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5/15/2023 c11 3Diana9922
Well written, I love this story.
What will Bella's new relationship be?
When next?
2/2/2022 c13 asia.joanna.7334
Omg omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg Omg i love it Really love this chapter I hope you update really soon
6/22/2020 c10 JenDamn
Glad your updating again!
1/13/2020 c9 JenDamn
Wait. Is this going to be a triad involving Jacob?
11/14/2019 c8 JenDamn
Okay, so I'm thinking this vampire is either Victoria where James is her brother, or, I'm leaning more towards it being Didyme (sp?). I hope you continue this work, sorry about your mom.
10/18/2019 c8 Swanqueenator
Very interesting story so far! Im excited to see how the Denalis will play into all of this and who this mysterious "Red Eyes" is.

Cant wait for more!

Greetings!
10/15/2019 c1 Sharpeyes
OOOHHH FOR FUCKSAKE! Almost every Twilight Fanfic I find is garbage. This is supposed to be stories about VAMPIRES not fucking Romeu and Juliet lovestory bullshit! How about a ugly duckling kind of story where Bella becomes a vampire while the Cullens are way, becoming not only a beautiful vampire but also a much stronger and better character who doesn't need a hero or prince charming.

Here's 3 fanfics you should read it:

"No choice" by glasscannon
"A Life Once Lived" by micbb
"The Vampire's Alliance" by The VII Duchess
3/12/2019 c1 Guest
Chapters are too short and I’m often confused who’s POV it is. It’s frustrating to say the least, however, I do see some potential with the story line and where it’s going. Slow burn, so far. If it continues I’m not sure if I’ll continue reading.
3/8/2019 c3 2nashmeira
I really enjoy the direction the story is taking. Was a suprisef by the red eyes, a nice twist on the tale. I say that because there are so many story's that Bella gets turned, is all alone and she just never kills anyone. Not that I condone killing but story wise it always miffed me that at the end she just happen to have everything she needed because why not.

Looking forward to your next update.
3/2/2019 c11 TechnicolorGirl
I couldn't see any critiques by the user mentioned, but I understand flames can hurt. Sometimes the worst flames are the ones that have a point. You have what appears to be a clear idea for this story, but I think you need a beta-reader. There are also a lot of grammar, spelling, and formatting issues with this fic - as well as a lack of flow; there needs to be more details, more information to really be able to get into the fic, it jumps too fast and skims on the details. And your rant is almost the same length as the chapter, which is a bit disconcerting.
2/22/2019 c11 Guest
You aren’t giving nearly enough details for this story to make sense. This story had potential. And you need to update the info. This isn’t a Bella/Kate story.
2/22/2019 c7 Guest
So Kate knows she is supposed to meet her mate. But sleeps with someone else instead of actually meeting her mate? How does that make sense. Also you need to separate the lines of text better between different speakers. Your story is hard to follow. I think you are trying to introduce too much too early in your story.
2/10/2019 c1 merniizztat
Intersting ...
2/4/2019 c11 Natrosbel
Can’t wait for more
2/4/2019 c11 1Magic2488
Love Kate/Bella. Can't wait to read more
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