hiddenmist12345
You making a good story here but there too much review responses. Another thing I'll like to add is make the story longer instead of short because this feels more like review responding then actually a story. Put 3 or 2 review responses in and thenot the rest pm them. More likely this going happen ppl are going lose interest in your story because all the reviews responses
1/14/2016 c4 Guest
please continue this story.
10/30/2015 c3 Guest
Mind stopping with writing half the entire page full of review responses?
9/12/2015 c1 natsuu224
Make more of this i love this story.
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