1/15/2021 c18 3Amazonfire
I really enjoyed this chapter. I've read it twice now so as not to miss anything as there is lots of detail one can so easily miss.
Please keep it up as I hope you won't have given up on this story.
I really enjoyed this chapter. I've read it twice now so as not to miss anything as there is lots of detail one can so easily miss.
Please keep it up as I hope you won't have given up on this story.
8/13/2020 c18 50Rurrlock-God of Power
This was an awesome chapter. The chase and save with the young boy and Xena was well done and it's going to be interesting now that Princess Nysa is here. I like the fact that she snuck into the market place and saw Xena in action. I'm really intriuged to see what happens next and see how long Xena and Gabrielle can keep this act going and if they'll solve the mystery before anything tragic happens. I love this story and it's been so fun to come back to it. I'm sorry it took me forever to catch up, but I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter whenever it arrives. Best of luck to you. :)
This was an awesome chapter. The chase and save with the young boy and Xena was well done and it's going to be interesting now that Princess Nysa is here. I like the fact that she snuck into the market place and saw Xena in action. I'm really intriuged to see what happens next and see how long Xena and Gabrielle can keep this act going and if they'll solve the mystery before anything tragic happens. I love this story and it's been so fun to come back to it. I'm sorry it took me forever to catch up, but I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter whenever it arrives. Best of luck to you. :)
8/13/2020 c17 Rurrlock-God of Power
This was a great chapter focusing on Alexa and seeing how and why she is known as the people's princess. There's always a layer of tension that she's going to figure out that Tobias isn't really himself. I love the interactions between the characters and the little subtle details from their reactions whenever Xena speaks and surprises them with her answers. The descriptions of the poor part of the city and the people was well done and detailed. Great work. :)
This was a great chapter focusing on Alexa and seeing how and why she is known as the people's princess. There's always a layer of tension that she's going to figure out that Tobias isn't really himself. I love the interactions between the characters and the little subtle details from their reactions whenever Xena speaks and surprises them with her answers. The descriptions of the poor part of the city and the people was well done and detailed. Great work. :)
8/13/2020 c16 Rurrlock-God of Power
This was a wonderful chapter to read. I'm glad that Xena and Gabrielle got to spend the night with her back in her old body. I had a feeling that it was only going to be temporary, but that made the chapter and their moment feel more emotional. You did such a fantastic job with it. I was on the edge of my seat at the end thinking that someone was going to notice Gabrielle with 'Tobias'. Another fantastic chapter from you. Can't wait for more. Well done. :)
This was a wonderful chapter to read. I'm glad that Xena and Gabrielle got to spend the night with her back in her old body. I had a feeling that it was only going to be temporary, but that made the chapter and their moment feel more emotional. You did such a fantastic job with it. I was on the edge of my seat at the end thinking that someone was going to notice Gabrielle with 'Tobias'. Another fantastic chapter from you. Can't wait for more. Well done. :)
8/13/2020 c15 Rurrlock-God of Power
That was such a great ending to the chapter. I really wish I had your skill with building tension. I wonder if the potion will last or if it's only temporary? The scene with Xena and Dorian was a great bit of fun to read. I'm looking forward to what comes next. I hope that Xena is able to stay like this so that Gabrielle can see her again. :)
That was such a great ending to the chapter. I really wish I had your skill with building tension. I wonder if the potion will last or if it's only temporary? The scene with Xena and Dorian was a great bit of fun to read. I'm looking forward to what comes next. I hope that Xena is able to stay like this so that Gabrielle can see her again. :)
8/13/2020 c14 Rurrlock-God of Power
Nice chapter once again. I loved the description of Dorian's secret alchemy lab. You've got a great way of describing settings and giving them such a fantastical tone. I'm such a sucker for romantic pining, so I really do enjoy the moments where Xena and Gabrielle think about each other and long to be together again without needing to keep it a secret. Great work as always. :)
Nice chapter once again. I loved the description of Dorian's secret alchemy lab. You've got a great way of describing settings and giving them such a fantastical tone. I'm such a sucker for romantic pining, so I really do enjoy the moments where Xena and Gabrielle think about each other and long to be together again without needing to keep it a secret. Great work as always. :)
8/13/2020 c13 Rurrlock-God of Power
This was a really enjoyable chapter. I love the humour in this one too with Gabrielle and Xena's banter over her wedding attire, and the following scene was really well done too. You do such a good job of describing Xena's growing desire whenever she thinks about Gabrielle while trapped in her new body. Great work once again from you. I'm looking forward to seeing the meeting between Gabrielle and Dorian. :)
This was a really enjoyable chapter. I love the humour in this one too with Gabrielle and Xena's banter over her wedding attire, and the following scene was really well done too. You do such a good job of describing Xena's growing desire whenever she thinks about Gabrielle while trapped in her new body. Great work once again from you. I'm looking forward to seeing the meeting between Gabrielle and Dorian. :)
8/13/2020 c12 Rurrlock-God of Power
I love the scene with King Markas and Daedalus's argument. You do such a great job with build-up and escalation. The descriptions are well-written and I can vividly picture everything that's going on. I can really feel Xena's nerves as the Princess is due to arrive very soon. I'm so excited to see what happens next and if she can solve this before then. :)
I love the scene with King Markas and Daedalus's argument. You do such a great job with build-up and escalation. The descriptions are well-written and I can vividly picture everything that's going on. I can really feel Xena's nerves as the Princess is due to arrive very soon. I'm so excited to see what happens next and if she can solve this before then. :)
8/13/2020 c11 Rurrlock-God of Power
Great chapter once again. It's sad that Xena and Gabrielle can't properly be together yet, but I am hopeful that Dorian will be able to come up with something. I'm excited to see what happens and how the relationships will change the longer this goes on. Awesome stuff from you as always. :)
Great chapter once again. It's sad that Xena and Gabrielle can't properly be together yet, but I am hopeful that Dorian will be able to come up with something. I'm excited to see what happens and how the relationships will change the longer this goes on. Awesome stuff from you as always. :)
8/13/2020 c10 Rurrlock-God of Power
I really like the dynamics you have going on with the characters. The conversations between Gabrielle and Layla are sweet, and I like seeing Xena interact with Tobias's friends and family as him, it offers a great perspective into their lives and adds great tension as I fear that eventually one of them is going to realise that Xena is not who she says she is. I'm hopeful that Dorian is able to pull off the potion and get Xena back into her real body. Can't wait to see where the story goes next. :)
I really like the dynamics you have going on with the characters. The conversations between Gabrielle and Layla are sweet, and I like seeing Xena interact with Tobias's friends and family as him, it offers a great perspective into their lives and adds great tension as I fear that eventually one of them is going to realise that Xena is not who she says she is. I'm hopeful that Dorian is able to pull off the potion and get Xena back into her real body. Can't wait to see where the story goes next. :)
8/13/2020 c9 Rurrlock-God of Power
Another great chapter with Xena learning more about Tobias's family. I like how she still acts like herself and tries to confront the king. It really shows how strong-willed she still is, even in the body of someone else who sounds like her complete opposite. The scene with Layla was funny too. She definitely took Gabrielle's advice to the extreme. I really like the development. I can't wait to see where the rest of the story goes. Great work. :)
Another great chapter with Xena learning more about Tobias's family. I like how she still acts like herself and tries to confront the king. It really shows how strong-willed she still is, even in the body of someone else who sounds like her complete opposite. The scene with Layla was funny too. She definitely took Gabrielle's advice to the extreme. I really like the development. I can't wait to see where the rest of the story goes. Great work. :)
8/13/2020 c8 Rurrlock-God of Power
This was another great chapter. I loved the scene with Gabrielle and Layla with Gabrielle summing up her feelings towards Xena and how close they've become since they started their adventure together. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this story goes from here, especially if those close to the Prince begin to notice him acting differently. Really great work as always from you. :)
This was another great chapter. I loved the scene with Gabrielle and Layla with Gabrielle summing up her feelings towards Xena and how close they've become since they started their adventure together. I'm really looking forward to seeing where this story goes from here, especially if those close to the Prince begin to notice him acting differently. Really great work as always from you. :)
8/13/2020 c7 Rurrlock-God of Power
I really liked the fun conversation between Xena and Tobias. I'm glad to see that he's willing to help her and that we learned a bit more about what the real Tobias was like. I'm enjoying the mystery angle with who the attacker might be, I can't wait to see Xena use her new body to her advantage and figure out who is behind the attacks. I also really liked the scene with Gabrielle and Layla and her backstory with the Queen. You've done a really great job with the new characters. With the story and tone, this feels like I'm watching an actual episode from the series. It's great. Well done. :)
I really liked the fun conversation between Xena and Tobias. I'm glad to see that he's willing to help her and that we learned a bit more about what the real Tobias was like. I'm enjoying the mystery angle with who the attacker might be, I can't wait to see Xena use her new body to her advantage and figure out who is behind the attacks. I also really liked the scene with Gabrielle and Layla and her backstory with the Queen. You've done a really great job with the new characters. With the story and tone, this feels like I'm watching an actual episode from the series. It's great. Well done. :)
8/13/2020 c6 Rurrlock-God of Power
This was a great chapter. I need to skim through the previous ones to remind myself where I was when I last left off, but it was so much fun to jump back into this story. I've always been in awe with your writing and your way with details and emotions. The scene with Xena and Gabrielle was great and quite funny when Xena's new body started reacting to Gabrielle. That was also a great cliffhanger with Dorian. I wonder if he'll blow her cover? I can't wait to read the rest of this, it's so good to go back and read your chapters again. :)
This was a great chapter. I need to skim through the previous ones to remind myself where I was when I last left off, but it was so much fun to jump back into this story. I've always been in awe with your writing and your way with details and emotions. The scene with Xena and Gabrielle was great and quite funny when Xena's new body started reacting to Gabrielle. That was also a great cliffhanger with Dorian. I wonder if he'll blow her cover? I can't wait to read the rest of this, it's so good to go back and read your chapters again. :)