
4/6 c1 Guest
I like it! Good job
I like it! Good job
12/20/2024 c13 Istaki
Why is he throwing all that money around? He literally said how the Dursleys abused him and then he goes and gives them 3 million pounds just so they leave?
Why is he throwing all that money around? He literally said how the Dursleys abused him and then he goes and gives them 3 million pounds just so they leave?
7/5/2024 c29 Molenir
I wonder how Percy went back to Hogwarts in 4th year as a Prefect. Not even Head Boy.
I wonder how Percy went back to Hogwarts in 4th year as a Prefect. Not even Head Boy.
5/12/2024 c34 Linda
Good story
Good story
5/9/2024 c34 divvycrip
Very good story. The epilogue could have used more love, but the tale itself was very good
Very good story. The epilogue could have used more love, but the tale itself was very good
4/23/2023 c9 Guest
Just on chapter 9 and I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. I can hardly wait to continue.
Thanks again
Just on chapter 9 and I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. I can hardly wait to continue.
Thanks again
12/9/2022 c20 Ultach
Sorry, but the constant misuse of terms such as THEIR - THERE- & THEY'RE(as in THEY ARE) is just too aggravating not to comment.
Likewise the incorrect usage of TO & TOO, and the misuse of 'trail' when you mean 'trial'. Grrr!
Fingernails on chalkboards to the offspring of a primary school teacher who had grammar beaten into me. (1960's)
Please utilise GRAMMAR & SPELL CHECKS before posting. Pretty please?
Sorry, but the constant misuse of terms such as THEIR - THERE- & THEY'RE(as in THEY ARE) is just too aggravating not to comment.
Likewise the incorrect usage of TO & TOO, and the misuse of 'trail' when you mean 'trial'. Grrr!
Fingernails on chalkboards to the offspring of a primary school teacher who had grammar beaten into me. (1960's)
Please utilise GRAMMAR & SPELL CHECKS before posting. Pretty please?
10/30/2022 c34
22madie080802
It was a fun read. I know that when you are just beginning on grammar and Syntax is an issue. But the story is good. There is always room for improvement. Thanks for sharing.

It was a fun read. I know that when you are just beginning on grammar and Syntax is an issue. But the story is good. There is always room for improvement. Thanks for sharing.
9/22/2022 c34 Cata
Great story I loved every bit ! Thank you !
Great story I loved every bit ! Thank you !
9/9/2022 c4 Guest
This is terrible. Poor spelling, poor syntax, poor plotting. Gratification at irs worst. Ouchie!
This is terrible. Poor spelling, poor syntax, poor plotting. Gratification at irs worst. Ouchie!
7/5/2022 c34 jaqmaq77
Enjoyed it, but the end felt very rushed, and missing out the Yule Ball? And poor Krum, he didn't deserve that. He was one of the good guys...
Enjoyed it, but the end felt very rushed, and missing out the Yule Ball? And poor Krum, he didn't deserve that. He was one of the good guys...