FanFiction.Net
Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for Desires and Delusions

6/13/2021 c1 Guest
Hahahah what the fuck did I just read in the comment section? Daphne did not and will never "learn her lesson" thats what the segment with Astoria is all for. Even her own fucking sister thinks she cannot change.

I reiterate, this is one of those fucking church sermons about not giving up on your partner. In this case, Daphne shows no signs of change, she is still the same person, and has not tried to become any better, either for herself, Harry, or their relationship. She most obviously does not give a shit about him, but enjoys the fact that she has manipulated him to the point he cannot break away. This relationship is terrible, and Daphne needs to be taken into an asylum. She is a danger to society.
6/13/2021 c1 Guest
this is #notgood. progress is #good. Harry is #lame. daphne is a #bitch.

this reads like those fucking church sermons about not giving up on your partner.
5/11/2021 c1 K
Enjoyable piece.
7/10/2020 c1 Guest
He a simp
2/13/2019 c1 5Scenics
total shit...yes I agree that it was greatly written yet I totally disagree with you on the plot...
1/19/2019 c1 37kenriot1214
Harry is such a cuc k no man should be okay with infidelity. He is Harry Potter he has his pick of any witch why would he be hung up on someone who cheated on him .
1/12/2019 c1 2Zer0erZ
I can't say I'm off huge fan of this type of Story but this is a really well done one and I enjoy it, though I do wish Harry or Daphne had talked about it more or that it Continued
9/7/2017 c1 1Baphiwens
But if you ever do continue make sure harry isn't so week,He's too forgiving,Daphe took advantage of that.
9/7/2017 c1 Baphiwens
Can there be like a continuation,I feel like it does have carry on with it by like,Daphne still having a bit more trouble with staying loyal and Harry being Fed up for good and leaving her,then she does everything in her power to get him back,Idk,just please continue some how.
8/3/2017 c1 2Arrow3ss
Honestly, I was wondering if the last part were a delusion of either Harry or Daphne due to either's deep desire to be with the other. Daphne for regretting her grievous mistakes and wanting to finally be serious with Harry, and Harry for his stubborn love for Daphne who he never really got over of.
3/25/2016 c1 Guest
There wasn't really any resolution to this story. Harry is a weak idiot and Daphne is the typical cliched Slytherin slut.
3/25/2016 c1 Guest
Lol, the whole plot was fucked up but it was an entertaining read. So props to you.
7/11/2015 c1 Tarix
There wont be any happy ending here, eh?
6/8/2015 c1 1blankdaze
Definitely not something that I'm used to, but... what can I say? It shows many unideal things which are strong motivators for a complete breakup, but may perseveres. If worded incorrectly, this story would have been the most ridiculous thing possible but it is exceptionally well written. Good job, but it didn't write settle will with me. I'm just not used to this sort of thing. Still, is now in my Favorite list.

Congratulations for a job well done.
10/21/2014 c1 Goose
If Harry is this spineless and weak, then he deserved to be treated like trash. The Harry in this fic is a simp, plain and simple.
24 Page 1 2 Next »

Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service