
10/2/2024 c7
15TheChamberofNagura
Nice, I've been waiting for this chapter and thought it'd be a long while for the next release. Nice chapter, good to see that the harem is growing strong and I'm interested to see how things will go from here. Keep at it dude!

Nice, I've been waiting for this chapter and thought it'd be a long while for the next release. Nice chapter, good to see that the harem is growing strong and I'm interested to see how things will go from here. Keep at it dude!
9/24/2024 c6 Guest
Delete this shit and don’t write shit like this again god betrayal stories are so stupid and cringe especially for a series like fairy tail they make no sense since it would never fucking happen idiot so delete and write something different.
Delete this shit and don’t write shit like this again god betrayal stories are so stupid and cringe especially for a series like fairy tail they make no sense since it would never fucking happen idiot so delete and write something different.
9/21/2024 c6 Guest
Burning pile of garbage delete this rtfn you dumbass mother fucker.
Burning pile of garbage delete this rtfn you dumbass mother fucker.
9/21/2024 c6 Guest
faggot ass nigger this story is fucking cringe
faggot ass nigger this story is fucking cringe
9/20/2024 c6 UnsanMusho
So that's what Narsu plans on doing, huh? i wonder how back they'll be able to go back with Natsu's and not to mention how much starin this will be placed on him? Cause i serusouly doubt he'll come out of using this spell without a scratch, thay woild be too OP even with the Sharingan/Rinnegan.
So that's what Narsu plans on doing, huh? i wonder how back they'll be able to go back with Natsu's and not to mention how much starin this will be placed on him? Cause i serusouly doubt he'll come out of using this spell without a scratch, thay woild be too OP even with the Sharingan/Rinnegan.
9/20/2024 c6
1Spider-Man999
Definitely like Darth Vader. You missed the opportunity for Natsu to say "I am what you made me."

Definitely like Darth Vader. You missed the opportunity for Natsu to say "I am what you made me."
9/20/2024 c6 Almighty Izuku
Amazing chapter with FT finding who natsu was and Wendy somewhat breakdown from erza death
Please let Natsu forgive Wendy I don’t want her to be hated by natsu and maybe into his harem(perhaps a aging potion or Sky dragon slayer spell to help her age) I do love nawen
Amazing chapter with FT finding who natsu was and Wendy somewhat breakdown from erza death
Please let Natsu forgive Wendy I don’t want her to be hated by natsu and maybe into his harem(perhaps a aging potion or Sky dragon slayer spell to help her age) I do love nawen
9/20/2024 c5 Guest
Another betrayal garbage story delete this stupidity unless you somehow redeem Natsu into being a good guy again then this eill still remain garbage just delete and come up with a new idea.
Another betrayal garbage story delete this stupidity unless you somehow redeem Natsu into being a good guy again then this eill still remain garbage just delete and come up with a new idea.
9/20/2024 c5
15TheChamberofNagura
The excitement is heating up. I can't wait to see what's in store for the next chapter. Will Natsu reveal himself to the world, what about his attempts of manipulating Kagura? Also the dragons that will appear. There's just so much left to think about!
Keep at it dude!

The excitement is heating up. I can't wait to see what's in store for the next chapter. Will Natsu reveal himself to the world, what about his attempts of manipulating Kagura? Also the dragons that will appear. There's just so much left to think about!
Keep at it dude!
9/19/2024 c5 UnsanMusho
So its finally happening, i cant wait for the next chapter. To see if those who were also on the island and how they will rwac facing the consequence of their action.
So its finally happening, i cant wait for the next chapter. To see if those who were also on the island and how they will rwac facing the consequence of their action.
9/18/2024 c4
2AnimeAsim
I dont wanna sound condescending or anything but. Pls use less Ai in your work. Its not bad but just theres no human touch involved that could connect a reader with the characters. Most of the lines written atm is kinda bland.

I dont wanna sound condescending or anything but. Pls use less Ai in your work. Its not bad but just theres no human touch involved that could connect a reader with the characters. Most of the lines written atm is kinda bland.
9/18/2024 c4 The great hwuan
Great chapter
Great chapter
9/18/2024 c4 UnsanMusho
Things are really heating up now. I didnt expect Jimma to be taken out already. Also, with Mavis making an appearance in this chapter, it makes me wonder if she and the current master of Fairy Tail know the truth of what happened to Natsu?
Things are really heating up now. I didnt expect Jimma to be taken out already. Also, with Mavis making an appearance in this chapter, it makes me wonder if she and the current master of Fairy Tail know the truth of what happened to Natsu?