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20Spiritstrike
I really love how you captured my Roddy’s stubborn personality. Optimus was being an ass with changing his attitude to gentle and then enraged over Ylva being upset. Ylva was the stubborn one anyway by not talking to Roddy when he asked her if she needed help.
A swift kiss from Arcee? Damn. Although I think Roddys feeling a little confused after getting a kiss from Shotty. Are they gonna be a trio relationship? That be cool. Too bad Shotty swings in another direction. The drunken kiss from Shotty brings back my noodle incident with Mirage. haha!
Good job sis!
20SpiritstrikeI really love how you captured my Roddy’s stubborn personality. Optimus was being an ass with changing his attitude to gentle and then enraged over Ylva being upset. Ylva was the stubborn one anyway by not talking to Roddy when he asked her if she needed help.
A swift kiss from Arcee? Damn. Although I think Roddys feeling a little confused after getting a kiss from Shotty. Are they gonna be a trio relationship? That be cool. Too bad Shotty swings in another direction. The drunken kiss from Shotty brings back my noodle incident with Mirage. haha!
Good job sis!
3/18/2017 c13 Spiritstrike
Welp, didn't see Hot Shot kissing Roddy coming, definitely didn't! The fact that he was drunk he may not remember him doing that. I find it really sweet that Kickan has gotten attached to Roddy but I'm really happy that Roddy is taking on the role of Ylva's guardian. It would be good for him since after what happened with his previous human... rest in peace, Tracy Bloomwood... Roddy really misses you so much.
Thanks so much for updating sis, I've been waiting for this for so long!
Welp, didn't see Hot Shot kissing Roddy coming, definitely didn't! The fact that he was drunk he may not remember him doing that. I find it really sweet that Kickan has gotten attached to Roddy but I'm really happy that Roddy is taking on the role of Ylva's guardian. It would be good for him since after what happened with his previous human... rest in peace, Tracy Bloomwood... Roddy really misses you so much.
Thanks so much for updating sis, I've been waiting for this for so long!
7/5/2016 c12 Spiritstrike
Finally... its over for that bitch that did all those horrible things to Ylva, but its also sad that Ylva's mother had a case of the disorder, a divorce was a good thing. If anything she deserves that life sentence. Worth it.
Glad that Shotty feels like he's the father that Ylva never had, eventually Roddy's gonna share that same fate. She's gonna have TWO daddies! XDD It will be so cute!
Finally... its over for that bitch that did all those horrible things to Ylva, but its also sad that Ylva's mother had a case of the disorder, a divorce was a good thing. If anything she deserves that life sentence. Worth it.
Glad that Shotty feels like he's the father that Ylva never had, eventually Roddy's gonna share that same fate. She's gonna have TWO daddies! XDD It will be so cute!
9/9/2015 c11 Spiritstrike
Oh dear... this was really sad sis. I do not have much to say, for I am really sad for Ylva. Split personality disorder is really scary... Far too scary for one like her. I'm going to assume that Shotty takes her away and they head out on their own. I wonder why Shotty took so long to escape from those bastards. How did he escape? I've got to know more damnit!
Please, update again soon, sis! This is far too awesome!
Oh dear... this was really sad sis. I do not have much to say, for I am really sad for Ylva. Split personality disorder is really scary... Far too scary for one like her. I'm going to assume that Shotty takes her away and they head out on their own. I wonder why Shotty took so long to escape from those bastards. How did he escape? I've got to know more damnit!
Please, update again soon, sis! This is far too awesome!
1/30/2015 c7 Kat
I love this story. It's sad in some parts, but I like it :) I can't wait for the rest. You're awesome! :D
I love this story. It's sad in some parts, but I like it :) I can't wait for the rest. You're awesome! :D
12/27/2014 c5 russianwinter013
Poor Rodimus and Ylva! Please don't kill them off! And I didn't expect Starscream's death...but I guess he does deserve it...
Poor Rodimus and Ylva! Please don't kill them off! And I didn't expect Starscream's death...but I guess he does deserve it...
10/26/2014 c4 KittyKat
I LOVE THIS STORY! It's sooo interesting and exciting! I can't wait to read the rest! If you're even writing anymore (I hope you are, lol). You are Amazing! :D
I LOVE THIS STORY! It's sooo interesting and exciting! I can't wait to read the rest! If you're even writing anymore (I hope you are, lol). You are Amazing! :D
9/27/2014 c3 russianwinter013
I have to say, I did not expect that! Very entertaining! Can't wait for the next chapter!
I have to say, I did not expect that! Very entertaining! Can't wait for the next chapter!
9/26/2014 c1 2SamN5
U-oh, Rodimus is pissed! "Don't call me kid!" A very interesting start, I really love foreign languages so it was great to read Swedish in your work, though if you hadn't translated I would not have understood. The action was okay and the soundtrack is really enjoyable. I'm off to read more! (:
-Sam
2SamN5U-oh, Rodimus is pissed! "Don't call me kid!" A very interesting start, I really love foreign languages so it was great to read Swedish in your work, though if you hadn't translated I would not have understood. The action was okay and the soundtrack is really enjoyable. I'm off to read more! (:
-Sam
9/6/2014 c1 53russianwinter013
This is one of the best Transformers stories I've read! I love how you kept it serious in a way, but still kept Rodimus' humor. Also, Hot Shot's reaction to Rodimus being the leader of the Autobots..priceless! It would be greatly appreciated if you could continue this!
P.S. My internet's down on my laptop, so I couldn't listen to the songs while reading this on my phone, so sorry. :'( . I will when it comes back up!
53russianwinter013This is one of the best Transformers stories I've read! I love how you kept it serious in a way, but still kept Rodimus' humor. Also, Hot Shot's reaction to Rodimus being the leader of the Autobots..priceless! It would be greatly appreciated if you could continue this!
P.S. My internet's down on my laptop, so I couldn't listen to the songs while reading this on my phone, so sorry. :'( . I will when it comes back up!