for The Family Business3/5 c26 Arnoror
Don't get me wrong, I wouldn't have come this far if the story was bad. It's just it would have been more immersive to me if Hermione wasn't such a massive hypocrite and stubborn d*ck. It's kind of difficult to root with somebody you think is wrong.
Half the plot is her stopping self-sacrificing idiots from listening to angels, while she is a self-sacrificing idiot who listens to an angel. And all this only works because nobody gets pushy even after over a year. Sam and Dean have to much of a temper for that. As far as plot devices go, to me this is paper thin.
And I mean yeah it's Ron, but even him I can't imagine to propose to someone who avoided him for over a year.
I personally think this would have been an easier read, if the Ron thing was the background plot for the first half and solved there. The self-sacrifice plot should only have begun after meeting Hecate so it doesn't taint all the interactions beforehand.
Don't get me wrong, I wouldn't have come this far if the story was bad. It's just it would have been more immersive to me if Hermione wasn't such a massive hypocrite and stubborn d*ck. It's kind of difficult to root with somebody you think is wrong.
Half the plot is her stopping self-sacrificing idiots from listening to angels, while she is a self-sacrificing idiot who listens to an angel. And all this only works because nobody gets pushy even after over a year. Sam and Dean have to much of a temper for that. As far as plot devices go, to me this is paper thin.
And I mean yeah it's Ron, but even him I can't imagine to propose to someone who avoided him for over a year.
I personally think this would have been an easier read, if the Ron thing was the background plot for the first half and solved there. The self-sacrifice plot should only have begun after meeting Hecate so it doesn't taint all the interactions beforehand.
2/11 c30 adamfranklin.uu
Your story was a joy to read! The characters felt real, and the emotions kept me engaged throughout. I think it would look fantastic in a comic style, and I'm excited to bring it to life.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. I look forward to more of your stories!
Warm regards,
Addy.
Your story was a joy to read! The characters felt real, and the emotions kept me engaged throughout. I think it would look fantastic in a comic style, and I'm excited to bring it to life.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. I look forward to more of your stories!
Warm regards,
Addy.
1/9 c30 Naedine-Daki
I just wanted to take a moment to let you know how much I admire your incredible writing talent. Your story left such a strong impression on me, and I’d love the chance to chat with you about it.
I’m a commission-based digital artist with experience creating comics in collaboration with authors across various platforms. I genuinely believe your story would make an amazing comic, and I’d love to explore that possibility with you. I often find it challenging to reach out to authors and express my thoughts effectively, which is why I came across your profile and took the time to read your story.
Feel free to connect with me on Discord: lishafang
Or on Twitter: Pelu_Oficial123
I just wanted to take a moment to let you know how much I admire your incredible writing talent. Your story left such a strong impression on me, and I’d love the chance to chat with you about it.
I’m a commission-based digital artist with experience creating comics in collaboration with authors across various platforms. I genuinely believe your story would make an amazing comic, and I’d love to explore that possibility with you. I often find it challenging to reach out to authors and express my thoughts effectively, which is why I came across your profile and took the time to read your story.
Feel free to connect with me on Discord: lishafang
Or on Twitter: Pelu_Oficial123
11/20/2024 c30 mimhalennia
Thank you so much for everythingthis story has been a favourite of mine for years and to see it be given a loving conclusion is truly wonderful. Thank you for all the time, effort and love you poured into thisit’s been an absolute joy xx
Thank you so much for everythingthis story has been a favourite of mine for years and to see it be given a loving conclusion is truly wonderful. Thank you for all the time, effort and love you poured into thisit’s been an absolute joy xx
10/31/2024 c30 
1thejumpingbean14
reread this fic, and this epilogue for the first time, and i absolutely adore it! what a lovely ending to such a wonderful fic. this is one of my all time favorite spn xover fics. i love the way that you write hermione and sam and dean so much, and i love the changes that you made to spn canon. thank you for sharing this fic with us! 3
1thejumpingbean14reread this fic, and this epilogue for the first time, and i absolutely adore it! what a lovely ending to such a wonderful fic. this is one of my all time favorite spn xover fics. i love the way that you write hermione and sam and dean so much, and i love the changes that you made to spn canon. thank you for sharing this fic with us! 3
6/28/2024 c30 2Luna BlueMoon
Ten years... my how time flies...
I love this story, I really do. This and Soul Bonds are the few stories that I reread every year. To see it end is almost bitter sweet but I am happy none the less. Thank you so much for this.
2Luna BlueMoonTen years... my how time flies...
I love this story, I really do. This and Soul Bonds are the few stories that I reread every year. To see it end is almost bitter sweet but I am happy none the less. Thank you so much for this.
5/3/2024 c30 Dana
Obrigada. Obrigada de coração por nos trazer essa conclusão. Por anos lia essa história, sou apaixonada por ela, e esse final, mesmo resumido, fez a minha alma se emocionar, por algo que nem sabia se um dia iria poder terminar. PAZ, é a palavra que procuro. Muito, muito obrigada! Minha favorita Hermione/Dean, sempre vou voltar a ler, assim como fiz todos esses anos, e agora com ainda mais alegria.
Obrigada. Obrigada de coração por nos trazer essa conclusão. Por anos lia essa história, sou apaixonada por ela, e esse final, mesmo resumido, fez a minha alma se emocionar, por algo que nem sabia se um dia iria poder terminar. PAZ, é a palavra que procuro. Muito, muito obrigada! Minha favorita Hermione/Dean, sempre vou voltar a ler, assim como fiz todos esses anos, e agora com ainda mais alegria.
5/1/2024 c30 34s-damon-s
This was amazing, I was hooked and couldn't stop reading till the end. Your characterization was perfect and I am as impressed as obsessed! Consider me a fan... Thank you so much for all the wonderful moments I spent reading your story.
34s-damon-sThis was amazing, I was hooked and couldn't stop reading till the end. Your characterization was perfect and I am as impressed as obsessed! Consider me a fan... Thank you so much for all the wonderful moments I spent reading your story.
3/2/2024 c30 45DarkBalance
Ah! Finally finished! Thank you for completing this work after all this time. This has been one of my absolute favorite crossover works, and I'm pleased to see the happy ending. I wish you well on all your future projects_
45DarkBalanceAh! Finally finished! Thank you for completing this work after all this time. This has been one of my absolute favorite crossover works, and I'm pleased to see the happy ending. I wish you well on all your future projects_
10/21/2023 c30 Guest
This has always been one of my favourite fics. It’s one that I come back to often to reread all over again. While I am sad that there will not be more I am more happy that it was written in the first place.
This has always been one of my favourite fics. It’s one that I come back to often to reread all over again. While I am sad that there will not be more I am more happy that it was written in the first place.
9/4/2023 c30 3MaeBees
This makes me so happy. I read this for the first time probably in 2018-ish, and I’ve come back to it several times over the years because I loved it so much. I hope you’ll consider posting some of those excerpts in more detail, if you ever feel like they should see the light of day. Thank you so much for writing this fic, and thank you even more for sticking with it for so long.
3MaeBeesThis makes me so happy. I read this for the first time probably in 2018-ish, and I’ve come back to it several times over the years because I loved it so much. I hope you’ll consider posting some of those excerpts in more detail, if you ever feel like they should see the light of day. Thank you so much for writing this fic, and thank you even more for sticking with it for so long.
8/30/2023 c30 CasualReader
Love this story. I haven’t reread it in a long while and was feeling like it was the perfect story for the mood I’m in. To see that it had been updated and finished. My little heart was so happy. I binged it all again to truly appreciate what you’ve created and given to us to enjoy.
Sure the idea that you had a longer version and work put into it is fantastic and intriguing to know what it all says. But how you chose to end it, it’s perfect.
Thank you so much for sharing your story with us all!
Love this story. I haven’t reread it in a long while and was feeling like it was the perfect story for the mood I’m in. To see that it had been updated and finished. My little heart was so happy. I binged it all again to truly appreciate what you’ve created and given to us to enjoy.
Sure the idea that you had a longer version and work put into it is fantastic and intriguing to know what it all says. But how you chose to end it, it’s perfect.
Thank you so much for sharing your story with us all!
7/12/2023 c30 eli
Thank you for writing
Thank you for writing
7/8/2023 c30 Concrete63
Thank you for writing this story, especially thank you for a happy and wonderful ending.
Thank you for writing this story, especially thank you for a happy and wonderful ending.