for A not so peaceful Summer Break10/16/2014 c8 Guest
CAN YOU PLEASE UPDATED SOON!
CAN YOU PLEASE UPDATED SOON!
10/5/2014 c7 LunarFanGoddess
well im not sure if it couts but shouldnt Lettuce call Daisuke - san- since she just met him
well im not sure if it couts but shouldnt Lettuce call Daisuke - san- since she just met him
10/2/2014 c7 
15Miqu
i love how you keep up the 2 pov's for each chapter
... ok idk why but i had this idea again:
letuce meets dark (because daisuke somehow transformed for unexplainable reasons) in an alleyway as he is trying to hide (for people who would recognize him) and then she helps him out after he saves her from some bullies...
(that would make such a good omake TwT)
hey you know,
not that i'm pushing you to do it or anything,
but if you added this idea in the story, it would be some more action,
also pudding will have a good reason to call dark her nii-pudding-san
(just kidding with the pudding-part of that word)
she could look up to him since he saved letuce (that also means he's not a threat... :p)
(lol i wonder if that would mean pudding'd go search dangerous places in an attempt to get saved by dark-pudding-kun (XD)... lol what would happen if alien boy showed up and kidnapped her? XD)
gosh i'm way too creative XD all these ideas
anyway be free to use any as you see fit
i know i'm overusing the pudding joke, but that's part because i am in the parodies sector n stuff :p
also if you got any grammar problems, i'll be glad to help out as a beta :p
15Miqui love how you keep up the 2 pov's for each chapter
... ok idk why but i had this idea again:
letuce meets dark (because daisuke somehow transformed for unexplainable reasons) in an alleyway as he is trying to hide (for people who would recognize him) and then she helps him out after he saves her from some bullies...
(that would make such a good omake TwT)
hey you know,
not that i'm pushing you to do it or anything,
but if you added this idea in the story, it would be some more action,
also pudding will have a good reason to call dark her nii-pudding-san
(just kidding with the pudding-part of that word)
she could look up to him since he saved letuce (that also means he's not a threat... :p)
(lol i wonder if that would mean pudding'd go search dangerous places in an attempt to get saved by dark-pudding-kun (XD)... lol what would happen if alien boy showed up and kidnapped her? XD)
gosh i'm way too creative XD all these ideas
anyway be free to use any as you see fit
i know i'm overusing the pudding joke, but that's part because i am in the parodies sector n stuff :p
also if you got any grammar problems, i'll be glad to help out as a beta :p
9/27/2014 c6 Miqu
i'm very sorry for the late review, i have school going on, my best buddy isn't walking the planet along with me anymore, ...
anyway i love it! XD
i kinda had a dream and it went like this;
( oh also i'm bad at names, so idk the names of the blonde guy who can turn into a cat for 10 minits and the brunet guy with the long ponytail XP)
dark was hanging upside down.
dark was hanging upside down?
he didn't know what hit him, but when he realized he was hanging upside down, he could see the ground, 100's of meters away.
then he fainted again.
'what happened to him?' a gentle voice was heard. (the brunet)
'he was hit by one of kisshu's monsters!' a girly, almost meowing voice said.
'well why of all places did you have to bring him here?' a very angry voice asked. (the blond)
dark opened his eyes and saw a tail. with a bell... and a bow...
'u-um excu-use me b-but he's w-waking up...' the voice of letuce said, as dark recognized it.
( then things went hysteric so I'm just gonna tell what happened)
dark was scanned by a machine
dark was stopped of getting away
dark became big brother pudding wether he liked it or not (monkeygirl clinging on his leg)
dark was stopped by brunet as brunet told him he had the power to activate his 'mewmewgene'
'like hell i'm gonna wear a dress!'
dark tries to escape - fails
(this is kinda where i woke up... i realized i was laughing in my sleep...
so... i hope that bit could inspire you a bit X3
again i love your story and please continue to update soon :p
(i should probably do that too DX I'm such a bad updater!)
i'm very sorry for the late review, i have school going on, my best buddy isn't walking the planet along with me anymore, ...
anyway i love it! XD
i kinda had a dream and it went like this;
( oh also i'm bad at names, so idk the names of the blonde guy who can turn into a cat for 10 minits and the brunet guy with the long ponytail XP)
dark was hanging upside down.
dark was hanging upside down?
he didn't know what hit him, but when he realized he was hanging upside down, he could see the ground, 100's of meters away.
then he fainted again.
'what happened to him?' a gentle voice was heard. (the brunet)
'he was hit by one of kisshu's monsters!' a girly, almost meowing voice said.
'well why of all places did you have to bring him here?' a very angry voice asked. (the blond)
dark opened his eyes and saw a tail. with a bell... and a bow...
'u-um excu-use me b-but he's w-waking up...' the voice of letuce said, as dark recognized it.
( then things went hysteric so I'm just gonna tell what happened)
dark was scanned by a machine
dark was stopped of getting away
dark became big brother pudding wether he liked it or not (monkeygirl clinging on his leg)
dark was stopped by brunet as brunet told him he had the power to activate his 'mewmewgene'
'like hell i'm gonna wear a dress!'
dark tries to escape - fails
(this is kinda where i woke up... i realized i was laughing in my sleep...
so... i hope that bit could inspire you a bit X3
again i love your story and please continue to update soon :p
(i should probably do that too DX I'm such a bad updater!)
9/15/2014 c5 Miqu
lol i finally got time to read it :3
school is such a pain in the ass :(
anyway, i love how you keep up the 2 pov's but maybe you could put something in like that one of the mew's thought it was a bit suspicious when Dark disappeared and Dai suddenly showed up :p
lol i finally got time to read it :3
school is such a pain in the ass :(
anyway, i love how you keep up the 2 pov's but maybe you could put something in like that one of the mew's thought it was a bit suspicious when Dark disappeared and Dai suddenly showed up :p
9/11/2014 c4 BlackHeart
You have my attention and hope to see more soon.
You have my attention and hope to see more soon.
9/7/2014 c4 Miqu
is this gonna turn into the 'they can't catch me MWAHAHAHAHA'
*dark was captured*
'curseword!' XD
also, having daisuke go to the cafe would be an idea XD
maybe they get a weird reading from him, you know if you would have a machine that tells you the weirdness from someone, you could read it of?
also you should do something with that guy who's able to turn into a cat, and let him spy on daisuke XD just giving ideas if its ok,
anyway im soo happy that you wrote another chappy X3
i love it, can i ask how many visitors and views you've had ? :p
is this gonna turn into the 'they can't catch me MWAHAHAHAHA'
*dark was captured*
'curseword!' XD
also, having daisuke go to the cafe would be an idea XD
maybe they get a weird reading from him, you know if you would have a machine that tells you the weirdness from someone, you could read it of?
also you should do something with that guy who's able to turn into a cat, and let him spy on daisuke XD just giving ideas if its ok,
anyway im soo happy that you wrote another chappy X3
i love it, can i ask how many visitors and views you've had ? :p
9/2/2014 c3 Miqu
XD i love it!
nya! if you need some names for artwork that dark's gonna steal, let me know :p i love to help out any time :)
XD i love it!
nya! if you need some names for artwork that dark's gonna steal, let me know :p i love to help out any time :)
8/31/2014 c2 Miqu
XD another great chapter, i was in a really sad mood so i decided to read something to get my mind of it, im happy your story could make me smile again :)
i think that the yellow mew (forgot her name i havent watched that show in ages :p) would be clinging non stop on dark's leg (wether he wants it too or not XD) also letting her call him nii-san (or big brother) would be supersmegaspecialawesome cute :D
so.. is there gonna be anyone who's like gonna have a crush on dark?
XD another great chapter, i was in a really sad mood so i decided to read something to get my mind of it, im happy your story could make me smile again :)
i think that the yellow mew (forgot her name i havent watched that show in ages :p) would be clinging non stop on dark's leg (wether he wants it too or not XD) also letting her call him nii-san (or big brother) would be supersmegaspecialawesome cute :D
so.. is there gonna be anyone who's like gonna have a crush on dark?
8/28/2014 c1 Miqu
i love this story, be sure to continue, (i am a dnangel fan too (duh XD), so recently i posted my story)
im curious of what happens next :3
i love this story, be sure to continue, (i am a dnangel fan too (duh XD), so recently i posted my story)
im curious of what happens next :3