Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for I am Cecily Herondale

8/17/2014 c2 6DreamsArelikeShotguns
You would love your beta...
But anyway back to the point. This is cool and unlike most people you used spell check.

Peace out girlscout

I am dauntless123789
8/13/2014 c2 27Jillessa Heronstairs
Ahhhh thank you for the dedication!
This is so intriguing, really!
It's so much easier to read now, so thank you for putting the different people talking in new paragraphs!
I love how Lucie and and Cecily converse inside her mind, because it's such an intersting idea!

Anyways, fantastic work! I am waiting anxiously for the next chapter!
8/12/2014 c1 bookowls
:) heh
8/12/2014 c1 6rainbowchameleon
Sounds intriguing. Can't wait to read more!
8/12/2014 c1 27Jillessa Heronstairs
Oh gosh I have to admit, this is so unique! I loved the entire idea of a modern day girl going back in time and being Cecily. Is this story going to go through all the events of CP2, bit from cecily/lucie's point of view?

I have a little advice. When you have a new person talking, make sure you put space between the paragraphs, like when Magnus is speaking to Lucie, or when Lucie is communicating with Cecily through her mind. It looks a little bit squished together right now, and it's a bit confusing.

Also, I was wondering, when in the books is the scene you are describing in the third paragraph?

Otherwise, great job! I'm eager to read more and see what happens!

Sorry for such a long review. :)

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service