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7/18/2016 c24 5Bloodwitch Raven
A boy and his dog...
This version is alot more interesting than it's predecessors.
8/24/2015 c24 pikachucat
awesome more please
7/14/2015 c23 Flthy Frank
i love it
7/13/2015 c23 12Yoshtar
ok. two things. smaller thing first: the chapter is kinda short.
not complaining too loudly here, it's passable... just wish it were longer.

secondly, for the love of god man, proofread your bloody work man. so many simple grammatical errors are not picked up on by spellcheckers, and words can even be distorted, such as even becoming ever thanks to autocorrect.

that said, don't get me wrong: I love this fanfic, and want you to continue writing. seeing an update appear in my notifications inbox is one of the highlights of my morning/early afternoon.
just... you've let the quality go, man. simple stuff too.
I would recommend finding a good beta-reader whilst you're at it as well.
7/12/2015 c23 1The Blue Tigrex
That thing is long gone. Suppose this either means there's three or is the gore the same one that Joseph is using?
6/26/2015 c22 13Josephiroth
Hm, so Celes has a Kirin for a creature partner, an Elder Dragon, very interesting.
6/26/2015 c22 16Phoenix Champion
Never could figure out why Kirin was classified as an elder dragon, all the other dragons look like, well dragons, even Ceadus looks like a sea dragon mixed with a whale
6/26/2015 c22 1The Blue Tigrex
Wait, Zane got post traumatic stress disorder! That doesn't bode well.
6/20/2015 c21 The Blue Tigrex
Your back, and the bad guys return with you.

Maybe I should have Albert meet Cain and Khan not knowing who they are...
6/20/2015 c21 13Josephiroth
Heh, so that's what Zane been doing while Joseph and Ivy were busy in the Flooded Forest huh, interesting.
5/16/2015 c19 Lucky luxray
Sorry I changed from a bowguner
To a s&s user
5/15/2015 c20 Slyday
I find it extremely clever and amazing how guys have a group that contains different povs so that every corner of the story is covered. Keep up the good work guys!

I have read all of you guy's work. Big fan of your guys' work.
5/15/2015 c20 Lucky luxray
One thing I forgot is he is a rank 9
Bow gunner
5/15/2015 c1 Lucky luxray
I love your story so I thought I might
Submit an oc

Name: miles wolf

Looks: black curly hair. Dark brown eyes
We're glasses tan skin skinny and around
Average hight

Personality: always saying jokes
Only serious. When on hunts. Loves to
Read and will always read up on monsters
Before hunting them and always plans
Almost everything .

If you are planing to give monsters to the
Ops his favorite monster is the Monoblos
And if you are mabey you could add a
Monster tordement were tamed monsters
Try to flip each other over to win
And the prize could be a great set of armor
5/2/2015 c20 grim
This is brilliant keep writing. I'm on the edge of my seat.
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