5/1/2017 c2 1Lilyluna43
And maybe a chapter about Dis and Thorins trip to the Shire? Their POV? And even better, a chapter about Thorin receiving this 'info' about Fili and Kili? You know, when he storms into their home, sees his nephews and leaves?
And maybe a chapter about Dis and Thorins trip to the Shire? Their POV? And even better, a chapter about Thorin receiving this 'info' about Fili and Kili? You know, when he storms into their home, sees his nephews and leaves?
1/25/2017 c3 Ava
Thank You for this, its nice to read from other peoples eyes...
oh I wanted to say, about all of your fics, I love how to name the titles of your chapters a foreshadow to the content! I keeps me excited and I often find myself looking at all the names and trying to figure out the story :)
Thank You for this, its nice to read from other peoples eyes...
oh I wanted to say, about all of your fics, I love how to name the titles of your chapters a foreshadow to the content! I keeps me excited and I often find myself looking at all the names and trying to figure out the story :)
1/31/2015 c1 10The Ghostly Horse
This is beautiful. And more than kinda heart wrenching. You write so well, I can feel what the characters feel. You bring them to life with mere words, and I envy you. I also thank you for this, so that others may read your work.
This is beautiful. And more than kinda heart wrenching. You write so well, I can feel what the characters feel. You bring them to life with mere words, and I envy you. I also thank you for this, so that others may read your work.
12/14/2014 c1 Bregin
This chapter is really good! I was just wondering if you could do a perspective on thorin for chapter 14 when he's telling kili that he sent in Bofur early because he had a bad feeling?
This chapter is really good! I was just wondering if you could do a perspective on thorin for chapter 14 when he's telling kili that he sent in Bofur early because he had a bad feeling?
8/30/2014 c3 Lorressme
Oh Thank you I'm the happiest person in the world I love this story and bonus is yeah :D
Oh Thank you I'm the happiest person in the world I love this story and bonus is yeah :D
8/29/2014 c3 61ncis-lady
Oh what a nice surprise to find these "missing moments"! Love it! You describe each individuals emotions really well, it's especially interesting to see what Thorin and Dis have gone through.
Oh what a nice surprise to find these "missing moments"! Love it! You describe each individuals emotions really well, it's especially interesting to see what Thorin and Dis have gone through.
8/28/2014 c3 4Tolkien Swag
I love this story. You are doing a fabulous job! There is literally like nothing wrong with it. I am captivated by your writing every. single. time.
I love this story. You are doing a fabulous job! There is literally like nothing wrong with it. I am captivated by your writing every. single. time.
8/28/2014 c1 jaymzNonoel
These were awesome! Really enjoyed reading all the different perspectives! :)
These were awesome! Really enjoyed reading all the different perspectives! :)
8/28/2014 c3 28Pericula Ludus
I had been wondering about that conversation. Not quite what I expected. I love a surprise! Oh Fíli... nobody is made for this sort of stuff, but hey, if it comes your way, you gotta deal with it, and I completely agree with Goldberry, Kíli does so quite nicely. I love the sibling dynamics you write. Like this being strong for somebody else accomplishes anything... I'm so glad you already posted the full story and we know that this is all resolved.
I had been wondering about that conversation. Not quite what I expected. I love a surprise! Oh Fíli... nobody is made for this sort of stuff, but hey, if it comes your way, you gotta deal with it, and I completely agree with Goldberry, Kíli does so quite nicely. I love the sibling dynamics you write. Like this being strong for somebody else accomplishes anything... I'm so glad you already posted the full story and we know that this is all resolved.
8/28/2014 c2 Pericula Ludus
I've heard reviews are good for sprained ankles...
Thorin finally cries. The poor darling. I'm glad he a least lets Dís see his tears. And that she has the good grace and experience to not say anything about it. Ahh, that just gets my headcanon all fired up. And then Thorin, Dís and Dwalin all crying together. Wonder if that has ever happened before - after the fall of Erebor, Azanulbizar or any time in between.
The last sentence is my favourite. Yes, I'm a fanfic masochist. There is something so desperately lonely about being the only one left of a family. Did I just say the only one? Ohhh no, and here goes, Dís... aahh... At least she has Thorin in this...
I've heard reviews are good for sprained ankles...
Thorin finally cries. The poor darling. I'm glad he a least lets Dís see his tears. And that she has the good grace and experience to not say anything about it. Ahh, that just gets my headcanon all fired up. And then Thorin, Dís and Dwalin all crying together. Wonder if that has ever happened before - after the fall of Erebor, Azanulbizar or any time in between.
The last sentence is my favourite. Yes, I'm a fanfic masochist. There is something so desperately lonely about being the only one left of a family. Did I just say the only one? Ohhh no, and here goes, Dís... aahh... At least she has Thorin in this...
8/28/2014 c3 4Moonlight900
yay, more! Through i already read 1 & 2 on your tumblr. site I hope you write an Fili POV from Chapter 25/26.
yay, more! Through i already read 1 & 2 on your tumblr. site I hope you write an Fili POV from Chapter 25/26.
8/28/2014 c3 105Neocolai
Aw, poor Fili. FILI! Trying to be strong so that Kili doesn't have to be. )8 Fili, you're a wonderful brother and we love you! (And Kili too, duh. Look after him like that more often.) I want Fili to not be in pain anymore ... what are you doing to me, Italian Hobbit?! You're making me allergic to angst! (Gimme more Kili angst! I love feeling sorry for him!) 8P
Aw, poor Fili. FILI! Trying to be strong so that Kili doesn't have to be. )8 Fili, you're a wonderful brother and we love you! (And Kili too, duh. Look after him like that more often.) I want Fili to not be in pain anymore ... what are you doing to me, Italian Hobbit?! You're making me allergic to angst! (Gimme more Kili angst! I love feeling sorry for him!) 8P
8/28/2014 c2 Neocolai
AAAAAAAAAAAAUGH! You outdid yourself, Italian Hobbit! I'm screaming and crying for Dis and I'm shouting a mental tirade at Kili for drugging his uncle! Thorin! So betrayed! D; (You write the best Thorin ever, I think - that perfect balance between stoic, rebuking uncle and loving father-figure.) I feel so awful for him in this arc! And I could feel Dis' despair when Dwalin mentioned the blood... okay, moving on from here. Too poignant! Especially the last line of this chapter. TOO MANY FEELS! (That's possible? The muses are petrified with amazement!) 8O
AAAAAAAAAAAAUGH! You outdid yourself, Italian Hobbit! I'm screaming and crying for Dis and I'm shouting a mental tirade at Kili for drugging his uncle! Thorin! So betrayed! D; (You write the best Thorin ever, I think - that perfect balance between stoic, rebuking uncle and loving father-figure.) I feel so awful for him in this arc! And I could feel Dis' despair when Dwalin mentioned the blood... okay, moving on from here. Too poignant! Especially the last line of this chapter. TOO MANY FEELS! (That's possible? The muses are petrified with amazement!) 8O