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for Isle Esme Rewrite Edward's POV

8/13/2014 c1 madnessdownunder2
try breaking it up, one long paragraph like this is not amusing. Each time someone speaks it's a new line!
8/13/2014 c1 27Eos Blaze 0402
there are few mistakes.
a couple of words left here and there between lines but overall its awesome.
its nice to read something in Edward's point of view for a change and the added scene from where he takes her to bed and makes love, its sweet in Edward Bella kinda way.
so in short a great one shot,
loved it.
hope you write something else soon.
-Eos
:)

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