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8/14/2014 c1 SunstreakersSquishy2.0
Sounds interesting My favorite transformers are Sideswipe and Sunstreaker
8/12/2014 c1 Guest
WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOUR CAPS-LOCK?
8/12/2014 c1 4Crimsondemon123
Its an interesting story, but having her as Sari's older sister is a bit MarySue.
She could have other parents and be Sari's best friend. Or maybe she could be a cousin.
This is if she has a human form.
If she is a cybertronian form, then you might want to keep her as just a bot Sari likes to hang round with.
If you want to keep your version however, make sure she is a believable character and keep the story reletive to the cartoon.
Otherwise, good luck. :)

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