for Not while I'm breathing7/3/2017 c1 Soubi's Beloved
I loved it! I don't like Eiri being so cold with Shu, but deep inside he's so lovely and kind! Thanks for this chapter :D
I loved it! I don't like Eiri being so cold with Shu, but deep inside he's so lovely and kind! Thanks for this chapter :D
12/17/2014 c3 Amethyst Ametrine
haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaggggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! i want moooooooooooooore, i got such feels...such feels. this has been one of the best fanfics i have read. thank you for writing this
haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaggggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! i want moooooooooooooore, i got such feels...such feels. this has been one of the best fanfics i have read. thank you for writing this
9/15/2014 c1 Guest
Yuki doesn't have blue eyes, they're golden brown. Also, in dialog, at the end of a sentence the punctuation doesn't come after quotation marks but before. So: ("You're safe now, everything's been taken care of".) is wrong, it should be: ("You're safe now, everything's been taken care of.")
Yuki doesn't have blue eyes, they're golden brown. Also, in dialog, at the end of a sentence the punctuation doesn't come after quotation marks but before. So: ("You're safe now, everything's been taken care of".) is wrong, it should be: ("You're safe now, everything's been taken care of.")
8/23/2014 c3 
23Yoitemichealis
Sweet babies being sweet babies! Eeeeeee! They're so cute, I can't handle this. I'm really glad Shuichi's alright :)
23YoitemichealisSweet babies being sweet babies! Eeeeeee! They're so cute, I can't handle this. I'm really glad Shuichi's alright :)
8/19/2014 c2 Killer karebear
..., HOLY CRAP! They just murdered him. I knew those two we're crazy. I loved it. I'm so glad they did that tho.
Keep updating I really like the story.
..., HOLY CRAP! They just murdered him. I knew those two we're crazy. I loved it. I'm so glad they did that tho.
Keep updating I really like the story.
8/19/2014 c2 Yoitemichealis
Wow. Eiri really meant it when he said the offender would pay. Bye bye Hiroaki now maybe Shuichi will be safe!
Wow. Eiri really meant it when he said the offender would pay. Bye bye Hiroaki now maybe Shuichi will be safe!
8/15/2014 c1 23Yoitemichealis
Eiri and Shuichi never fail to break my heart... This characters are just so lovable. And your writing is just making me more and more attached to them. Poor Shuichi... I'm glad he has Eiri to protect him. I really loved this story, even though it almost brought me to tears
23YoitemichealisEiri and Shuichi never fail to break my heart... This characters are just so lovable. And your writing is just making me more and more attached to them. Poor Shuichi... I'm glad he has Eiri to protect him. I really loved this story, even though it almost brought me to tears
8/15/2014 c1 1I-Love-Trunks1
Aw, poor Shuichi. Eiri is so sweet, the way he always take care of the man he loves. They are so cute together! I love this pairing!
Could you please continue writing this story? I love it so much!
1I-Love-Trunks1Aw, poor Shuichi. Eiri is so sweet, the way he always take care of the man he loves. They are so cute together! I love this pairing!
Could you please continue writing this story? I love it so much!