for Strangers8/6/2017 c1 Lee3619
You know, I like it! I think you should continue the story a bit... maybe follow the developing relationship?
You know, I like it! I think you should continue the story a bit... maybe follow the developing relationship?
6/24/2017 c1 Jansfamily4
Well, that was different. Nice though. A twist on the characters. Again, good job.
Well, that was different. Nice though. A twist on the characters. Again, good job.
4/7/2015 c1 
4Miss Pseudonymous
This was very fun! I really like the style. You don't really know where you are or what's happening, and you figure things out as its going along. Very very cool. Do more!
4Miss PseudonymousThis was very fun! I really like the style. You don't really know where you are or what's happening, and you figure things out as its going along. Very very cool. Do more!
1/7/2015 c1 Incandescently
Wow I love this! But poor Georgie, I wonder what she's sick with? I think the way that you've omitted quotation marks really makes the reader pay a whole lot more attention! Really well written and put together - I can't wait for more of your works!
Wow I love this! But poor Georgie, I wonder what she's sick with? I think the way that you've omitted quotation marks really makes the reader pay a whole lot more attention! Really well written and put together - I can't wait for more of your works!
8/18/2014 c1 11teatat
I enjoyed that. I like the way their dialog gradually revealed the scene. Also, even though you just gave the dialogue I could feel a change in tone between when Darcy is talking to Georgiana and then when he talks to Lizzy afterward and turns so cold then when he comes back and he’s more vulnerable. Well done.
11teatatI enjoyed that. I like the way their dialog gradually revealed the scene. Also, even though you just gave the dialogue I could feel a change in tone between when Darcy is talking to Georgiana and then when he talks to Lizzy afterward and turns so cold then when he comes back and he’s more vulnerable. Well done.
8/18/2014 c1 14leafclover0120
Sweet. I think it worked but it does lose some of the possible thought process and expressions on our dear characters.
14leafclover0120Sweet. I think it worked but it does lose some of the possible thought process and expressions on our dear characters.
8/17/2014 c1 LoveInTheBattleField
Sailor Moon new anime has already aired four episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube. Good
Sailor Moon new anime has already aired four episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube. Good