for Follow The Tracks7/23/2024 c1 LovelySounds
Hey! I read this was back when I was 13. I’m 21 now. This is a story that stuck with me 3 glad I get to revisit it
Hey! I read this was back when I was 13. I’m 21 now. This is a story that stuck with me 3 glad I get to revisit it
10/12/2023 c1 
3Mikkiphoenix-haim31
Here from the start! Glad to see another old timer lmao (we’re the same age)
3Mikkiphoenix-haim31Here from the start! Glad to see another old timer lmao (we’re the same age)
8/25/2015 c13 stizzzy
I JUST FUCKIN FOUND OUT YOU HAVE A WATTPAD
I ACTUALLY HAVE AN ACCOUNT ON THAT
MY USER NAME IS stizzzy [Kawaii Panda]
JUST A HEADS UP FOR WHEN I FOLLOW!
I JUST FUCKIN FOUND OUT YOU HAVE A WATTPAD
I ACTUALLY HAVE AN ACCOUNT ON THAT
MY USER NAME IS stizzzy [Kawaii Panda]
JUST A HEADS UP FOR WHEN I FOLLOW!
8/25/2015 c11 stizzzy
OH
MY
GOSH
ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME WITH FEELZ?!
Jeez... Almost a year later, I come back to finish the story I had forgotten about... AND IT WAS AMAZINGGGGGG
Can't wait to start the sequel - that I hopefully won't forget about! :D I'm excited!
OH
MY
GOSH
ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME WITH FEELZ?!
Jeez... Almost a year later, I come back to finish the story I had forgotten about... AND IT WAS AMAZINGGGGGG
Can't wait to start the sequel - that I hopefully won't forget about! :D I'm excited!
5/12/2015 c7 Sam
Great story really enjoy it
Great story really enjoy it
3/28/2015 c11 loubearbby
Oh my gosh, I'm crying. This was so good. You have quite a talent! You should become an author just like Gordie. This was one of the best fanfics I've read in a while -
Oh my gosh, I'm crying. This was so good. You have quite a talent! You should become an author just like Gordie. This was one of the best fanfics I've read in a while -
3/26/2015 c11 3superw3nch
God, I just absolutely adored this story. They way it was written and just ugh. I can't even get it out because of the feels man. I swear every time I watch SBM I tear up a little because dammit the ending. And your story made me tear up a little, sweetie. Going into it I was a bit iffy because I thought this was going to be one of those fanfics where the girl this along and the guys fight over her and she ruins the whole damn plot with her Mary Sue like behavior, but it wasnt . No it wasn't. Tess was anything but a Mary Sue she was a good grounded character, someone I actually liked. It just blew my mind away. Her being there was realistic and made actual sense, bless your soul for that, and she didn't change up the plot.
So to conclude this ridiculously long review (sorry i was in my feels after finishing it.) I can say this is one of those better written fan fics on this site and is going in my gavs for all of entirnity. Thank you for writing this and have a good day, you beautiful human being.
Kelsei.
3superw3nchGod, I just absolutely adored this story. They way it was written and just ugh. I can't even get it out because of the feels man. I swear every time I watch SBM I tear up a little because dammit the ending. And your story made me tear up a little, sweetie. Going into it I was a bit iffy because I thought this was going to be one of those fanfics where the girl this along and the guys fight over her and she ruins the whole damn plot with her Mary Sue like behavior, but it wasnt . No it wasn't. Tess was anything but a Mary Sue she was a good grounded character, someone I actually liked. It just blew my mind away. Her being there was realistic and made actual sense, bless your soul for that, and she didn't change up the plot.
So to conclude this ridiculously long review (sorry i was in my feels after finishing it.) I can say this is one of those better written fan fics on this site and is going in my gavs for all of entirnity. Thank you for writing this and have a good day, you beautiful human being.
Kelsei.
1/25/2015 c11 3StandingByChambers
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
I HAVE BEEN INACTIVE ON HERE FOR SO LONG AND LET ME JUST SAY; THERE ARE A SHIT TON OF PEOPLE WRITING FANFICTION JUST BECAUSE THEY NEED A PLACE TO CHANNEL THEIR CRAZY FANGIRL/BOY HYPE GOING ON, BUT YOU, MY FRIEND, YOU HAVE ACTUAL TALENT! YOUR DESCRIPTIONS WERE FABULOUS, YOUR DIALOGUE WAS SUPERB, AND YOU HAD A BRILLIANT LITTLE SPARK OF WIT IN THE BACKGROUND THAT ADDED SO. MUCH. PERSONALITY TO THE PIECE. YOU OBVIOUSLY KNOW HOW TO PROOFREAD YOUR WORK AS WELL, BECAUSE I FOUND MINIMAL, SLIM TO NONE GRAMMAR AND SPELLING ERRORS THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE STORY, SHOWING THE MARK OF AN EXPERIENCED, THOUGHTFUL WRITER. I LOVED THE ORIGINALITY OF THE TITLE, I LOOOOOVVVVEEEDDD TESS SO SO FREAKING MUCH, OH MY GOSH, SHE IS MY QUEEN I CANNOT EXPRESS MY LOVE FOR HER SHE IS SPUNKY AND SASSY AND UGH SHE IS MY GOALS RN OKAY I USUALLY DONT LIKE OCS THAT MUCH BUT TESS BEING CHRIS'S TWIN SISTER SET SOMETHING DIFFERENT FOR ME. I HAVE READ SO, SO MANY VARIATIONS OF THIS ONE FREAKING STORY AND I SWEAR THIS HAS GOT TO BE ONE OF THE BEST, IF NOT !THE! BEST. WITTY AND FUNNY AND HUMOROUS AND SERIOUS AND TEAR JERKING AND THOUGHTFUL AND LOVING WAS FOLLOW THE TRACKS, AND I HOPE TO BE SEEING YOUR NAME ON THE COVER OF A NEW YORK TIMES BEST SELLER ALRIGHT OKAY YOU'D BETTER. I AM WATCHING YOU. THIS KIND OF WRITING NEEDS TO BE DISPLAYED FOR THE PUBLIC EYE OUTSIDE OF STAND BY ME-NESS. I AM WARNING YOU! YOU'D BETTER GET A NOVEL PUBLISHED BECAUSE I WILL SLAY A BITCH IF YOU DONT!
love,
tommy:)
3StandingByChambersWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
I HAVE BEEN INACTIVE ON HERE FOR SO LONG AND LET ME JUST SAY; THERE ARE A SHIT TON OF PEOPLE WRITING FANFICTION JUST BECAUSE THEY NEED A PLACE TO CHANNEL THEIR CRAZY FANGIRL/BOY HYPE GOING ON, BUT YOU, MY FRIEND, YOU HAVE ACTUAL TALENT! YOUR DESCRIPTIONS WERE FABULOUS, YOUR DIALOGUE WAS SUPERB, AND YOU HAD A BRILLIANT LITTLE SPARK OF WIT IN THE BACKGROUND THAT ADDED SO. MUCH. PERSONALITY TO THE PIECE. YOU OBVIOUSLY KNOW HOW TO PROOFREAD YOUR WORK AS WELL, BECAUSE I FOUND MINIMAL, SLIM TO NONE GRAMMAR AND SPELLING ERRORS THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE STORY, SHOWING THE MARK OF AN EXPERIENCED, THOUGHTFUL WRITER. I LOVED THE ORIGINALITY OF THE TITLE, I LOOOOOVVVVEEEDDD TESS SO SO FREAKING MUCH, OH MY GOSH, SHE IS MY QUEEN I CANNOT EXPRESS MY LOVE FOR HER SHE IS SPUNKY AND SASSY AND UGH SHE IS MY GOALS RN OKAY I USUALLY DONT LIKE OCS THAT MUCH BUT TESS BEING CHRIS'S TWIN SISTER SET SOMETHING DIFFERENT FOR ME. I HAVE READ SO, SO MANY VARIATIONS OF THIS ONE FREAKING STORY AND I SWEAR THIS HAS GOT TO BE ONE OF THE BEST, IF NOT !THE! BEST. WITTY AND FUNNY AND HUMOROUS AND SERIOUS AND TEAR JERKING AND THOUGHTFUL AND LOVING WAS FOLLOW THE TRACKS, AND I HOPE TO BE SEEING YOUR NAME ON THE COVER OF A NEW YORK TIMES BEST SELLER ALRIGHT OKAY YOU'D BETTER. I AM WATCHING YOU. THIS KIND OF WRITING NEEDS TO BE DISPLAYED FOR THE PUBLIC EYE OUTSIDE OF STAND BY ME-NESS. I AM WARNING YOU! YOU'D BETTER GET A NOVEL PUBLISHED BECAUSE I WILL SLAY A BITCH IF YOU DONT!
love,
tommy:)
1/18/2015 c11 Guest
What an amazing story . CONGRATS
What an amazing story . CONGRATS
12/28/2014 c11 Scripter21
Mind checking out my story? It is up, and not long, please just review what you see so far. I will be updating soon!
Mind checking out my story? It is up, and not long, please just review what you see so far. I will be updating soon!
12/28/2014 c11 62Izout
There, now that's much better. Pretty good story overall. As for the question, no not really, it's more of a eerie coincidence than anything.
62IzoutThere, now that's much better. Pretty good story overall. As for the question, no not really, it's more of a eerie coincidence than anything.
12/28/2014 c11 Guest
I loved this story!i love river phoenix so much,and whenever i read a fanfic about SBM,it really hits me hard when chris dies. I have never read a story where a sibling went along with the boys,and that made it even more emotional. This story was amazing:3
I loved this story!i love river phoenix so much,and whenever i read a fanfic about SBM,it really hits me hard when chris dies. I have never read a story where a sibling went along with the boys,and that made it even more emotional. This story was amazing:3
12/27/2014 c10 King Itchy
Right on! Congratulations for finishing! That's tough, I know. But you did it and you did it well.
I can't wait to talk with you more about it. : )
Here's to more stories told in the future.
Right on! Congratulations for finishing! That's tough, I know. But you did it and you did it well.
I can't wait to talk with you more about it. : )
Here's to more stories told in the future.