for Thoughts in a Garden10/24/2016 c1 Guest
cute :) in violent sort of way :) excellent fic
cute :) in violent sort of way :) excellent fic
11/10/2014 c1 
14MapleKomori
Nice descriptions. This fic could use a spell-check, but the description of the place is really nice. I haven't seen Belarus and Canada paired, so this is an interesting one. I kind of get the feeling that she's mad at herself for thinking of him in such a way even though he's not her Beloved Brother. "Marrrrry meeeeee..." lol.
14MapleKomoriNice descriptions. This fic could use a spell-check, but the description of the place is really nice. I haven't seen Belarus and Canada paired, so this is an interesting one. I kind of get the feeling that she's mad at herself for thinking of him in such a way even though he's not her Beloved Brother. "Marrrrry meeeeee..." lol.
10/1/2014 c1 6Resistant Raisin
You're story was truly amazing and unique. It's very different from others considering that these two usually aren't paired together and it's not a direct sort of romance, but one that makes you think. It leaves me something to think about. The only critical comment I have is that some of your sentences are difficult to read and it seems like you're trying to add to much information in one. Other than that, it was a great story.
6Resistant RaisinYou're story was truly amazing and unique. It's very different from others considering that these two usually aren't paired together and it's not a direct sort of romance, but one that makes you think. It leaves me something to think about. The only critical comment I have is that some of your sentences are difficult to read and it seems like you're trying to add to much information in one. Other than that, it was a great story.
8/28/2014 c1 3ApocalypticalKitten
This was quite interesting, especially because these characters are not often put together so I had never really taken it into consideration as something I might like to read.I was pleasantly surprised. You have a unique writing style that is almost poetic and leaves me with an inexplicable nostalgic feeling, though sometimes your sentence structure is a bit hard to read. I encourage you to keeping writing!
3ApocalypticalKittenThis was quite interesting, especially because these characters are not often put together so I had never really taken it into consideration as something I might like to read.I was pleasantly surprised. You have a unique writing style that is almost poetic and leaves me with an inexplicable nostalgic feeling, though sometimes your sentence structure is a bit hard to read. I encourage you to keeping writing!