for The Rebel8/31/2014 c2 
16Anifan1
Another great chapter. Interesting description of Aftran's decision of how to make her human body look. I wonder if they should give her a new name (an alias?) when they talk about her. Aftran's not exactly a human name, you know? Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter.
16Anifan1Another great chapter. Interesting description of Aftran's decision of how to make her human body look. I wonder if they should give her a new name (an alias?) when they talk about her. Aftran's not exactly a human name, you know? Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter.
8/29/2014 c1 littlegreengamer
This is brilliant. :) I love how both Aftran and Cassie give their innermost memories in this.
This is brilliant. :) I love how both Aftran and Cassie give their innermost memories in this.
8/25/2014 c1 387Ember Nickel
Kharina! Amazing to see you around again, I see you liked my Aftran fic too! I think there's a lot of potential for AUs in this vein. Will be looking forward to seeing where this goes! :)
387Ember NickelKharina! Amazing to see you around again, I see you liked my Aftran fic too! I think there's a lot of potential for AUs in this vein. Will be looking forward to seeing where this goes! :)
8/25/2014 c1 16Anifan1
Very well written, but as you're the writer, that's hardly a surprise! Looking forward to the next chapter. If you decide to go in another direction (although the idea of human!Aftran is an interesting one), you COULD have her stay in Cassie and have Cassie go to the Chee every three days for her Kandrona rays. That's what Erek does with his Yeerk, after all. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!
16Anifan1Very well written, but as you're the writer, that's hardly a surprise! Looking forward to the next chapter. If you decide to go in another direction (although the idea of human!Aftran is an interesting one), you COULD have her stay in Cassie and have Cassie go to the Chee every three days for her Kandrona rays. That's what Erek does with his Yeerk, after all. Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!
8/25/2014 c1 RainEpelt
Humorus and sensible. I like it! Keep up the good work!
Humorus and sensible. I like it! Keep up the good work!