for Bringing Down Thy Enemy8/19/2014 c3 
1artisticgurl
Does Raph have a thing for April or is he being protective?! I can't tell but it's cute! Update!
1artisticgurlDoes Raph have a thing for April or is he being protective?! I can't tell but it's cute! Update!
8/18/2014 c3 Tyler Schaffner
Wonderful flashback scene, Splinter is just perfect here. How will the Turtles react when April tells them the whole story? I'm very curious about that myself. Don't worry about not getting a new chapter up tomorrow, I'm patient enough to wait :)
Wonderful flashback scene, Splinter is just perfect here. How will the Turtles react when April tells them the whole story? I'm very curious about that myself. Don't worry about not getting a new chapter up tomorrow, I'm patient enough to wait :)
8/18/2014 c2 AprilFan4Eva
I think this has a good premise. It has an edge that shows family... seems that April is the main focus... but I would have liked to see her growing up with them as kids... & then becoming teens... but this is cute. Keep it up.
I think this has a good premise. It has an edge that shows family... seems that April is the main focus... but I would have liked to see her growing up with them as kids... & then becoming teens... but this is cute. Keep it up.
8/17/2014 c2 Tyler Schaffner
Very good. I love the characterization of the Turtles here. Mikey's little crush on April is really sweet, Donnie calling her "Ape" is pretty funny, and Leo and Raph are Leo and Raph. Don't worry about the fluff, I don't mind at all. Can't wait for what happens next.
Very good. I love the characterization of the Turtles here. Mikey's little crush on April is really sweet, Donnie calling her "Ape" is pretty funny, and Leo and Raph are Leo and Raph. Don't worry about the fluff, I don't mind at all. Can't wait for what happens next.
8/16/2014 c1 Athese
I love it!
I have seen the movie buy no suggestions so far :)
Although that threat was something you should continue with
Wanting for the next chapter
I love it!
I have seen the movie buy no suggestions so far :)
Although that threat was something you should continue with
Wanting for the next chapter
8/16/2014 c1 1artisticgurl
This caught my eye and I really loved the new movie! I'm gonna see it again for the third time soon! Love love love this!
1artisticgurlThis caught my eye and I really loved the new movie! I'm gonna see it again for the third time soon! Love love love this!
8/16/2014 c1 Dark Nightwatcher
Good start. :) I haven't got any ideas 'cause I haven't seen the movie.
Good start. :) I haven't got any ideas 'cause I haven't seen the movie.
8/16/2014 c1 Tyler Schaffner
Very good start. I haven't seen the new movie yet, so I don't really have any ideas for this one at the moment, but when I come up with one, I'll let you know. :)
Very good start. I haven't seen the new movie yet, so I don't really have any ideas for this one at the moment, but when I come up with one, I'll let you know. :)