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9/23/2014 c2 3The Grandeurs of Despair
That was cruel. Wonderful. But cruel (I really shouldn't have read it during class). Really good job though, as always. Poor Enjolras, I hope he opens the door and I really hope he doesn't do anything stupid. (Also I hope your friend is okay)
9/22/2014 c2 Jen
This is so so heartbreaking and yet so beautiful to read. I really like this. The phone call to Combeferre broke my heart and poor Courf... I really hope Enjolras finds the will to let his friends back in. No one should go through such grief by themselves. Great story! Please update soon!
9/22/2014 c2 20shadows-of-1832
This hurts but I love it.
9/22/2014 c2 thirteenthagent
This was beautiful. God, it hurt to read this. I feel bad for all three boys. I hope Courfeyrac will be allowed back into Enjolras' life. And Enjolras better not do anything stupid! I'm with Courf, sometimes I hate him.

This was amazing and I can't wait for more.
9/22/2014 c2 42Phoenixflames12
Oh darling, thank you, thank you, thank you for continuing this! It's such a lovely surprise to come back to after a full and tiring first day back at uni! Courfeyrac and Enjolras's emotional pain here was beautifully, heartbreakingly tangible here and so well done- I can't wait to see where you go from here and if Enjolras manages to let Courfeyrac back into his life again- I do hope so- I hate it when they're at odds especially now when they need each other so much!
Much love, please keep going and update when you can!
Phoenixflames12 xxxx
9/3/2014 c1 Phoenixflames12
Hear that? That's the sound of my heart breaking all over again and it is all your fault… It isn't really but seriously darling, this was incredible! The bleakness and pain, especially the final, heartbreaking scene between Enjolras and Combeferre- patient, loving Combeferre and angry, helpless Enjolras who doesn't want to understand what's happening and why it's so out of control- you portrayed it beautifully and I applaud you for it whilst apologising for not reviewing sooner!
Much love,
Phoenixflames12 xxxx
P.S If none of this makes sense it's because it's been written through a veil of tears- please accept them as fuel for your next update!
8/20/2014 c1 Guest
I can't express how I'm feeling right now, but just so you know, you wrecked me. This was incredibly sad. It was written really well though.
8/20/2014 c1 12Justice237
Holy ...

freaking ...

CRAP.

I have no words for this. At all. But only because I'm scared that if I do start saying stuff, I'll break down into tears.

You've probably read J91's story Wilting Flower, and my thoughts on that and this are pretty much the same:

That's ok, I didn't need my heart anyway . . .

*crawls into a corner and stays there*
8/18/2014 c1 13Chanty420
I just woke up in the morning and you make me cry:( Great, thank you:( But that just shows how good of an author you are! Poor Combeferre. Curious question though, what illness of Ferre did you have in mind?
8/18/2014 c1 thirteenthagent
I'm really sad now, but I loved it anyways. This was beautiful and it was wonderful to read something from you, even if it was sad. I can't wait to see what you write next.
8/18/2014 c1 21dancergrl1
I read this after I got off shift at work, and the explosion from Enjolras nearly made me cry. So totally not fair. This was really good though. I loved it.
8/18/2014 c1 33stagepageandscreen
Justvso you know, this broke my heart. It was fantastic as always but man that was bleak. Well done on another excellent piece!
SPAS or Libz
8/18/2014 c1 20La Patron-Minette
Wow.. This hurt. A lot. Great writing!
8/18/2014 c1 Guest
:'(

That is all.
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