for ABreeC12/21/2018 c17 A Person
I would really like to see a continuation of L. It was really good.
I would really like to see a continuation of L. It was really good.
6/12/2017 c17 
62PurpleNicole531
Despite the dire circumstances, this chapter really made me laugh. I just loved how annoyed and immature Bree was acting, even though she was probably suffering a minor concussion, which isn't good, but still . . . It was kinda funny. :P And Adam, always the word of wisdom only when the situation demands it. And Chase, just fed up with everything as usual. I really did like this chapter. You did a great job with it and I thought the ending was fine, even if you think it wasn't. Sometimes it's hard to end a story, so I completely understand, but kudos for the effort! The only thing I'm curious about is how the heck Adam, Bree, and Chase ended up stranded in the middle of the ocean. I'm going to assume it's because of a mission, but the specifics aren't that important. I was just wondering. Anyways, looking forward to seeing what the Q chapter will be! If you want any suggestions, the only Q words that pop into my head at the moment would be Quantum and Quarantine, so you can use either of those if you want or if there's a better word suggested out there, you can use that too. See ya next time! :D
62PurpleNicole531Despite the dire circumstances, this chapter really made me laugh. I just loved how annoyed and immature Bree was acting, even though she was probably suffering a minor concussion, which isn't good, but still . . . It was kinda funny. :P And Adam, always the word of wisdom only when the situation demands it. And Chase, just fed up with everything as usual. I really did like this chapter. You did a great job with it and I thought the ending was fine, even if you think it wasn't. Sometimes it's hard to end a story, so I completely understand, but kudos for the effort! The only thing I'm curious about is how the heck Adam, Bree, and Chase ended up stranded in the middle of the ocean. I'm going to assume it's because of a mission, but the specifics aren't that important. I was just wondering. Anyways, looking forward to seeing what the Q chapter will be! If you want any suggestions, the only Q words that pop into my head at the moment would be Quantum and Quarantine, so you can use either of those if you want or if there's a better word suggested out there, you can use that too. See ya next time! :D
6/1/2017 c5 NCIS special agent1314
I absolutely loved this chapter and I can see me reading it over and over again.
I absolutely loved this chapter and I can see me reading it over and over again.
2/23/2017 c17 Blank and guest
I love this story the story line is amazing can you make more with a similar story line Bree is my favorite and I love story's about her even tho their aren't many.
I love this story the story line is amazing can you make more with a similar story line Bree is my favorite and I love story's about her even tho their aren't many.
2/20/2017 c16 Guest
Oh this was beautiful! I love it! So sad and sweet but then and oh!
Oh this was beautiful! I love it! So sad and sweet but then and oh!
2/14/2017 c17 Guest
Questions
Questions
2/14/2017 c17 Laura
Quiet, quick, quicksand,?
Quiet, quick, quicksand,?
2/11/2017 c16 Guest
Just read this story in one go and LOVE it! Please update soon?
For P, maybe personal? Pride? Privileges?
Just read this story in one go and LOVE it! Please update soon?
For P, maybe personal? Pride? Privileges?
1/5/2017 c16 Guest
Can you maybe do one where Bree is sick
Can you maybe do one where Bree is sick
12/29/2016 c16 Guest
This is a great story!
Past, passion?
This is a great story!
Past, passion?
12/27/2016 c15 3Shainy23
Great story please update
Maybe you could do a chapter where they are in the bionic academy and someone is trying to kill Bree. Most likely Sebastian as he turns evil
3Shainy23Great story please update
Maybe you could do a chapter where they are in the bionic academy and someone is trying to kill Bree. Most likely Sebastian as he turns evil
12/26/2016 c16 62PurpleNicole531
I just finished reading this entire story so far and it is amazing! I love reading stories involving family/sibling moments and this was a really great one to read! I also love that you're doing a chapter with a word for every letter of the alphabet. Very creative and clever! I assume you will be going all the way to Z and that would pretty much be the end of the story, but I'm still looking forward to seeing chapters for the rest of the letters! Unfortunately, at this point, I have no ideas for what P could be, but I'm sure you will eventually get some suggestions and figure something out. And even though you've said you're not very good with endings, I personally think you've had wonderful endings for every chapter so far! Amazing job! I hope to see this story completed to the very end of the alphabet and I look forward to the next chapter and finding out what the word for P will be! :D
62PurpleNicole531I just finished reading this entire story so far and it is amazing! I love reading stories involving family/sibling moments and this was a really great one to read! I also love that you're doing a chapter with a word for every letter of the alphabet. Very creative and clever! I assume you will be going all the way to Z and that would pretty much be the end of the story, but I'm still looking forward to seeing chapters for the rest of the letters! Unfortunately, at this point, I have no ideas for what P could be, but I'm sure you will eventually get some suggestions and figure something out. And even though you've said you're not very good with endings, I personally think you've had wonderful endings for every chapter so far! Amazing job! I hope to see this story completed to the very end of the alphabet and I look forward to the next chapter and finding out what the word for P will be! :D