
8/27/2014 c1 thekeeper21
That is a very well writen story! I chocked up at the end and a coiple of tear felt down. Very emotionnal story!
That is a very well writen story! I chocked up at the end and a coiple of tear felt down. Very emotionnal story!
8/21/2014 c1
54tika12001
Beautiful! You made a typo on the word daughter but this is still just utterly beautiful. Painful of course, but I still loved it. Thanks for sharing

Beautiful! You made a typo on the word daughter but this is still just utterly beautiful. Painful of course, but I still loved it. Thanks for sharing
8/19/2014 c1 Guest
good work
good work
8/18/2014 c1 Guest
I'm not mad. You wrote down something light and caring and thoughtful.
Thank you
M.
I'm not mad. You wrote down something light and caring and thoughtful.
Thank you
M.
8/18/2014 c1 Guest
My heart is shattered.
My heart is shattered.